Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid ums and repetitive phrases. Correct plural and article errors (e.g., "comic books", "two books a month"). Use a linking word to connect reason.

例: Yes, I enjoy reading. I mostly read comic books because they help me relax after a busy day, and I usually finish about two books a month.

提案: Give a clear direct answer and logical reasons. Use correct vocabulary and avoid confusing phrases. Say "paper" not "or paper" and avoid unrelated words. Provide one or two precise reasons (e.g., smell, ability to highlight) with linking words like "because" or "so".

例: I prefer reading on paper because I enjoy the smell of books and I can easily highlight important passages, so I feel more focused and energetic.

提案: Structure the response with a clear topic sentence and specific examples. Fix grammar ("when I have to give a presentation", "I read carefully the documents"). Use a linking word to contrast times when careful reading is needed and when it is not.

例: I need to read carefully when I have to give a presentation or study for exams because I must understand details; however, I don't read carefully when I browse social media or light articles for leisure.

提案: Give a clear preference and explain with specific reasons, using correct vocabulary: "detailed reading" and "skimming" (not "skinny"). Use linking words to explain exceptions (e.g., "but when short on time, I skim"). Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

例: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand new material; however, when I'm short on time I usually skim texts to get the main points.

× Mostly I read comics book uh, it made me feel relaxed and reduce my stress after a busy day.

✓ Mostly I read comic books; they make me feel relaxed and reduce my stress after a busy day.

The student mixed singular and plural forms: 'comics book' is incorrect. Use plural 'comic books' for general habit. Also verb agreement: 'it made me' should be present tense 'they make me' to match 'I read' (present habitual). Use a semicolon or conjunction to connect clauses. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× I always read uh two book in every month.

✓ I always read two books every month.

Use plural 'books' after the numeral 'two'. Also remove redundant article 'in' before 'every month' and keep present simple for habitual action. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× I prefer to read or paper, uh, because I like smell the both men, uh, it made me uh, feel energetic and uh, had to highlight the new was in Pocahontas.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because I like the smell of it; it makes me feel energetic and I can highlight new parts in the book.

Use preposition 'on' with 'read' (read on paper). 'The smell of it' uses correct preposition and singular pronoun for 'paper'. 'Both men' is incorrect and irrelevant; likely intended 'the smell of it'. Verb tense and agreement: 'it made me' -> 'it makes me' to match habitual preference. 'Had to highlight the new was in Pocahontas' is unclear; corrected to 'I can highlight new parts in the book.' This addresses incorrect preposition and pronoun usage and sentence clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× So that's why I prefer, uh, really.

✓ So that's why I really prefer paper.

Place adverb 'really' before main verb 'prefer' for correct adverb placement and clearer idiomatic word order. Maintain present simple for preference. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I need to read carefully, uh, where I has am is there or I have to present, uh, I have to prepare presentation at school.

✓ I need to read carefully when I am presenting or when I have to prepare a presentation at school.

Use 'when' to introduce time clauses instead of 'where'. Correct verb 'am presenting' for ongoing event and 'have to prepare a presentation' with article 'a'. Remove incorrect words 'has is there'. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× Uh, this time I always read carefully the document.

✓ At that time I always read the document carefully.

Use 'at that time' for a specific occasion; place adverb 'carefully' after the object or before the verb depending on emphasis. Include definite article 'the' if referring to a specific document. Adjust tense/phrase for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× That's fine. I uh, that's all.

✓ That's fine. That's all.

Remove filler 'I uh' which creates a fragment. Keep concise sentence. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Are mostly I prefer uh detailed reading because uh it it help me to understand the new work, but I don't have time.

✓ Mostly I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand new material, but I don't always have time.

Move 'mostly' to the start. Remove duplicate 'it it'. Use 'helps' for third person singular agreement with 'it'. Use 'understand new material' instead of 'the new work' for natural phrasing and add 'always' to clarify time constraint. Grammar problem type ID: 27

× I want to know about the main point.

✓ I want to know the main points.

Use plural 'main points' when referring to key ideas in a text. 'Know about' is less direct; 'know' is sufficient. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× I read skinny. I prefer skinny.

✓ I skim; I prefer skimming.

'Skinny' is incorrect word choice. The correct verbs/nouns for quickly reading to get main ideas are 'skim' (verb) and 'skimming' (noun/gerund). Match grammatical forms to previous sentence: 'I skim' or 'I prefer skimming.' Grammar problem type ID: 8