Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và ngắn gọn hơn; tránh lặp từ và sửa ngữ pháp. Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (Yes/No + brief reason), sau đó thêm 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ với liên từ phù hợp. Chú ý động từ chia và số nhiều (games, helps).

例: No, I don't. I prefer playing games and football with my friends because they help me relax after a long day of studying. For example, a short match clears my mind and improves my mood.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu cấu trúc rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, từ dùng không chính xác. Nên nói rõ ưu điểm chính, dùng liên từ để nối ý và sửa chia động từ (helps) và cấu trúc 'I can access it anywhere'.

例: I prefer reading on a screen because it's more convenient and I can access books anywhere. Also, digital texts let me adjust font size and use search functions for quick reference.

提案: Câu trả lời rất lộn xộn và khó hiểu; cần trả lời trực tiếp: nêu trường hợp cần đọc kỹ và trường hợp không cần. Tránh tiếng um/ah, sắp xếp ý theo thứ tự và dùng câu hoàn chỉnh. Ví dụ: 'I need to read carefully when... , but casual reading...'

例: You need to read carefully when studying for exams or when reading official documents because details matter. In contrast, you don't need detailed reading when skimming news headlines or browsing social media for general ideas.

提案: Câu trả lời ngắn, ý chính rõ nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt. Nên dùng cụm từ đúng ('scan' or 'scanning') và giải thích rõ lý do bằng một hoặc hai chi tiết kèm liên từ. Tránh từ không chuẩn như 'fewer fast'.

例: I prefer scanning because it saves time and helps me find important information quickly. For instance, when researching a topic, I scan headings and the first sentences of paragraphs to decide which articles are useful.

× I prefer playing game and playing football with my friends because it help me relax and feel comfortable after a long day of study.

✓ I prefer playing games and playing football with my friends because it helps me relax and feel comfortable after a long day of study.

'game' should be plural 'games' because 'playing' refers to activities in general (countable plural). 'help' must be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'it' (or with the activity as a singular concept). Use 'helps' for third person singular. Suggestions: use plural for general activities and ensure verb agrees with the subject.

× I prefer to read on a screen because it help me feel convenient more of us I can reach everywhere.

✓ I prefer to read on a screen because it helps me feel more comfortable and I can access it anywhere.

'help' should be 'helps' because 'it' (reading on a screen) is third person singular. 'feel convenient' is unnatural; use 'feel more comfortable'. 'more of us I can reach everywhere' is incorrect structure — replace with 'I can access it anywhere.' Suggestions: use 'helps' for third person singular and rephrase for natural collocations and clear meaning.

× I think that's when we need to read carefully. Is uh do exam when not is half a a long essay.

✓ I think we need to read carefully when we are taking exams or when there is a long essay.

Original sentence has confused word order and missing verbs. 'Is uh do exam when not is half a a long essay' is ungrammatical. Reorder into: 'we need to read carefully when we are taking exams or when there is a long essay.' Use 'are taking' for present continuous context and 'there is' for existence of a long essay. Suggestions: form complete clauses with a clear subject and verb and connect ideas with 'or'.

× I prefer scanning readings because I want to save time and it help me fewer fast.

✓ I prefer scanning because I want to save time and it helps me read faster.

'scanning readings' is redundant; use 'scanning' (gerund) to name the reading method. 'help' should be 'helps' for third person singular 'it'. 'fewer fast' is incorrect — correct phrase is 'read faster' (adverb modifying the verb). Suggestions: use correct gerund forms, ensure subject-verb agreement, and use adverbs to modify verbs.