Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng, nhưng cần ngắn gọn hơn và tránh lặp từ. Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, rồi thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể có liên kết bằng từ nối (for example, also, but). Chú ý cách dùng ngữ pháp (ví dụ "that's really novels" nên là "mainly novels") và giữ tối đa 4-5 câu.

例: Yes, I enjoy reading, mainly novels, because they help me relax and improve my English. For example, I read for about 30 minutes before bed most nights. I also read news articles online occasionally to stay informed.

提案: Ý chính rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi về lựa chọn từ và cấu trúc câu. Tránh câu thừa như "Well" hoặc số liệu không rõ ràng ("my 2 highlight passages"). Nên sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt cụ thể hơn (ví dụ: "I highlight passages and make notes"). Dùng liên từ để nối ý (for example, so).

例: I prefer reading on paper because I can concentrate better and avoid eye strain. For example, when I read novels I highlight key passages and make notes in the margins, so it's easier to review later.

提案: Nội dung hợp lý nhưng có vài lỗi từ vựng và chính tả ("contact" nên là "contracts"). Câu mở đầu nên trực tiếp hơn và dùng ví dụ cụ thể, mạch lạc. Sử dụng liên từ để tạo tính logic (because, for example, so).

例: I read carefully when the information is important, such as contracts or medicine instructions, because mistakes can have serious consequences. For example, before signing a retail contract I always check the dates, fees and terms carefully.

提案: Ý trả lời rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và phần bị đứt câu ("For example, I use."). Cần sửa thì động từ ("help"→"helps", "need"→"needs") và nối các ý bằng liên từ (then, if). Giữ câu ngắn gọn, trực tiếp và đầy đủ.

例: I prefer scanning because it is faster and helps me find the main points quickly. For example, I usually scan news articles and emails to pick up important information, and then I read in detail only if something needs more attention.

× Well, yes, I enjoy reading, and that's really novels because they help me relax and improve my English.

✓ Well, yes, I enjoy reading, and I especially like novels because they help me relax and improve my English.

The phrase 'that's really novels' uses an incorrect pronoun/reference and is awkward. Replace with 'I especially like novels' to clearly link the speaker's preference to novels. Suggestion: use explicit subjects and modifiers (I especially, I particularly) to express preference. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 12)

× For example, I usually read for about 30 minutes before bed, and I sometimes read news articles online too.

✓ For example, I usually read for about 30 minutes before bed, and I sometimes read news articles online too.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change required. It uses present simple to describe habitual actions appropriately. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 10)

× Well, I prefer reading on paper because it is easier to concentrate and I don't get eye strain.

✓ Well, I prefer reading on paper because it is easier to concentrate and I don't get eye strain.

This sentence is correct. Pronouns and references are used appropriately. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 12)

× For example, I usually read novels and print and I take my 2 highlight passages and make notes.

✓ For example, I usually read novels and printed materials, and I highlight passages and make notes.

The original has awkward structure and incorrect word forms: 'print' should be 'printed materials' and 'I take my 2 highlight passages' is ungrammatical. Use parallel verb forms 'highlight passages and make notes.' Also remove the numeral '2' unless specifying 'two,' but here it is unnecessary. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 26)

× Well, I usually read carefully when I need to understand something important like contact or medicine instructions, because mistakes can cause big problems.

✓ Well, I usually read carefully when I need to understand something important like contract or medicine instructions, because mistakes can cause big problems.

The word 'contact' is likely a typo for 'contract.' This is a word choice error rather than a preposition mistake, but it affects meaning. Correct to 'contract.' Also 'medicine instructions' could be 'medication instructions' for clarity. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 11)

× For example, I always check details and dates before signing a retail agreement.

✓ For example, I always check the details and dates before signing a retail agreement.

Adding the definite article 'the' before 'details and dates' makes the noun phrase specific and natural in this context. Use 'the' when referring to particular details and dates relevant to the agreement. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 22)

× Well, I prefer scanning because it is faster and help me find the main points quickly.

✓ Well, I prefer scanning because it is faster and helps me find the main points quickly.

Subject-verb agreement error: with singular subject 'it' the verb must be 'helps' not 'help.' This falls under present participle/verb form and agreement. Use third person singular form 'helps.' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 10)

× For example, I use. I usually scan news articles and emails to pick up important information and then I read in detail only if something need more attention.

✓ For example, I usually scan news articles and emails to pick up important information, and then I read in detail only if something needs more attention.

Remove the fragment 'I use.' which is incomplete. Also correct verb agreement: 'something needs' (third person singular). Add a comma before 'and then' for clarity. These changes fix sentence fragments and verb agreement. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 26)