Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然、直接，并注意语法和用词准确性。可以先用一句主题句表明喜欢阅读，再用一两句具体原因支持，避免重复和语法错误。例如纠正“board my horizon”为“broaden my horizons”，“I eyesight”应删除或改为“improve my eyesight”并确认事实。回答不超过五句，使用连接词如“because”或“and”使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I enjoy reading. It broadens my horizons and helps me learn new things, which contributes to my self-improvement. I also find it relaxing after a busy day.

提案: 回答较明确，但表达不够流畅，有语法和句子结构问题。先给出明确立场（I prefer paper），然后用两条简洁的支持理由并用连接词连接。避免不必要的插入（如“where was the studying school?”），注意动词形式（used paper to read → used paper to read）。

例: I prefer reading on paper. I grew up studying from printed books, so reading on paper has become a habit. Also, I find it easier to concentrate with a physical book than on a screen.

提案: 回答内容正确但混乱、重复严重且时态错误（混用过去和现在）。应使用现在时回答普遍情况，句子要简短清晰。先给主题句（I need to read carefully when...），然后给具体原因并举例。避免重复的填充词。

例: I need to read carefully when I'm studying for exams or preparing important documents because mistakes could have serious consequences. For casual reading, like news or novels, I usually skim unless something catches my attention.

提案: 这是一个不错的回答，表达了结合两种阅读方法的观点，但有语法小错误和冗长。可先用一句主题句（I prefer to combine scanning and detailed reading），然后用一两个连贯的举例说明步骤。注意连词和时态，删除多余词语。

例: I prefer to combine scanning and detailed reading. First I skim the book to understand its structure and main ideas, and then I read sections in detail to grasp the nuances and specific events.

× Yes, I like because reading can board my horizon and I eyesight, meanwhile I could gain a lot of knowledge from it and it's good for my self improvement.

✓ Yes, I like reading because it can broaden my horizons and improve my eyesight; meanwhile I can gain a lot of knowledge from it, and it's good for my self-improvement.

句中使用了不正确的词（如"board"应为"broaden"，"horizon"应为复数形式"horizons"），以及名词与动词搭配错误（"I eyesight"应改为动词短语"improve my eyesight"）。此外，连词和标点需要调整以提高句子的流畅性。建议：记住常见动词搭配（broaden horizons, improve eyesight），并用适当的连接词和标点分隔并列信息。

× This is mainly because where was the studying school? I always used the paper to reading instead of using the screen.

✓ This is mainly because when I was studying at school I always used paper to read instead of using a screen.

原句中时态和词序混乱（"where was the studying school?" 不合逻辑），并且动词形式错误（"used the paper to reading" 中不应在不定式后接动名词）。主谓需一致并使用正确不定式结构："used paper to read"。建议：用正确的时间状语从句（when I was studying at school）并使用不定式表目的或习惯动作。

× So I gradually formed the habit of using paper. Another reason is it can make me more concentrated during the reading process.

✓ So I gradually formed the habit of using paper. Another reason is that it helps me concentrate more during the reading process.

"make me more concentrated" 是不自然的表达。应使用动词短语"help me concentrate"或形容词短语"make me more focused"。同时在正式句子中在"is"后加从属连词"that"更自然。建议：用固定搭配如"help + 人 + 动词原形"或"make + 人 + 形容词"。

× Well, when I was having a test or preparing some important documents, I I have to read carefully and this is because the content of it is is essential and is is is and I don't want to make any mistake during the process and the other situations probably not.

✓ Well, when I was taking a test or preparing some important documents, I had to read carefully because the content was essential and I didn't want to make any mistakes; in other situations, probably not.

原句时态混用（"was having" 和后面的"have to"），应在描述过去的情景时保持过去时（was taking, had to, was essential, didn't want）。此外存在重复词（"is is is"）和单复数错误（"any mistake" 更自然用复数 mistakes）。建议：描述过去的事件时统一用过去时，避免重复词并使用复数以表示泛指。

× Umm. It's hard for me to say which one is better because I always try to combine them together. For example, when I read a book I will scan it. At first I so I wouldn't know the overall structure of the book. Then I will try to have a detailed reading so I could know the every detail in this story.

✓ Umm. It's hard for me to say which one is better because I always try to combine them. For example, when I read a book I will scan it first to understand the overall structure. Then I will read it in detail so I can know every detail of the story.

原句句子结构混乱，例如"At first I so I wouldn't know" 无意义，"have a detailed reading" 不自然，应改为"read it in detail"。时态也应保持一致，描述习惯性动作用一般现在时（will/ can 或一般现在时），且介词搭配需正确（"detail of the story"）。建议：用清晰的时间顺序连接词（first, then），使用自然动词搭配（scan to get the overall structure; read in detail）。