Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clearer and more natural: start with a direct topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and phrasing (e.g. "I used to read"). Keep it concise (max 4–5 sentences).

例: Yes, I enjoy reading. I used to read mainly financial books and self-improvement books because they helped me make better decisions in daily life. However, recently my busy work schedule has made it hard to find time to read.

提案: Give a clear preference sentence, then explain with specific reasons and linkers (e.g. "because", "so"). Improve grammar ("I prefer paper"), and avoid vague phrases like "my mind be". Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

例: I prefer reading on paper because screens distract me with notifications and social media. When I read physical books, I can focus better and retain information more easily.

提案: Answer directly: say when you need to read carefully and when skim reading is fine. Use clear linking words ("when", "because") and give specific examples (e.g. "work reports" vs "news headlines"). Avoid repetition and vague phrases. Limit to 3–4 sentences.

例: I need to read carefully when I study complex material, such as work reports or books about finance, because accuracy matters. On the other hand, I skim casually when reading news headlines or social media where I only need the main idea.

提案: State your preference clearly, then explain with one or two specific reasons using linking words ("because", "however"). Improve grammar ("I don't prefer scanning" → "I prefer detailed reading") and finish your thought ("meaning of the text"). Keep it concise.

例: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand the full meaning and context of a text. Scanning can be useful to locate a specific word quickly, but it often misses important details.

× Yes, very much. In my past I'm commonly used to read some financial books, some self educational book and many other book and help our daily life. But in nowadays I am totally work life not maintained so I'm not reading books.

✓ Yes, very much. In the past I commonly used to read some financial books, some self-help books and many other books that helped my daily life. But nowadays my work life is not well balanced, so I am not reading books.

Errors: incorrect present tense and auxiliary usage ('I'm commonly used to' should be 'I commonly used to' for past habit), incorrect articles and plural forms ('book' -> 'books'), incorrect adjective form ('self educational' -> 'self-help'), awkward phrase 'help our daily life' -> 'helped my daily life', incorrect time expression 'in nowadays' -> 'nowadays', wrong verb order 'I am totally work life not maintained' -> 'my work life is not well balanced'. Suggestion: Use 'used to' for past habits without 'I'm', make nouns plural when referring to multiple items, use established adjective forms, and use clear subject-verb constructions for states like 'my work life is not well balanced'.

× I'm prefer on paper because I on skyline I really distract from because of some notification and other activities, but when I was reading on paper, it's a very great helpful for me and my mind be.

✓ I prefer paper because when I use my phone I get easily distracted by notifications and other activities, but when I read on paper it is very helpful for me and my mind.

Errors: incorrect auxiliary 'I'm prefer' should be 'I prefer' (pronoun+verb), incorrect phrase 'on skyline' likely meant 'on my phone' or 'online/phone', awkward pronoun and verb structures 'I really distract from' -> 'I get easily distracted', wrong tense and dummy subject 'it's a very great helpful for me and my mind be' -> 'it is very helpful for me and my mind'. Suggestion: Use correct subject-verb order (I prefer), choose precise nouns ('phone' or 'online'), use 'get distracted' for passive experience, and simplify to 'it is very helpful for me'.

× When do you need to read carefully, and when not? It's a really read carefully because it's really helpful for my personal growth, because reading is some more talented skill for everyone. Reading is not just uh, just take paper and read something, but it's a very good sense of something understanding or outside the knowledge.

✓ I need to read carefully when the material is important, because careful reading is really helpful for my personal growth; reading is an important skill for everyone. Reading is not just taking a paper and reading something; it helps you understand ideas and gain outside knowledge.

Errors: 'It's a really read carefully' is ungrammatical — wrong word forms and tense; 'reading is some more talented skill' incorrect adjective and quantifier usage — should be 'an important skill'; 'just take paper and read something' wrong verb forms — should be 'taking a paper' or better 'picking up a paper'. Suggestion: Use clear noun phrases ('careful reading'), correct articles ('an important skill'), and gerunds or infinitives appropriately ('taking a paper' -> 'picking up a paper' or 'just reading something').

× Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading? No, no, I'm not generally prefer scanning because scanning is just too poor to find something to work on. Real you can search for anything important word, but actually reading is to understand the line or real meaning of the.

✓ No, I generally do not prefer scanning because scanning is usually insufficient to find what you need. You can search for important words with scanning, but actual reading is to understand the lines or the real meaning of the text.

Errors: 'I'm not generally prefer' uses incorrect modal/auxiliary structure — should be 'I do not prefer' (use auxiliary do for negation with simple present). 'Too poor to find something to work on' is awkward; use 'insufficient'. 'Real you can search' unclear — needs 'you can search for important words'. Final fragment 'real meaning of the.' incomplete — supply 'text' or 'passage'. Suggestion: Use proper negation with auxiliary 'do', replace vague adjectives with precise ones ('insufficient'), and complete noun phrases ('real meaning of the text').