Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Говорить нужно более естественно и короче: начать с прямого ответа, затем привести 1–2 конкретные причины с примерами. Избегайте повторов («I think», «really») и длинных сложных предложений. Практикуйте связки: Because, For example, and, so. Также используйте более точную лексику вместо общих фраз.

例: Yes, I do. I enjoy reading because it keeps my mind active and helps me learn new words. For example, reading fiction improves my vocabulary, and reading articles in English helps me understand different writing styles.

提案: Избегайте заполнителей («uh», «I think» слишком часто) и повторов. Дайте прямой ответ, затем одно или два обоснования с конкретикой (например: ощущение бумаги, меньше напряжения для глаз). Поддержите связками: because, so, for example.

例: I prefer reading on paper because it feels more comfortable and reduces eye strain. For example, holding a paperback lets me focus better and I enjoy the tactile experience.

提案: Давайте чёткую структуру: прямой ответ + конкретные примеры ситуаций, когда нужно читать внимательно и когда можно просмотреть бегло. Уберите эмоциональные повторы и используйте связки (when, while, because, so). Добавьте конкретику про цели чтения.

例: I need to read carefully when studying or learning a language because I must understand details and vocabulary. For casual reading, like novels for pleasure, I often read quickly to enjoy the story without focusing on every word.

提案: Начинайте с прямого ответа, затем объясняйте причину и приводите пример. Избегайте разговорных окончаний и грамматических ошибок. Используйте словосочетания: skimming/scanning, detailed reading, because, for instance.

例: I prefer scanning because it is faster and helps me find key information quickly. For instance, when researching topics online I skim articles to locate useful facts, and only read in detail when the information is important.

× Yes I do, I think I really love reading because it is healthy for my brain.

✓ Yes, I do. I think I really love reading because it is healthy for my brain.

The sentence needs punctuation to separate clauses and make the present simple tense clear. Add a comma after 'Yes' and a period to separate independent clauses. This improves clarity and maintains present tense consistency. Suggestion: Use proper punctuation between responses and explanations.

× Also if you read a lot of books you can improve your vocabulary and then if you read books in English you can improve your English skills and knowledge.

✓ Also, if you read a lot of books you can improve your vocabulary, and if you read books in English you can improve your English skills and knowledge.

Missing commas for clause separation and run-on structure. Use commas before conjunctions connecting independent clauses. The tense (present simple) is appropriate; add commas to clarify conditional clauses. Suggestion: Use commas to separate clauses and avoid repeating 'then' unnecessarily.

× Park uh, I think that I prefer to read on paper because it is more interesting than a screen and I think also I think that it is good well and I really enjoy reading books.

✓ Um, I think that I prefer to read on paper because it is more interesting than a screen, and I really enjoy reading books.

Contains filler words and repetitions causing unclear sentence structure. Remove irrelevant words ('Park', duplicated 'I think') and the awkward phrase 'good well'. Keep present simple tense. Suggestion: Eliminate repeated phrases and fillers; combine clauses with a comma and conjunction for clarity.

× Uh, for example, if I read books in English, I should read carefully because it's important to me, I should improve my English skills.

✓ For example, if I read books in English, I should read carefully because it's important for me to improve my English skills.

Run-on sentence with comma splice and awkward phrasing. Combine clauses and use 'important for me to' to express purpose. Maintain modal 'should' in present context. Suggestion: Avoid comma splices; use infinitive structures to state purpose.

× It was very important for my future, essential.

✓ It is very important for my future and essential.

Tense inconsistency: switches to past tense 'was' while discussing a general present-future importance. Use present 'is' to keep meaning. Also connect 'essential' properly with 'and'. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent with context; use present tense when stating general truths about the future.

× I really love reading because it is good.

✓ I really love reading because it is good for me.

The adjective 'good' is vague; add 'for me' to clarify. Keep present simple tense. Suggestion: Add context to 'good' to make sentence more informative.

× I'm really, it is very enjoyable for me.

✓ I really enjoy it; reading is very enjoyable for me.

Fragmented sentence and pronoun reference issue. Combine into a clear statement using present simple and proper subject. Suggestion: Use a single clear subject and verb to avoid fragments.

× And finally, I really love scanning because it is easy and fast for me.

✓ Finally, I really like scanning because it is easy and fast for me.

'Love' can be used, but 'like' is more natural in this context; present simple tense is fine. Remove conjunction 'And' at sentence start for formality. Suggestion: Use 'finally' without leading 'and' and choose appropriate verb intensity.

× If you read a lot of texts and books it was really boring so.

✓ If I read a lot of texts and books, it is really boring, so I prefer scanning.

Tense inconsistency: uses past 'was' for a general present preference. Also vague ending 'so'. Change to present 'is' and complete the consequence. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent and complete the clause describing the result.