Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and avoid filler words (uh, um). Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., "I try to read for 10 or 15 minutes" and "reading is very important").

例: Yes, I enjoy reading. For example, I usually read for 10 to 15 minutes each day, mostly fiction or history books, because they help me relax and learn new facts.

提案: Answer directly with a clear preference, use correct grammar and avoid repetition. Use one linking phrase to explain reasons and one specific example. Finish sentences completely.

例: I prefer reading on paper because physical books feel more immersive and help me connect with the story. Also, screens give me headaches, so I avoid e-books whenever possible.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence stating when you read carefully. Use linking words to contrast situations (e.g., "but" or "however") and provide a specific example (instructions, contracts vs. news). Fix grammar: "I read carefully" and "I sometimes skim".

例: I read carefully when the information is important, for example, instructions or legal documents, because mistakes matter. However, I often skim news articles or social media posts just to get the main idea.

提案: Be decisive and consistent: scanning is for quick information, detailed reading is for important material. Use linking words to explain when you choose each method and give a clear short example. Remove fillers and complete your sentences.

例: I prefer scanning when I need quick information, such as social media or news headlines, but I do detailed reading for important texts like reports or study materials to understand everything fully.

× When I get, uh, any free time in my daily routine, I always try to 10 or 15 minutes to read any type of story books or any type of umm, uh, historical books.

✓ When I get any free time in my daily routine, I always try to read for 10 or 15 minutes, either storybooks or historical books.

Original sentence has missing verb forms and awkward word order ('try to 10 or 15 minutes to read' lacks 'read for' and misplaces duration). It also uses redundant phrases ('any type of story books'). Suggest using 'read for 10 or 15 minutes' and 'either storybooks or historical books' for clarity and correct structure. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Uh, I think reading our books very important for our daily life.

✓ I think reading books is very important for our daily life.

Missing copula 'is' after subject complement and incorrect 'our' before 'books' (unnecessary possessive). Use 'reading books is very important' to form a correct clause. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I always prefer to read or reading on paper because I find physical books and more immersive and they help me connect it on the story.

✓ I always prefer to read on paper because I find physical books more immersive and they help me connect with the story.

Choose one verb form after 'prefer' ('to read' or 'reading'); 'and' before 'more immersive' is incorrect; 'connect it on the story' is wrong preposition and pronoun. Use 'connect with the story'. This fixes verb form and preposition issues. Grammar problem type ID:8

× I cannot read screen with screen because I have a problem for headache and when I read books on screen I.

✓ I cannot read on a screen because I have problems with headaches, and when I read books on a screen I get a headache.

Wrong prepositions: use 'on a screen' not 'read screen with screen'; 'problem for headache' should be 'problems with headaches' or 'a problem with headaches'. The original also ends abruptly; add 'I get a headache' to complete the sentence. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I always read carefully when it's very important for me and especially it's like instruction type topic.

✓ I always read carefully when something is very important to me, especially if it is an instructional topic.

Awkward phrasing and tense consistency: use 'when something is very important to me' and 'if it is an instructional topic' to be natural and grammatically correct. 'Instruction type topic' should be 'instructional topic' or 'instructions'. Grammar problem type ID:6

× So I always careful to read it and I some sometime I scheme like news or any types of of.

✓ So I am always careful to read it, but sometimes I skim news or other items.

Missing auxiliary verb 'am' after 'I', incorrect verb 'scheme' should be 'skim', and trailing repetition 'of of' and 'any types of' are incorrect. Rewriting yields a clear contrast between careful reading and skimming. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Uh, if it is very important for me, so I'm uh, scanning them and uh, I, it's uh, like news or any social media, uh, news I prefer to read, umm, just get them information and main idea.

✓ If it is not very important to me, I scan them; for news or social media, I prefer to read just to get the information and the main idea.

Original mixes conditional logic and tense ('if it is very important' then 'I'm scanning' is contradictory). Clarify by making conditional consistent ('If it is not very important, I scan'). Use 'scan' (not 'scanning them' with unnecessary pronoun), 'get the information and the main idea' for correct nouns and articles. Grammar problem type ID:5

× So I prefer.

✓ So I prefer that approach.

Fragment 'So I prefer.' is incomplete. Provide a clear object 'that approach' or specify what is preferred to complete the sentence. Grammar problem type ID:23