Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your reply a clear, concise statement and then give one or two specific supporting reasons. Avoid sentence fragments and repetition; connect ideas with simple linking words (because, so, and). Use correct grammar for verb forms and pronouns.

例: Yes, I enjoy reading because it helps me learn new vocabulary that I can use when speaking with others. For example, reading short news articles has taught me useful expressions that I now use in conversations.

提案: Good structure and clear reasons. Improve accuracy by using plural/singular forms and more precise linking words. Add one brief example to make it more specific and keep answer within 2–3 sentences.

例: I prefer reading on paper because it's more comfortable and I can easily take notes on words I don't understand. For instance, when studying a novel I mark unfamiliar words and write translations in the margin.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence and then explain briefly with correct grammar. Avoid choppy sentences and unclear pronoun references. Use linking words (because, so that) to show reason and include a short example of what you do to avoid mistakes.

例: I need to read very carefully during examinations because missing key words can lead to wrong answers. So, I underline important terms and re-read questions to make sure I understand them.

提案: Start with a clear statement about preference, then give specific conditions and a brief example. Fix repetition and avoid ending sentences abruptly; use linking words like 'however' or 'for example' properly.

例: It depends on the situation: I use scanning to find key information quickly, but I do detailed reading when accuracy matters, for example when answering exam questions so I don't miss important details.

× Yes I do this is because really help me to know new words so it really helpful for me to.

✓ Yes, I do. This is because it really helps me to learn new words, so it is really helpful for me.

The sentence has pronoun omissions and verb agreement issues. 'This' needs a verb clause: 'it really helps' (third person singular). Use 'learn' instead of 'to know new words' for natural collocation. Add 'it is' before 'really helpful'. Also add punctuation and commas to separate ideas. Suggested improvement: include subject pronouns and match verbs to subjects; use natural verb collocations like 'learn new words'.

× Use it when I need to communicate with others.

✓ I use them when I need to communicate with others.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and has incorrect reference: 'it' is ambiguous (should refer to 'words' or 'vocabulary' which is plural). Also 'use' needs subject 'I'. Change pronoun to 'them' to agree with 'new words'. Suggested improvement: ensure pronouns clearly refer to the correct noun and include the subject.

× Other than that would you also.

✓ Other than that, I would also say it helps me improve my thinking and language skills.

The original fragment is incomplete and unclear. It lacks a main verb and object. Provide a complete clause that fits the context: stating another benefit. Suggested improvement: avoid sentence fragments by ensuring each sentence has a subject and a verb and expresses a full idea.

× For me, I prefer to read on paper because it's more comfortable and I can easily take note on word that I don't really understand.

✓ For me, I prefer to read on paper because it's more comfortable and I can easily take notes on words that I don't really understand.

Errors: 'take note' should be plural 'take notes' (idiomatic), 'on word' should be 'on words' (plural) and missing relative plural agreement; 'that' introduces a relative clause modifying 'words'. Suggested improvement: use plural forms when referring to multiple items and use common collocations like 'take notes'.

× The most important time for me to read carefully is during examination.

✓ The most important time for me to read carefully is during an examination.

Missing article before 'examination'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. Use 'an examination' or 'exams' depending on meaning. Suggested improvement: include appropriate articles ('a' or 'the') for singular countable nouns.

× This is because I can. Miss. Reading the important keyword so to avoid this thing.

✓ This is because I can miss important keywords, so I try to avoid that.

Original has sentence fragments and incorrect word order. 'Miss reading the important keyword' is awkward; better: 'miss important keywords'. Use 'so' to link clauses and 'avoid that' as pronoun. Correct verb form 'can miss'. Suggested improvement: combine fragments into full sentences, use plural 'keywords' and natural phrasing.

× For me it depends on the situation.

✓ For me, it depends on the situation.

Missing comma after introductory phrase. This is minor punctuation for clarity. Suggested improvement: add commas after introductory phrases.

× For for example during the examination, I prefer to do both because it's really important for you to work carefully during the examination to avoid.

✓ For example, during an examination I prefer to use both scanning and detailed reading because it's important to work carefully to avoid mistakes.

Original contains repetition 'For for', missing object for 'do both', awkward pronoun 'you' and an incomplete final phrase 'to avoid'. Provide clear objects: 'scanning and detailed reading' and complete the purpose 'to avoid mistakes'. Suggested improvement: avoid repetition, specify what 'both' refers to, maintain consistent pronouns (use 'I' when speaking about personal preference), and complete the purpose clause.