Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, ngắn gọn theo cấu trúc chủ đề + chi tiết hỗ trợ, sửa ngữ pháp và dùng từ chính xác. Tránh lặp từ, cung cấp thông tin cụ thể về tác phẩm (tên đúng, tác giả) và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc. Ví dụ: giới thiệu thể loại, thay đổi so với trước đây, nêu cuốn sách gần nhất và cảm nhận ngắn.

例: Yes, I enjoy reading. I used to read folk tales when I was a child, but now I prefer romantic novels. Recently I read "No Family" by Hector Mallard, and I liked its warm family themes and simple style.

提案: Cần sửa ngữ pháp (gerund/infinitive, số ít/ít), tránh hình ảnh không phù hợp ("kiss"). Nên trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích ngắn bằng liên từ như "because" và đưa ví dụ cụ thể (sách cầm tay, tiện lợi khi đọc trên màn hình). Giữ tối đa 3-4 câu.

例: I prefer reading on paper because I enjoy holding a physical book and turning the pages. However, I sometimes read on a screen for textbooks or articles because it is more convenient for studying.

提案: Trả lời hiện tại rời rạc, ngữ pháp sai nhiều và ý không rõ. Nên bắt đầu với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, dùng liên từ để phân biệt hai tình huống (when vs when not), sửa danh từ số nhiều/ít và từ vựng (information không đếm được). Cụ thể nêu ví dụ khi cần đọc kỹ (hợp đồng, hướng dẫn y tế) và khi không cần (truyện tranh giải trí).

例: We need to read carefully when the information is important, for example when reading contracts, instructions, or medical advice to avoid mistakes. On the other hand, we do not need to read very carefully when reading light material like comic books or casual stories.

提案: Câu trả lời nên cụ thể hơn và mạch lạc: bắt đầu với lựa chọn rõ ràng, dùng liên từ để so sánh lý do thích mỗi kiểu, sửa tên sách/thuật ngữ không rõ. Tránh lỗi từ vựng ("difference detail"). Cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể cho mỗi kiểu đọc.

例: I enjoy both scanning and detailed reading. For quick information or funny moments I scan comic books like Doraemon to catch the jokes, but for novels such as "No Family" I prefer detailed reading to appreciate the characters and plot.

× Yes, I like reading. When I was little I usually read folk tales and now I read romantic story novel.

✓ Yes, I like reading. When I was little I usually read folk tales, and now I read romantic novels.

Sentence mixes plural forms and tense consistency. Use plural 'novels' for countable noun and add a comma before conjunction. Maintain present simple 'I read' for habitual action. Suggestion: use 'romantic novels' and keep parallel structure.

× My recent story novel I read is No Family, written by Hector, my Lord.

✓ The most recent novel I read is No Family, written by Hector Mallard.

Use definite article 'the' with 'most recent' and omit redundant words. Correct author name placement and use proper noun 'Hector Mallard'. 'My Lord' is inappropriate here. Suggestion: say 'The most recent novel I read is No Family by Hector Mallard.'

× I prefer to reading on paper.

✓ I prefer reading on paper.

After 'prefer' use the base verb or gerund without 'to'. 'Prefer to reading' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: use 'prefer reading' or 'prefer to read'.

× I like the feeling that I can hold a book on my hands.

✓ I like the feeling that I can hold a book in my hands.

Use preposition 'in' with 'hands'. 'On my hands' has different meaning. Suggestion: say 'in my hands'.

× It's like a kiss having a new new gift.

✓ It's like the feeling of receiving a brand-new gift.

Original is awkward and repeats 'new'. Use noun phrase 'the feeling of receiving' and adjective 'brand-new'. Suggestion: rephrase for clarity.

× But I also like reading on textbook.

✓ But I also like reading textbooks.

Use plural 'textbooks' for general preference and remove 'on'. 'Reading on textbook' is incorrect. Suggestion: say 'reading textbooks'.

× I think we should read carefully whenever out of information, have it correctly and we should follow this unless we spread incorrect informations and give the back to the world.

✓ I think we should read carefully whenever we need information to ensure it is correct, because otherwise we might spread incorrect information to the world.

Original is ungrammatical and unclear. Needs subject 'we' and clearer clauses. Use 'information' uncountable (not 'informations'), and correct phrase 'spread incorrect information'. Suggestion: simplify and connect ideas logically.

× I like comic book like Doraemon scenes but I also like detailed story like No Family by Hector Mallard or difference detail Nova.

✓ I like comic books like Doraemon, but I also like detailed stories like No Family by Hector Mallard or novels with different details.

Use plural 'comic books' and 'detailed stories'. 'Difference detail Nova' is meaningless; replace with 'novels with different details'. Ensure parallel structure. Suggestion: use plural nouns and parallel comparisons.