Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, like), correct verb forms and article usage, and keep supporting details specific and brief. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, because).

例: Yes, I really enjoy reading. It helps me unwind after a busy day and also improves my vocabulary and language skills. For example, I usually read a few pages before bed to relax and learn new words.

提案: Give a direct answer first, then provide two clear specific reasons using correct grammar and fewer hesitations. Replace vague phrases with precise language and use linking words (because, so, therefore).

例: I prefer reading on paper because I enjoy the tactile feeling of holding a book, and I find it easier to remember details when I read from paper. For these reasons, paper books help me focus better than screens.

提案: Use clearer contrast and correct word choice. Provide a concise topic sentence that contrasts the two situations, then give specific examples and a brief reason for each. Avoid informal or incorrect vocabulary (e.g., 'comedics').

例: I need to read carefully when dealing with important documents, such as contracts or exam instructions, because missing a detail could cause serious problems. In contrast, I usually skim social media posts or casual messages since they are informal and less critical.

提案: Answer directly then explain the conditions with clear linking words (if, when). Fix grammar (subject-verb agreement) and make sentences concise. Provide specific examples of when you would use each reading method.

例: It depends on my purpose: when I need to understand a book in depth, I read carefully and focus on details; however, if I only want the main idea, I scan the text quickly to get an overview.

× Reading is one of the most favorite hobbies because it allow me unwind and escape from the busy day and also is can improve my vocabulary and my language skills.

✓ Reading is one of my favorite hobbies because it allows me to unwind and escape from a busy day and it can also improve my vocabulary and my language skills.

Subject-verb agreement and verb form: 'hobbies' with 'one of my favorite' requires possessive 'my'; 'allow' should be 'allows' to agree with singular subject 'it' (referring to reading). Missing infinitive marker 'to' before 'unwind'. 'is can' is incorrect combined auxiliary; use 'it can also' and correct word order. Suggestions: add 'my', use 'allows', include 'to' before verbs like 'unwind', and use a single appropriate auxiliary verb such as 'can'.

× And like, for example, uh, like before I go to sleep, I just read a little bit.

✓ For example, before I go to sleep, I just read a little bit.

Unnecessary fillers 'And like, uh, like' should be removed for clarity. No verb error remains after cleaning. Suggestion: use 'For example' to introduce instance and keep sentence concise. Present simple 'read' is correct for habitual action.

× Well, definitely, I I said like I prefer to read on paper because I love the feeling when I touch in the paper, but it's very real.

✓ Well, definitely, I prefer to read on paper because I love the feeling when I touch the paper; it feels very real.

Redundant 'I I said like' removed. Preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'touch the paper'—use direct object 'touch the paper'. 'It's very real' is vague; better: 'it feels very real.' Suggestions: remove stuttering/fillers and use correct object without 'in' for 'touch'.

× Like I hand hold on the paper and, and it's make me feel can like remember the detail like longer.

✓ I hold the paper in my hands, and it makes me feel I can remember the details longer.

Incorrect phrase 'hand hold on the paper' should be 'hold the paper in my hands'. Subject-verb agreement: 'it's make' should be 'it makes'. Modal/ability phrase reordered: 'feel can like remember' should be 'feel I can remember'. 'detail' should be plural 'details' and 'longer' is acceptable. Suggestions: use natural word order 'I hold the paper in my hands' and ensure verb agrees with subject ('makes').

× Well, I think I need to read carefully when I read the contract or the exam instruction because if I don't pay attention, I will miss something like important and like I don't need to read carefully when I just like write the comedics or just the something in the social media.

✓ Well, I think I need to read carefully when I read a contract or exam instructions because if I don't pay attention, I will miss something important. I don't need to read carefully when I just write comments or post something on social media.

Article errors: use 'a contract' or 'exam instructions' plural; 'the exam instruction' is incorrect. Word choice: 'comedics' unclear—likely 'comments'. Remove filler 'like'. 'something in the social media' should be 'something on social media'. 'something important' no need for 'like'. Suggestions: use appropriate articles, pluralize 'instructions', replace unclear words with 'comments', and use 'on social media'.

× Oh well it's depend on the type of book which I need to understand the content deeply.

✓ Oh well, it depends on the type of book; if I need to understand the content deeply,

Subject-verb agreement: 'it's depend' should be 'it depends'. Sentence fragment: original continues later; correction splits and prepares clause. Suggestion: use 'depends' for third-person singular and ensure complete conditional clause structure.

× I read it carefully and pay attention to the details and but if I just only want to the general idea I usually scan the text quickly to easy to can understand the yeah.

✓ I read it carefully and pay attention to the details, but if I only want the general idea, I usually scan the text quickly so it's easy to understand.

Several issues: remove redundant 'just only' -> keep 'only'; incorrect placement 'want to the general idea' -> 'want the general idea'; 'to easy to can understand' is ungrammatical—use 'so it's easy to understand' or 'to understand easily'. Remove filler 'the yeah'. Suggestions: use 'but' correctly to contrast clauses, avoid redundant words, and use correct infinitive or result clause ('so it's easy to understand').