Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Combine ideas into a clear, natural response. Start with a topic sentence saying you enjoy reading, then give specific types you like and a brief reason. Avoid short fragments and repetition. Use linking words (for example, and, also) and keep it under 4–5 sentences.

例: Yes, I enjoy reading. I like a variety of material, such as novels, manga and newspapers, because they help me relax and learn new things. For example, manga entertains me with its artwork, while newspapers keep me informed about current events.

提案: Give a direct preference and explain briefly with clear reasons. Use a topic sentence stating paper or screen, then add one or two supporting reasons using linking words (because, so). Avoid unclear fragments and incomplete sentences.

例: I prefer reading on paper because I find it easier on my eyes and I remember information better. For instance, I like holding a physical book and making notes in the margins when I study.

提案: Answer both parts clearly: say when careful reading is necessary and when it is not, using linking words (for example, however). Provide specific reasons and contexts. Keep sentences complete and concise.

例: I need to read carefully when I study or use the library because the material is often academic and I must understand details. However, I don't read carefully when I'm skimming a magazine or social media for entertainment.

提案: State your preference and explain why with clear reasons and an example. Use linking words (because, for example) and avoid irrelevant fragments. Keep response concise and coherent.

例: I prefer detailed reading because I like to understand the information fully and remember it. For example, when I read a novel I focus on descriptions and themes, rather than just skimming the text.

× Yes, I like reading the books.

✓ Yes, I like reading books.

Using the definite article 'the' implies specific books already known; in general statements about a hobby use the plural noun without an article. Suggestion: say 'reading books' for general preference.

× I'm bored. Always read the book.

✓ I'm bored. I always read books.

Missing subject 'I' and wrong article 'the' cause an incomplete and unnatural sentence. Add the subject and use plural without article for habitual action: 'I always read books.'

× Looks like anime, manga and anything.

✓ I like things such as anime, manga, and similar materials.

Sentence lacks subject and verb, making it a fragment. Provide a subject ('I') and verb ('like') and restructure list with 'such as' or 'and similar materials' to clarify meaning.

× And newspaper also.

✓ I also read newspapers.

Fragment missing subject and auxiliary word order. Combine with previous sentence or make a full sentence: subject 'I' + verb 'read' + object 'newspapers' and place 'also' appropriately.

× I prepared to read in paper like all these.

✓ I prefer to read on paper, like these.

'Prepared' is incorrect verb choice; use 'prefer' for habitual preference. Also use preposition 'on' with 'paper' and comma to introduce example. Suggestion: 'I prefer to read on paper.'

× The paper is in.

✓ I prefer paper.

Phrase 'The paper is in' is unclear and uses wrong preposition. Express preference simply: 'I prefer paper.' or 'I like reading on paper.'

× It's very.

✓ It's very comfortable.

'It's very.' is incomplete; needs an adjective to complete comparison. Add an adjective that fits context like 'comfortable' or 'convenient'.

× Very carefully in, in with in in the library.

✓ Very carefully in the library.

Repeated prepositions and fragmented structure. Use a clear prepositional phrase 'in the library' and adverb 'very carefully' to indicate manner.

× Because library is many many people and they read and.

✓ Because the library has many people and they are reading.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'library' and incorrect verb forms: use 'has' for possession of people present and 'they are reading' to indicate ongoing action. Also remove redundant 'many many.'

× And then? No.

✓ I don't want to disturb them, so I stay quiet.

Fragment and unclear response. Provide a full sentence explaining reason for careful reading in library, e.g. 'I don't want to disturb them, so I stay quiet.'

× I prefer detailed reading.

✓ I prefer detailed reading.

Sentence is correct but keep as is; it is a complete sentence expressing preference. No grammatical change needed.

× To my eyes and.

✓ It is easier on my eyes.

Fragment 'To my eyes and.' is incomplete. Use full clause 'It is easier on my eyes' to explain why detailed reading is preferred.

× Intel 3D.

✓ I meant 'in detail.'

'Intel 3D' appears to be mispronunciation or transcription error. Clarify intended phrase 'in detail.' Use full phrase to convey meaning.