Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cần cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản, trật tự từ và phát âm câu để trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn gọn trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích nguyên nhân với 1-2 câu chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh lỗi như ‘hardly reading’ (nên là ‘hardly read’ hoặc ‘don’t read much’) và ‘have that habits’ (nên là ‘have that habit’). Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản như ‘because’ để nối ý và giữ tổng số câu trong 3–4 câu.

例: I don't read much. I usually spend my free time on social media or playing computer games because they are more entertaining. However, I know reading can improve my knowledge, so I sometimes read short articles online when I need information.

提案: Tốt khi nêu quan điểm và lý do, nhưng cần dùng từ vựng chính xác và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp. Thay ‘expire you to reading’ bằng ‘encourage me to read’; ‘reduce your sight’ thành ‘damage your eyesight’ hoặc ‘strain your eyes’. Nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó một hoặc hai câu giải thích cụ thể. Hạn chế nói lan man và tránh lặp từ.

例: I prefer reading on paper. The smell and feel of a new book encourage me to read more, and I find it more pleasant than staring at a screen. Also, long periods of screen use can strain the eyes, so I avoid reading long texts on devices.

提案: Cần cải thiện tính mạch lạc và ngữ pháp. Tránh cấu trúc lộn xộn như ‘I never reading book in a in different way’. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn: khi nào bạn đọc kỹ, khi nào không. Dùng ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: khi học hoặc chuẩn bị cho kỳ thi đọc kỹ; khi đọc tiểu thuyết giải trí thì đọc lướt). Sử dụng liên từ như ‘but’ hoặc ‘however’ để đối chiếu hai trường hợp.

例: I read carefully when I need to understand important information, for example when studying for an exam or reading instructions. However, I don't read carefully when I read fiction for fun; in that case I usually skim or read more casually to enjoy the story.

提案: Ý trả lời rõ ràng và phù hợp, nhưng cần sửa ngữ pháp và diễn đạt cho tự nhiên hơn. Thay ‘read it read any line novel’ bằng ‘read a novel’ và ‘a enjoyable experience’ thành ‘an enjoyable experience’. Nên tách thành hai câu: nêu quan điểm tổng quát, sau đó đưa ví dụ cụ thể. Dùng từ nối như ‘for example’ hoặc ‘however’ để làm rõ sự khác biệt.

例: It depends. For exams I prefer detailed reading because I need to understand and remember facts. For novels, I usually read more casually or skim sometimes, because I want to enjoy the plot rather than analyze every sentence.

× I could say that I am a person who really hardly reading because I will use my time to do another thing like surfing social media or play computer game.

✓ I could say that I am a person who hardly reads because I use my time to do other things like surfing social media or playing computer games.

The verb after 'hardly' should be in base form with subject agreement: 'hardly reads' (third person singular). 'Really hardly reading' is incorrect structure (problem 8 and 27). Use 'hardly reads' or 'rarely read' and change following verbs to parallel forms: 'use' (present simple) and gerund 'playing' for activities. Also pluralize 'computer game' to 'computer games' and 'another thing' to 'other things' for natural expression.

× I know that reading will require me more knowledge about something clearly.

✓ I know that reading requires me to have more knowledge about things clearly.

Use present simple for general truths: 'reading requires' not 'will require' (problem 6). Also 'require me more knowledge' is unidiomatic; use 'requires me to have more knowledge' and 'something' -> 'things' or 'about a subject'.

× But yeah, I don't think that I have that habits.

✓ But yeah, I don't think that I have those habits.

Demonstrative determiner must agree in number: 'that' for singular, 'those' for plural (problem 14). Also 'habits' is plural so use 'those'.

× I will prefer to read on paper because when you buy new book the smell of the book is really irresistible so it will expire you to reading.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because when you buy a new book, the smell of the book is really irresistible so it inspires you to read.

Use present simple for preferences: 'prefer' not 'will prefer' (problem 6). Add article 'a' before 'new book'. 'Expire you to reading' is incorrect; use 'inspire you to read' or 'encourage you to read'.

× In addition, reading on the screen is really harmful because your eyes always interact with the screen so it will like reduce your sight.

✓ In addition, reading on a screen can be harmful because your eyes are always exposed to the screen so it can reduce your eyesight.

Use 'a screen' or 'the screen' consistently and avoid 'your eyes interact with the screen' which is odd. 'Will like reduce' is incorrect; use 'can reduce' (modal choice) and 'sight' -> 'eyesight'. Also change tense/modal to express possibility (problem 12 and 6).

× I can say that I never reading book in a in different way because whenever I reading book I really focus on the content or the stories of the book because when I can concentrate on the story it will make me know more about the books and know more about that situation.

✓ I can say that I never read books in a different way because whenever I read a book I really focus on the content or the story; when I can concentrate on the story it helps me learn more about the book and understand the situation better.

Use base/past forms 'read' (present simple pronunciation varies) instead of 'reading' after subjects where simple present is required (problem 8 and 6). Use plural 'books' and article 'a book'. Replace 'it will make me know' with 'it helps me learn' and 'know more about that situation' with 'understand the situation better' for natural phrasing.

× I think it depends because when I take an exam I need to read very carefully because I must understand details and remember facts.

✓ I think it depends because when I take an exam I need to read very carefully; I must understand the details and remember the facts.

Minor adjustments: use 'the details' and 'the facts' for specificity. Tense is correct (present general) but article use needed (problem 6 and 17).

× But when I read it read any line novel, I usually read casually so I can enjoy the story without concentrating on every sentence.

✓ But when I read a light novel or any casual fiction, I usually read casually so I can enjoy the story without concentrating on every sentence.

Original phrase 'read it read any line novel' is ungrammatical and unclear. Clarify to 'read a light novel or any casual fiction' and maintain parallel structure. This fixes sentence structure and word choice (problem 26).

× It will bring me a enjoyable experience.

✓ It brings me an enjoyable experience.

Use article 'an' before vowel sound 'enjoyable' and prefer simple present 'brings' for habitual action rather than 'will bring' (problem 13 and 17).