Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 注意时态和拼写错误，结构上先直接回答问题再补充理由，控制句子数量和长度；多用连词使表达更自然。例如将过去与现在对比清楚地表达出来，并把“grading”改为“reading”。

例: I didn't like reading when I was young because I found it boring, but now I enjoy reading on my smartphone because it helps me pass spare time. For example, I often read short articles and stories when I'm waiting for the bus.

提案: 注意主谓一致和动词形式（例如“thinks”应为“think”）；先给出明确立场，再用具体原因支持，避免重复词汇，使用连词如“because”或“so”。

例: I prefer reading on a screen because it's more convenient and portable. For example, I can carry thousands of articles on my smartphone, so I can read anytime and anywhere.

提案: 注意句子划分与语法（如“having a exams”应为“taking exams”），使用明确举例并用连接词分段说明何时仔细阅读与何时不必；使用比较正式词汇如“instructions”替代“notice books”。

例: I need to read carefully when I study instructions or when I'm preparing for exams like the IELTS because accuracy is important. However, I don't read carefully when I'm looking at comics or light fiction, since I just want to enjoy them.

提案: 注意复数和表达准确性（例如“ways”应为“way”，“scanning of the detail”不自然）；先表明偏好，再说明原因并举例，使用连接词如“so”或“therefore”。

例: I prefer scanning because it helps me decide whether a text is worth reading in detail. For example, I skim an article's headings and first paragraphs to quickly find useful information, and then I read important parts more carefully.

× When I was young I didn't like grading because I think it is very boring, but now I prefer to reading in my smartphone because I think sometimes when I was boring I can read something to pass my spare time.

✓ When I was young I didn't like reading because I thought it was very boring, but now I prefer to read on my smartphone because sometimes when I am bored I can read something to pass my spare time.

错误类型：过去时与现在时混用，动词形式错误。 解释与建议：句中谈论过去的喜好应使用过去时（didn't like → didn't like，think → thought）。"grading" 应为 "reading"。短语 "prefer to reading" 应为不定式 "prefer to read" 或动名词 "prefer reading"。描述感受应使用被动形容词 "bored" 而非现在分词 "boring"（boring 用来形容事物，bored 用来形容人）。此外，设备介词应为 "on my smartphone"。建议按照时间线一致使用时态，注意形容词/分词的区分。

× I prefer to read on screen because I thinks read on screen is very convenient and I can read it everywhere even if I just bring a smartphone by myself.

✓ I prefer to read on a screen because I think reading on a screen is very convenient and I can read everywhere as long as I have a smartphone with me.

错误类型：第三人称单数动词形式错误；动词和名词搭配及介词使用不当。 解释与建议：主语是第一人称单数，动词应为 "think" 而非 "thinks"（第三人称单数变形不适用）。"thinks read on screen" 结构错误，应改为 "think reading on a screen" 或 "think that reading on a screen"。"read it everywhere" 中的代词 "it" 不必要，改为 "read everywhere"。短语 "bring a smartphone by myself" 更自然为 "have a smartphone with me" 或 "carry a smartphone"。建议注意主谓一致和固定搭配。

× When I read some notice books like How to use a machine, I need to read it carefully and sometimes when I having a exams like the IELTS exam I need to read carefully but sometimes I just read some easy thing like the comic books I didn't need to read so careful.

✓ When I read instruction books like "How to use a machine," I need to read them carefully, and sometimes when I have exams like the IELTS I need to read carefully, but sometimes I just read easy things like comic books and I don't need to read so carefully.

错误类型：现在时形式错误及代词和副词使用不当。 解释与建议："notice books" 不自然，应为 "instruction books" 或 "manuals"。代词要与复数名词一致（"it" → "them"）。"when I having a exams" 时态/形式错误，应为 "when I have exams"（使用一般现在时和正确的冠词/复数形式）。否定句 "I didn't need" 与全文时态不符，应为现在时 "I don't need"。副词 "careful" 应用副词 "carefully" 修饰动词。建议注意主语-动词形式、代词数一致以及副词形式。

× I prefer scanning because it is the ways that I choose whether I will read this book carefully or not. Reading the scanned of the detail about the books can makes me get the information very fast.

✓ I prefer scanning because it is the way I decide whether to read a book carefully or not. Scanning the details of a book can help me get information very quickly.

错误类型：句子结构混乱和搭配错误。 解释与建议："the ways" 应为单数 "the way"。短语 "that I choose whether I will read" 结构笨拙，改为更自然的不定式结构 "I decide whether to read..."。第二句中 "Reading the scanned of the detail" 结构不正确，应为动名词或现在分词短语作主语 "Scanning the details..."。动词 "can makes" 应为原形 "can make"。副词 "very fast" 更正式为 "very quickly"。建议重写句子以保证语法结构清晰，注意单复数、动词形式和副词使用。