Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, dùng cấu trúc câu chính + 1–2 câu bổ trợ, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ sai. Hãy sửa các lỗi phát âm/viết (novant → novels), sử dụng thì đúng và lựa chọn từ phù hợp (e.g. "I find the characters emotionally engaging"). Ngoài ra giảm độ dài không rõ ràng và tổ chức ý: nêu lý do cụ thể vì sao thích đọc và ví dụ sách/nhân vật.

例: Yes, I enjoy reading. I often read novels because I find their plots and characters emotionally engaging. For example, I like contemporary fiction that explores relationships, which helps me understand different perspectives.

提案: Câu trả lời đã nêu ý chính nhưng cần cấu trúc mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp (e.g. "prefer reading on a screen to reading on paper"). Thêm một lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ ngắn. Hãy dùng liên từ để nối ý (because, so, for example).

例: I prefer reading on a screen to reading on paper because it's more convenient to carry many books on my smartphone. For example, when commuting I can quickly open an e-book and continue reading.

提案: Cần diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và trật tự từ. Nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng: khi nào cần đọc kỹ và khi nào không. Thêm ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: tài liệu học thuật vs tin tức dễ hiểu) và liên từ để liên kết ý (for example, while, because).

例: I need to read carefully when studying scientific or academic texts because they contain technical information that I must fully understand. In contrast, I don't read carefully when browsing simple news articles or short stories.

提案: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và chứa nhiều từ sai (put up, deteriorating). Nên nói rõ bạn thường sử dụng cả hai và nêu khi nào dùng mỗi phương pháp, dùng cấu trúc nối ý (however, because) và ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh câu dài lộn xộn; tối đa 3 câu.

例: I use both scanning and detailed reading depending on my goal. I scan to get an overview or find specific information quickly, but I read in detail when I need to fully understand complex ideas or study for exams.

× Of course I really like reading.

✓ Of course, I really like reading.

Commas separate introductory adverbs from the main clause for clarity. Add a comma after 'Of course' to improve reading flow.

× I often read a novant books because when I read this I feel very interesting in their story and their characters show me how to do this so emotion.

✓ I often read novels because when I read them I feel very interested in their stories and their characters show me how to express emotions.

Replace 'novant books' with correct plural noun 'novels' (spelling and word choice). Use pronoun 'them' to refer to books. Use adjective 'interested' (not 'interesting') to describe the reader's feeling. Use plural 'stories' to agree with plural noun. 'Show me how to do this so emotion' is unclear; correct to 'show me how to express emotions.' Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct word choice.

× In my opinion I prefer to read on the screen than read on paper because when I read any book in my smartphone I can bring it to outside because it's very easy and I can read a lot of many type of book.

✓ In my opinion I prefer to read on a screen rather than on paper because when I read a book on my smartphone I can take it outside; it's very convenient and I can read many types of books.

Use 'on a screen' and 'rather than on paper' for correct comparative structure. Use 'on my smartphone' instead of 'in'. 'Bring it to outside' should be 'take it outside'. Replace redundant 'a lot of many type of book' with 'many types of books'. 'Convenient' better than 'easy' in this context.

× I think I need to read carefully when I read a science book, take both because it has it has many new knowledge. I must read carefully to under deeply understand this and I can.

✓ I think I need to read carefully when I read a science book because it contains a lot of new knowledge. I must read carefully to deeply understand it.

Remove unclear phrase 'take both'. Use 'contains' instead of 'has' and 'a lot of new knowledge' for uncountable noun. Use adverb 'deeply' before 'understand' and replace 'this' with pronoun 'it'. Remove redundant 'and I can'.

× I prefer put up scanning and deteriorating because scanning bring me a A about the knowledge of this book and detail give me understand deeply in the content of this book when I read.

✓ I prefer scanning rather than detailed reading because scanning gives me an overview of the book's content, while detailed reading helps me understand the content more deeply.

Replace 'put up' with correct comparative 'rather than'. 'Deteriorating' is incorrect; use 'detailed reading'. Use 'gives' to agree with singular 'scanning' and 'an overview' instead of 'a A'. Use 'helps me understand...more deeply' for clear meaning and correct adverb placement.