Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: O seu conteúdo é claro, mas a resposta soa um pouco formal e redundante. Para melhorar: 1) Comece com uma frase direta e natural (topic sentence). 2) Acrescente uma razão específica e um exemplo curto para justificar a paixão. 3) Mantenha até 4–5 frases e evite expressões redundantes como “for myself”. Tente variar o vocabulário com palavras como "enjoy", "relaxing" ou "informative".

例: Yes, I really enjoy reading because it helps me relax after a busy day. For example, I often read short stories or novels before bed, which lets me unwind and forget about work. I also like reading non-fiction articles when I want to learn something new.

提案: Boa resposta com comparação e motivo, mas a linguagem tem pequenas imprecisões e repetições. Para melhorar: 1) Use uma frase tópico clara (e.g. "I prefer reading on a screen now"). 2) Evite generalizações como "your pace"—fale em primeira pessoa. 3) Forneça um exemplo concreto e uma consequência clara. Corrija estruturas como "my reading rates increased" para "I read more".

例: I used to prefer paper books, but now I prefer reading on a device because I read more often on my Kindle. For instance, I can download books instantly and adjust the font size, which makes reading more comfortable and convenient.

提案: A ideia está presente, mas a resposta é confusa e contém erros gramaticais. Para melhorar: 1) Comece com uma frase direta que responda a ambas as partes da pergunta. 2) Use conectores (e.g. "when", "but") para clarificar contraste. 3) Dê exemplos específicos e corrija erros como "you need not need" e "non important speech" (usar "unimportant dialogue" ou "casual comments").

例: I need to read carefully when a passage contains detailed descriptions or important dialogue that affects the plot. For example, clues in a mystery novel require close reading. On the other hand, I skim casual comments or background information that don't affect the main story.

提案: Resposta adequada mas repetitiva e com hesitações ('I think I think', 'do do'). Para melhorar: 1) Comece com uma clean topic sentence. 2) Elimine repetições e hesitações. 3) Use linking words to contrast scanning and detailed reading and forneça exemplos específicos de tipos de texto para cada método.

例: It depends on the material: I usually scan articles or books that don't interest me to find key points. However, I read in detail when the plot or characters are engaging, for example with novels I like to study descriptions and dialogue.

× I am passionate about reading because it is a very interesting source of entertainment for myself.

✓ I am passionate about reading because it is a very interesting source of entertainment for me.

Use 'me' instead of the reflexive pronoun 'myself' because the action is not reflexive; 'myself' is used for emphasis or when the subject and object are the same. Use 'me' as the correct object pronoun.

× Well, I used to prefer reading on paper, but I would say that nowadays my reading rates increased with reading through devices.

✓ Well, I used to prefer reading on paper, but I would say that nowadays my reading rate has increased with reading on devices.

Use present perfect 'has increased' to link past change to the present. 'Reading rate' is a singular noun phrase (not 'rates') and use 'on devices' or 'on devices such as a Kindle or tablet' rather than 'with reading through devices.'

× Through Kindle or tablet, your pace of reading can be increased and it's also affordable to just download the books you want to read.

✓ With a Kindle or tablet, your reading pace can increase and it's also affordable to download the books you want to read.

Use 'With a Kindle or tablet' rather than 'Through Kindle or tablet.' 'Reading pace' is idiomatic; 'can increase' is simpler than passive 'can be increased.' Remove unnecessary 'just.'

× That's a good question. I would say that sometimes I have to read with more attention when there is lots of descriptions of a scenario of a dialogue between the main characters.

✓ That's a good question. I would say that sometimes I have to read more carefully when there are lots of descriptions or when a dialogue between the main characters sets the scene.

Use 'read more carefully' rather than 'read with more attention.' Match plural agreement: 'there are lots of descriptions.' Improve clarity by splitting and rephrasing 'descriptions of a scenario of a dialogue' to 'descriptions or when a dialogue... sets the scene.'

× And when you need not need to read carefully is when you can just see non important speech.

✓ And when you do not need to read carefully is when you can just skim unimportant speech.

Remove duplicated 'need' and use 'do not need' for correct negation. Use 'skim' as the appropriate verb for quick reading. Use 'unimportant' as a single adjective rather than 'non important.'

× I think I think it depends on what I'm reading.

✓ I think it depends on what I'm reading.

Remove redundant repetition 'I think I think.' Single 'I think' is sufficient; redundancy is a fluency/structure issue.

× I like to scan when the content of the book is not interesting to me.

✓ I like to scan when the content of a book is not interesting to me.

Use 'a book' to be more natural and general. Tense is acceptable (present simple) for habitual action; no change needed except article choice.

× However, I do do detail reading when the plot or the characters are appealing to my interests.

✓ However, I do detailed reading when the plot or the characters appeal to my interests.

Remove duplicated 'do.' Use adjective 'detailed' to modify 'reading.' Use present simple 'appeal' to match 'plot or the characters' as plural; 'appealing to my interests' is acceptable but 'appeal to my interests' is more direct.