Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, I), correct verb forms and give one or two brief supporting details with linking words. Keep under 5 sentences.

例: Yes, I enjoy reading. I usually read once a week because I am busy with my studies, but I always try to read more at the weekend when I have free time.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence and two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and improve grammar (e.g. "looking at screens for a long time").

例: I prefer reading on paper. Firstly, looking at screens for a long time makes my eyes tired, and secondly, paper books give me a quieter, more comfortable experience.

提案: Structure your answer with a clear contrast and use linking words (e.g. "however", "while"). Correct grammar and be specific about situations. Avoid vague phrases like "follow your step."

例: You need to read carefully during exams because you must understand details and avoid mistakes. However, during lectures or leisure reading you can read more quickly to get the general idea.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence and explain both choices with clear reasons and linking words. Fix grammar ("it depends"), avoid hesitations and be specific about when you use each method.

例: It depends on the purpose. For tests I prefer scanning to quickly locate specific information, whereas for leisure reading I choose detailed reading to enjoy the content and understand it fully.

× Yes, absolutely. Uh, most of the time I read once a week because I also have some studies, so I don't have many times to read, but if I be in the weekend, I I will do it absolutely.

✓ Yes, absolutely. Most of the time I read once a week because I also have studies, so I don't have much time to read, but if I am free on the weekend, I will definitely do it.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'be' instead of 'am' (present tense and subject 'I'); 'have some studies' is unnatural — use 'have studies' or 'am studying'; 'many times' should be 'much time' (uncountable noun); 'absolutely' at end replaced with 'definitely' for naturalness. Suggestion: use correct present simple for habitual actions and 'am' for state descriptions; use 'much time' with uncountable 'time'; use 'free on the weekend' to express availability.

× Definitely paper because I look at screen if a long time my eyes will feel very tired and it also very harmful. So I I most use paper book to read and also use paperwork to read have a a quiet feeling.

✓ Definitely paper because if I look at a screen for a long time my eyes feel very tired and it is also very harmful. So I mostly use paper books to read because they give a quiet feeling.

Errors: missing articles 'a screen'; wrong preposition 'if a long time' should be 'for a long time'; missing verb 'feel' tense simplified; 'it also very harmful' missing verb 'is'; 'most use' should be 'mostly use' (adverb); 'paper book' -> 'paper books' (plural); 'use paperwork to read' is incorrect word choice — 'paperwork' means documents; awkward clause 'have a quiet feeling' -> 'give a quiet feeling'. Suggestion: include necessary articles, use 'for' with time durations, use adverbs correctly, and choose correct nouns ('paper books').

× I think when like test, when the test like IO test reading it, it should be very careful. But if like in the lecture, uh, in the free time reading, I think that just can follow your speed to read and follow your step.

✓ I think when you take a test, especially a reading test, you should be very careful. But in a lecture or when reading in your free time, you can read at your own pace.

Errors: awkward and incorrect phrases 'when like test' -> 'when you take a test'; 'IO test' unclear, interpreted as 'reading test'; 'it should be very careful' incorrect—use 'you should be very careful' (subject needed); 'just can follow your speed to read and follow your step' is ungrammatical and wordy—use 'read at your own pace'. Suggestion: use clear subject, appropriate verbs (should) for advice, and concise natural phrases like 'at your own pace'.

× It's depends on what type of reading. If in the test I would prefer like scan reading because test I need to find a detailed answer to answer a question. But if like free time reading I think it just it can just prefer like oh oh sorry.

✓ It depends on the type of reading. In a test I would prefer skim reading because I need to find specific answers. But during free-time reading I prefer relaxed reading.

Errors: 'It's depends' — auxiliary 'does' unnecessary; correct form 'It depends' (subject-verb agreement). 'scan reading' wrong term; correct 'skim reading' or 'scanning' depending on meaning; 'because test I need to find a detailed answer to answer a question' is repetitive and ungrammatical — use 'because I need to find specific answers' or 'specific information'. The final fragment is incomplete and self-corrected; replace with clear contrast 'during free-time reading I prefer relaxed reading'. Suggestion: use correct idioms 'It depends', choose correct reading technique terms ('skim'/'scan'), and avoid repetition.