Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid awkward phrases and grammar errors (e.g. “could increase” → “helps increase,” “for Burn my time” → “to pass the time”). Keep to 2–3 sentences and correct verb forms.

例: Yes, I enjoy reading. It helps me learn new things, and in my free time I usually read novels or magazines to relax and pass the time.

提案: Give a direct preference and explain with a clear reason. Use correct prepositions and complete the idea (e.g. “on my phone”). Use linking words like “however” or “but” to connect contrast. Keep sentences short and grammatically correct.

例: I often prefer reading on paper because I like the feel of a physical book. However, when I am outside I usually read on my phone because it is convenient and portable.

提案: Answer directly and use accurate vocabulary (e.g. “scan” not “scam”). Use linking words to contrast the two situations. Correct grammar: avoid doubling words and use proper sentence structure. Provide a clear example of important vs. non-important reading.

例: I need to read carefully when the text contains important information, such as instructions or legal terms. In contrast, if the material is long and not very relevant, I usually scan it quickly to find the key points.

提案: State your preference clearly and support it with a specific reason and an example. Remove fillers like “uh” and fix grammar (e.g. “when I am not really interested”). Use linking words like “because” and “however.” Keep it within 2–3 concise sentences.

例: I prefer detailed reading for books or magazines I enjoy because I appreciate the style and want to understand every detail. However, if the topic doesn't interest me, I tend to scan to find the main ideas quickly.

× Yes I do, reading could increase my knowledge and in my free time I prefer to read a book or read magazines for Burn my time.

✓ Yes, I do. Reading can increase my knowledge, and in my free time I prefer to read a book or magazines to pass the time.

Errors: 'could' suggests conditional; 'can' is better for general ability. Missing commas and sentence breaks. 'for Burn my time' is incorrect preposition and phrasing. Use 'to pass the time' (correct preposition and idiom). Also remove redundant 'read' before 'magazines'. Suggestion: use 'can' for general statements, separate clauses with punctuation, and use the idiom 'to pass the time'. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Sometimes I read on a paper because I love the texture of its book, but when I should go outside I prefer read something on my.

✓ Sometimes I read on paper because I love the texture of books, but when I go outside I prefer to read on my phone.

Errors: 'on a paper' is incorrect article/preposition; use 'on paper' (no article). 'the texture of its book' is wrong pronoun/article and noun form; use 'the texture of books' or 'a book'. 'when I should go outside' uses unnecessary modal 'should'—simple present 'when I go outside' is correct. 'prefer read something on my' is missing 'to' and an object; should be 'prefer to read on my phone'. Suggestions: use correct articles ('a' vs none), correct noun plurality, drop unnecessary modals for habitual actions, and include the device noun after 'my'. Grammar problem type ID:17

× If if something which I read has important information, I should read it carefully.

✓ If something I read contains important information, I should read it carefully.

Errors: Repeated 'If if' is redundant. 'which I read' is an awkward relative clause; better to use 'something I read'. 'has important information' is acceptable but 'contains important information' is more natural. 'should' is acceptable for obligation; for habitual present, 'I read it carefully' also works. Suggestion: avoid repetition, prefer natural relative clauses and choose a clearer verb like 'contains'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× But when the information is too long, I should scam and scam and I will err carefully in the important point.

✓ But when the information is very long, I should scan it, focusing carefully on the important points.

Errors: 'scam' is the wrong word; the correct verb is 'scan' (skimming/scanning). Repetition 'scan and scan' is redundant. 'I will err carefully' is incorrect and unclear; likely meant 'I will read carefully' or 'focus carefully'. 'in the important point' is wrong preposition and singular/plural; use 'on the important points'. Suggestions: use the correct verb 'scan', remove redundant repetition, and use 'focus on' or 'pay attention to' followed by plural 'points' when appropriate. Grammar problem type ID:8

× For the book or a magazine that I really enjoy, I prefer detailed reading because I will have uh, the taste of reading that, but when I not really interested in the information I would scan.

✓ For a book or magazine that I really enjoy, I prefer detailed reading because I appreciate the experience of reading it, but when I am not really interested in the information I would scan it.

Errors: 'For the book or a magazine' should be 'For a book or magazine' (article use). 'I will have uh, the taste of reading that' is ungrammatical and awkward; replace with 'I appreciate the experience of reading it' or 'I enjoy it'. Missing 'am' in 'when I not really interested'—needs auxiliary verb. 'I would scan' is acceptable for habitual preference but add object 'it'. Suggestions: choose correct articles, use appropriate verbs to express enjoyment, include auxiliary verbs for present tense ('I am not'), and include the object for 'scan'. Grammar problem type ID:22