Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は内容が伝わりますが、流暢さと文法、語順に改善の余地があります。短く明確な主文を最初に置き、具体的なジャンルを列挙するときは接続詞を使って自然につなげましょう。また、不要なフィラー（uh、um）を減らし、過去・現在形の一貫性に注意してください。例：I really enjoy reading. I often read comic books, novels, and sometimes newspapers.

例: I really enjoy reading. I often read comic books and novels, and sometimes I read newspapers to keep up with current events.

提案: 理由は伝わりますが、繰り返しや曖昧な表現があり、論理のつながりを明確にする必要があります。まず立場をはっきり示し、その後に具体的な理由を2点程度で述べ、接続語（because, for example, also）を使って整えましょう。発音や重複（can can）は避けてください。例：I prefer reading on a screen because it’s convenient and has language tools that help me learn new words.

例: I prefer reading on a screen because it’s more convenient. For example, I can look up words instantly and change the font size to suit my eyes.

提案: 内容は明確で構造も良いですが、冒頭の不必要なフィラーを省き、主節の語順を整えるとより自然です。条件を示すときはIf節を使って簡潔に述べ、具体的な例や理由（what makes it difficult）を加えると高評価です。例：It depends on the difficulty of the text; for complex articles I read carefully to understand details, while for simple ones I skim.

例: It depends on the difficulty of the text. If a passage is complex, I read carefully to understand the details and answer questions accurately, but if it’s simple I just skim to get the main idea.

提案: 答えは適切で具体例も良いですが、文法の細かい誤り（details → detailed）とフィラーの使用を直すと更に良くなります。主張→理由→具体例の順で一貫して述べ、結びに簡単なまとめを入れると自然です。例：I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand topics deeply; for instance, I read long articles about technology to form my own opinions.

例: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand topics more deeply. For example, I often read long articles about technology and social media to learn new ideas and form my own opinions.

× I really like to reading.

✓ I really like reading.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the base gerund form 'reading' not the infinitive 'to' plus gerund. Use 'like' + -ing for general preferences (I like reading). Suggestion: say 'I really like reading.'

× I'm reading about, for example, is about, uh, comic books or some, the novel is uh, and some, maybe some newspapers or yeah, the others.

✓ I read, for example, comic books, novels, and maybe some newspapers, among others.

The original sentence has confused articles and sentence structure. Use plural nouns without 'the' when speaking generally (comic books, novels, newspapers). Also change continuous 'I'm reading about' to simple present 'I read' for habitual action. Suggestion: list items clearly and avoid unnecessary articles.

× more prefer to read on the screen because, uh, screen is.

✓ I prefer to read on a screen because screens are

When speaking generally, use 'a screen' or plural 'screens are' rather than 'the screen' or bare 'screen'. Also use 'prefer' without 'more' (prefer already expresses comparison). Suggestion: say 'I prefer to read on a screen because screens are...'.

× I think the screens can can let you read about another language and I think it's more convenient than the paper.

✓ I think screens can help you read in other languages, and I think they're more convenient than paper.

Duplicate 'can' is incorrect. Use 'help you read in other languages' rather than 'read about another language'. Use plural 'paper' → 'paper' as an uncountable noun or 'printed paper' if needed; compare with 'paper' without 'the'. Also use contraction consistently. Suggestion: 'screens can help you read in other languages and are more convenient than paper.'

× Uh, it's depends on how difficult the article is.

✓ It depends on how difficult the article is.

Use subject 'it' with verb 'depends' without the dummy 'it's'. 'It's depends' is ungrammatical because 'it's' (it is) and 'depends' both mark verb. Suggestion: use 'It depends on...'.

× I prefer details reading because it helps me understand a topic deeply.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand a topic deeply.

The phrase should be 'detailed reading' (adjective 'detailed' modifying 'reading') rather than 'details reading'. Alternatively 'reading in detail' also works. Suggestion: say 'I prefer detailed reading' or 'I prefer reading in detail.'

× For example, I enjoy reading long articles about technology and social media so I can learn new ideas and form, uh, my own opinion.

✓ For example, I enjoy reading long articles about technology and social media so I can learn new ideas and form my own opinions.

Use plural 'opinions' or keep singular 'opinion' without 'my own' repetition is fine; original had hesitation and comma misplacement. 'Form my own opinions' sounds natural because you can form multiple ideas. Suggestion: remove hesitation and use plural for generality.