Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然并直接回应问题，句子要完整，避免多余词语。可先给出简洁的主题句（如Yes, I do），接着说明原因并举例，使用正确的语法（major in...，prefer ... to ...）。

例: Yes, I do. I’m majoring in Chinese literature, so I enjoy reading more than other activities — for example, I often read classic novels and literary critiques in my spare time.

提案: 注意词汇搭配和语法，使用更自然的表达（e.g., read books on paper, help my eyes, focus more）。可以给出具体理由并用连接词衔接。

例: I prefer reading books on paper because it’s easier on my eyes and I can focus more. For instance, when I read printed texts I tend to concentrate longer without the distractions of notifications.

提案: 答案需更清晰、准确。先明确什么时候需要细读，再说什么时候不需要，并用具体例子。注意用词（e.g., complex texts, contracts）和语法（I read carefully; because they are...).

例: I need to read carefully when I’m dealing with complex texts or legal contracts because every detail matters. By contrast, I don’t read carefully when browsing social media or light news, since those don’t require in-depth understanding.

提案: 回答要连贯并使用正确的表达。先给出偏好（scanning or detailed），然后说明原因并举例。避免模糊或不合语法的短语（e.g., I’m usually in a hurry; it helps me read faster）。

例: I prefer scanning when I’m looking for specific information because I’m often in a hurry, so skimming headlines and key sentences helps me find what I need quickly.

× I major in Chinese literature so I prefer reading than other active.

✓ I major in Chinese literature, so I prefer reading to other activities.

句中使用了錯誤的比較結構和詞類。“prefer ... than”是不正確的搭配，正確用法是“prefer A to B”。另外“active”用錯詞類，應為名詞“activities”。建議記住常見動詞搭配：prefer A to B。注意添加逗號連接兩部分。

× I like reading book on paper because it can help me improve my eyes condition and I can more focused on it.

✓ I like reading books on paper because it can help improve my eye condition and I can focus on it better.

句中有多處錯誤： - “book”應為可數名詞複數或加不定冠詞，改為“books”。 - “eyes condition”語序與所有格不正確，應為“eye condition”或“my eye condition”。 - “I can more focused”混用了情態與形容詞，正確應為動詞“focus”加副詞“better”修飾。建議：注意名詞單複數與形容詞/副詞的正確使用。 （以上為簡體中文說明）

× For example, when I'm reading some completely contacts, I will carefully because it more dynamic.

✓ For example, when I'm reading some complex texts, I read carefully because they are more dynamic.

問題包括： - “completely contacts”不是正確短語，應為“complex texts”（複雜的文本）。 - 時態與語氣混亂：在條件從句中使用現在進行式和一般現在比較自然，將“will carefully”改為現在時“read carefully”。 - “it more dynamic”主語與謂語不一致，應為“they are more dynamic”。 建議：選用正確詞彙（texts 而不是 contacts），保持主謂一致，條件句使用一般現在時或現在進行時視情況。

× Exactly, I prefer scanning reading because umm I usually in a harsh mood so I. Master reading be faster.

✓ Exactly, I prefer scanning because I am usually in a bad mood, so my reading tends to be faster.

原句問題有多處： - “prefer scanning reading”冗餘，應用“prefer scanning”（動名詞已包含reading意義）。 - “I usually in a harsh mood”缺少謂語動詞，正確為“I am usually in a bad mood”。 - “so I. Master reading be faster.”語法混亂，應表達為“so my reading tends to be faster”或“so I read faster”。 建議：注意動詞形式（be 動詞）、使用正確的名詞/形容詞搭配（bad mood），以及避免句子碎片。