Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答应更自然、句子更简洁并注意语法。避免冗长重复，主句后用一两句具体支持，注意时态和主谓一致，修正常见错误如“it can be learn”应为“I can learn”或“they help me learn”。可加入连接词以增强连贯性。

例: No, I'm not a big reader because I find long texts boring. I prefer watching short educational videos on my phone, as they explain ideas visually and help me learn faster. For example, I often watch tutorials that show step-by-step demonstrations, which suit my learning style.

提案: 回答要更精确并注意语言准确性与连贯性。避免口语直译错误（如“in the other word”应为“in other words”），修正语法（e.g. “easy to accessible”→“easy to access”）。可给出一两点具体原因并用连接词衔接。

例: I prefer reading on a screen because it's much more convenient to carry and use. In other words, I can access a wide range of materials instantly on my phone or tablet, whereas carrying multiple books would be impractical.

提案: 回答中有大量表达错误和词汇混乱，应使用恰当词汇并保证句子通顺。先直接回答问题，然后用连接词给出两个具体场景和原因。避免无意义词组（如“Argent Wallpapers”“Kitty”）并修正语法。

例: I need to read carefully when I'm studying for exams or completing assignments, because missing details could affect my answers. However, when I'm reading fiction or browsing blogs for fun, I usually just skim the text to get the main idea.

提案: 回答结构可以更紧凑且语法更准确。先用一句主题句回答，再分别说明两种情况并用连接词衔接。修正动词形式（e.g. “When I doing”→“When I'm doing”）和多余词语。

例: It depends on the material. When I'm doing exam papers or studying, I read in detail to avoid mistakes. By contrast, when I'm reading fiction online to relax, I usually skim the pages to get the general idea quickly.

× I prefer watching videos on my phone because it can be learn more new things more quickly.

✓ I prefer watching videos on my phone because I can learn new things more quickly.

原句中“it can be learn”结构不正确。動詞“learn”在這裡應與主語“I”搭配，而不是用被動或多餘的“be”。改為“I can learn”既符合語法也表達清楚。建議：主語+modal verb（can）+動詞原形。

× For example, I often watch short educational clips and tutorials that explain concepts visually which suit me learning style better.

✓ For example, I often watch short educational clips and tutorials that explain concepts visually, which suit my learning style better.

原句中“me learning style”用法不當，應為所有格“my”加名詞“learning style”。此外在“visually”後加逗號能使關係代詞引導的非限制性定語從句更清楚。建議使用所有格來修飾名詞（my learning style）。

× I prefer reading on the screen, I think it's too heavy to carry the book every day, but on the screen it's so convenient.

✓ I prefer reading on a screen. I think it's too heavy to carry books every day, but reading on a screen is so convenient.

原句在介詞和冠詞使用上不準確：應說“on a screen”或“on screens”；“the book”改為複數“books”更符合語境（泛指書）；此外把句子拆成兩句能提高可讀性。建議注意不定冠詞與可數名詞單複數的搭配，以及保持句子結構清晰。

× In the other word, it's easy to accessible various materials in your screen, but the book you can't do it.

✓ In other words, it's easy to access various materials on your screen, but you can't do that with a book.

原句有多處介詞和詞序錯誤：“In the other word”應為短語“in other words”；“easy to accessible”應為“easy to access”（access是動詞）；“in your screen”應為“on your screen”；“the book you can't do it”結構錯誤，改為“you can't do that with a book”。建議熟悉常用短語（in other words）和動詞不定式（to + 動詞原形）及介詞（on screen）。

× Argent Wallpapers I read very carefully because I don't want to miss any Kitty details and could affect my answer.

✓ When I read urgent warnings, I read very carefully because I don't want to miss any key details that could affect my answers.

原句疑似用詞錯誤（Argent Wallpapers / Kitty），可能原意為“urgent warnings / key”。此外語序和時態混亂：“could affect my answer”需要前置關係詞“that”引導定語從句，且“answer”改為複數“answers”更通順。建議使用恰當詞彙（urgent, key）並用關係從句連接子句。

× But when I'm reading fiction or browsing online articles for leisure, I usually skim the pages and don't pay more attention about that.

✓ But when I'm reading fiction or browsing online articles for leisure, I usually skim the pages and don't pay much attention to them.

原句“don't pay more attention about that”搭配不當，應為“pay much attention to”或“pay more attention to”，並且“that”指代不清，改為代詞“them”指代“pages/articles”。建議學習動詞短語的固定搭配（pay attention to）。

× When I doing the exam paper I must detail reading but when I through the fictions online I always skim the page because the it's just a way to relieve my stress for the study learning.

✓ When I'm doing the exam paper I must read in detail, but when I go through fictions online I always skim the pages because it's just a way to relieve my stress from studying.

原句有多處時態和形式錯誤：應用現在進行時“I'm doing”；“detail reading”應改為“read in detail”；“through the fictions”應為“go through fictions”或“go through fiction online”；“the it's”多餘冠詞；“for the study learning”表達不自然，改為“from studying”。建議注意動詞形式、固定搭配（read in detail, go through）和介詞使用。

× I prefer reading on the screen, I think it's too heavy to carry the book every day, but on the screen it's so convenient.

✓ I prefer reading on a screen. I think it's too heavy to carry books every day, but reading on a screen is so convenient.

同一句中存在單複數問題：應用複數“books”來表示泛指，或使用不定冠詞“a book”配合單數情境。原句用“the book”顯得不自然。建議在泛指時使用複數或不定冠詞。

× For example, I often watch short educational clips and tutorials that explain concepts visually which suit me learning style better.

✓ For example, I often watch short educational clips and tutorials that explain concepts visually, which suit my learning style better.

主句“which suit my learning style better”中的動詞“suit”與先行詞“concepts”或整個前置片語數量關係不明。此處保持“suit”可接受，但若視“which”指“the way they explain”則需用單數“suits”。建議明確先行詞或使用更清晰的結構，例如“...explain concepts visually, which suits my learning style better.”以確保主謂一致。