Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap daha doğal ve akıcı olmalı; dolgu kelimeleri (uh, um) azaltılmalı ve doğrudan konu cümlesiyle başlanmalı. Ayrıca destekleyici detayı spesifik örneklerle zenginle ve cümle sayısını 3-4 arasında tut. Örneğin hangi türleri sevdiğini ve nedenlerini belirt.

例: Yes, I enjoy reading very much. I especially like contemporary and historical fiction because they help me relax and learn about different cultures. For example, last month I finished a novel set in 19th-century England that taught me a lot about social history.

提案: Cevap net ve doğrudan olmalı; gereksiz ifadeler ve konuşma dışı cümleler çıkarılmalı. Tercihini açıkla ve bir veya iki neden/situasyon belirt. Bağlaç kullanarak mantıklı ilişki kur.

例: I prefer reading on paper because I find it easier to concentrate and I remember information better. However, I use a screen for newspapers and articles when I need something quickly.

提案: Cevabı daha yapılandırılmış ver; konu cümlesi kur ve nedenleri ayrıntılandır. Zaman ifadeleri kullan ve karşılaştırma yap. Dilbilgisi (I read carefully / I do not) düzelt.

例: I need to read carefully when the material is important, such as work reports or study texts, because accuracy matters. On the other hand, I skim emails or social media posts when I'm in a hurry and don't need every detail.

提案: Cevabı daha açık ve tam cümlelerle ifade et; kısa bir neden ve örnek ver. Bağlaçlarla mantığı güçlendir (because, so, for example). Kelime seçiminde basit ve uygun kelimeler kullan.

例: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand the information and remember it better. For example, when studying for exams I read textbooks slowly and take notes to ensure I grasp key concepts.

× I prefer read a paper.

✓ I prefer to read on paper.

The student omitted the infinitive marker and used an incorrect article. Use 'prefer to read' (infinitive) or 'prefer reading'. Also use 'on paper' to indicate the medium rather than 'a paper'. Suggestion: say 'I prefer to read on paper.'

× Uh, do you too good? Hello guys for development, human development.

✓ (This appears unrelated; remove or rephrase.) For example: 'I also like reading for personal development.'

The original contains fragmented and unrelated phrases. It seems the student tried to say they read for human development. Recommend a clear, grammatically complete sentence: 'I also like reading for personal development.' Use subject + verb + object structure and avoid colloquial fillers.

× I need to carefully.

✓ I need to read carefully.

'Carefully' is an adverb modifying a verb, but the verb 'read' is missing. The correct structure is verb + adverb. Suggestion: 'I need to read carefully.'

× For example, when I have time I read careful, when when I don't have any time, I am not.

✓ For example, when I have time I read carefully; when I don't have any time, I don't.

'Careful' is an adjective; the adverb 'carefully' is required to modify 'read'. Also the second clause lacks a verb; use 'I don't' or 'I don't read' to complete it. Remove duplicate 'when'. Suggestion: 'When I have time I read carefully; when I don't have any time, I don't.'

× My point of view will I prefer detailed reading because it's. Get it For more information.

✓ In my view, I prefer detailed reading because it gives more information.

The original has incorrect word order 'will I prefer' and fragmented clauses 'it's. Get it'. Use a complete clause: 'it gives more information' or 'it provides more detail'. Start with a discourse phrase 'In my view' and keep subject-verb-object order.