Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cải thiện lưu loát và ngữ pháp: tránh tiếng nãn (umm), sửa cấu trúc câu và dùng thì đúng (ví dụ: 'to prepare' thay vì 'to preparing'), rút gọn câu để tự nhiên hơn. Bổ sung một câu chủ đề rõ ràng và một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể, không quá 5 câu. Ngoài ra cải thiện nối ý bằng liên từ đơn giản như 'because' hoặc 'for example'.

例: Yes, I enjoy reading because it helps me prepare for my graduation exams and improve my English for the IELTS. For example, I often read IELTS practice tests and vocabulary lists to build my skills.

提案: Cải thiện từ vựng chính xác và cấu trúc câu: dùng động từ đúng (e.g., 'prefer reading on paper') và tránh lặp từ. Tổ chức câu: nêu chủ đề, giải thích lý do, rồi đưa ví dụ cụ thể. Dùng liên từ để mạch lạc (e.g., 'because', 'while').

例: I prefer reading on paper when I study because I can concentrate better and retain information. However, I usually read news and short articles on a screen for convenience.

提案: Cải thiện rõ ràng ý và ngữ pháp: tránh sai động từ (ví dụ 'learning alerts' và 'report on English' không phù hợp). Nên nói rõ thời điểm cần đọc kỹ (e.g., 'exam materials', 'instructions') và khi nào skim. Dùng cấu trúc đối lập với liên từ như 'but' hoặc 'whereas' để so sánh. Tránh tiếng ồm và câu rời rạc.

例: I need to read carefully when I study exam materials or official instructions, because missing details can affect my grades. In contrast, I don't read carefully when I scroll social media or messages, since those are usually informal and brief.

提案: Cải thiện ngữ pháp nhỏ và sự mạch lạc: sửa collocation ('detailed reading' thay vì 'reading on detail'), dùng danh từ/động từ phù hợp (e.g., 'analyze each paragraph'). Có thể thêm một liên kết ngắn để làm rõ lý do và một ví dụ cụ thể như bạn đã làm. Giữ dưới 5 câu.

例: To be honest, I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand ideas more deeply. For example, when I read a work article, I analyze each paragraph carefully so I can remember the key points.

× Yes, I really like reading because I can umm, gain more knowledge in order to preparing for my graduation exam, especially for the IELTS.

✓ Yes, I really like reading because I can gain more knowledge to prepare for my graduation exam, especially for the IELTS.

The phrase 'in order to preparing' mixes 'in order to' (which must be followed by base verb) with a gerund. Use the base form 'prepare'. Also 'can umm, gain' should be streamlined to 'can gain'. Suggestion: remove filler 'umm' in formal answers and use 'in order to' + base verb or simply 'to' + base verb: 'to prepare'. This keeps present ability tense consistent.

× I often read IELTS both to improve my English skills.

✓ I often read IELTS materials to improve my English skills.

The noun 'IELTS' needs a qualifier; using 'IELTS' alone is vague. Add a quantifier or noun like 'materials' or 'practice tests'. This clarifies meaning. Suggestion: say 'IELTS materials' or 'IELTS practice tests'.

× I refer to it on the paper when I study English and need to read book because I like read on the paper and and I feel more concentration if I read a book and when I read on the screen I refer to read news or something like.

✓ I prefer paper when I study English and need to read a book because I like reading on paper and I can concentrate more; when I read on a screen I read the news or something like that.

Multiple preposition and verb form errors: 'refer to it on the paper' is incorrect; use 'prefer paper' or 'prefer reading on paper'. 'read book' needs an article 'a book'. 'like read' should be 'like reading'. 'feel more concentration' is unnatural; use 'concentrate more' or 'have more concentration'. 'refer to read news' is wrong; use 'read the news' or 'read news'. Suggestion: simplify to 'I prefer paper... I like reading on paper... when I read on a screen I read the news'.

× When I need to read carefully is when I learning alerts, especially for the IELTS, I often report on English in order to enroll my English skills.

✓ I need to read carefully when I study alerts, especially for the IELTS; I often practice English to improve my English skills.

'When I need to read carefully is when I learning alerts' has tense and structure errors: 'learning' should be 'study' and sentence order is wrong. 'I often report on English' is incorrect; use 'practice English' or 'work on my English'. 'in order to enroll my English skills' is wrong; 'enroll' is not appropriate—use 'improve'. Suggestion: use present simple 'I need' and 'I study' and 'practice to improve'.

× And when I not read carefully is when I scroll the news on the phone. Uh, when I read my messenger.

✓ When I do not read carefully is when I scroll through the news on my phone or check messages on Messenger.

Negation requires auxiliary 'do': 'I do not read'. 'scroll the news' is better as 'scroll through the news'. 'when I read my messenger' is unclear; use 'check messages on Messenger'. Suggestion: use 'do not' for present simple negation and appropriate verbs 'scroll through' and 'check'.

× To be honest, I prefer reading on detail because I can focus better and understand the material more deeply.

✓ To be honest, I prefer detailed reading because I can focus better and understand the material more deeply.

'reading on detail' is incorrect collocation. Use 'detailed reading' or 'reading in detail'. Suggestion: say 'I prefer detailed reading' or 'I prefer to read in detail'.

× For instance, when I read an article for work, I take my time to analyze it paragraph so I can remember the key points.

✓ For instance, when I read an article for work, I take my time to analyze each paragraph so I can remember the key points.

Missing determiner 'each' or 'the' before 'paragraph'. Use 'analyze each paragraph' or 'analyze the paragraphs'. Suggestion: include 'each' to indicate analyzing paragraphs individually.