Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng, nhưng cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và tránh từ lóng/tiếng nói thân mật (ví dụ "wanna", "uh"). Nên dùng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, theo sau là 1-2 câu chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ thể loại sách, lợi ích cụ thể) và tránh lặp từ. Chú ý động từ và giới từ: "reading is part of my daily routine" là tốt, nhưng "to enhance my knowledge more" nên sửa thành "to expand my knowledge"; "nonfiction to about self development" nên là "nonfiction, especially books on self-development".

例: Yes, I enjoy reading a lot. I read for about an hour every day to expand my knowledge and broaden my horizons. I mostly choose nonfiction, especially books on self-development, because they offer practical advice I can apply in my daily life.

提案: Ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, phát âm/fluency thể hiện bằng từ ngắt quãng ("uh"). Cần sửa các cấu trúc: "it reduce" → "it reduces"; "has me on concentrate better" → "helps me concentrate better"; tránh cụm từ không chính xác như "I'm so pre appreciate the others". Tổ chức trả lời: câu chủ đề rồi 2-3 lý do cụ thể (sức khỏe mắt, trải nghiệm xúc giác, ghi chú dễ dàng).

例: I prefer reading on paper because it reduces eye strain and helps me concentrate better. I also enjoy the tactile sensation and smell of a physical book, and I find it easier to underline, annotate and remember information when I read on paper.

提案: Nội dung phù hợp nhưng lúng túng, nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ sai ("deep understand thing", "skim or scam"). Cần tổ chức rõ: trả lời chung sau đó nêu 2 ví dụ cho mỗi trường hợp. Sửa các cấu trúc: "need to have a deep understanding"; "preparing for research"; "skim" not "scam"; "news briefs" hoặc "summaries". Giảm tiếng ngắt quãng và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc hơn.

例: I think you need to read carefully when you have to gain a deep understanding or prepare for research, such as when reading academic papers or taking detailed notes. By contrast, if you only want the main points—for example from news briefs or summaries—skimming is usually sufficient.

提案: Ý chính rõ ràng nhưng có nhiều lỗi từ vựng và cấu trúc ("textorally","get the gifts of reports","it has me save time"). Cần nói ngắn gọn: nêu sở thích, lý do và ví dụ. Sửa cấu trúc: "I prefer detailed reading when I need to fully understand a text or find specific information"; "I scan reports or news to save time." Thêm liên từ để mạch lạc.

例: It depends, but I usually prefer detailed reading when I need to fully understand a text or locate specific information for work. On the other hand, I scan reports or news articles to save time when I only need the main points.

× Actually I'm a bookworm and reading is part of my daily routine because I wanna broaden my horizons so I spend one hour a day reading to enhance my knowledge more.

✓ Actually I'm a bookworm and reading is part of my daily routine because I want to broaden my horizons, so I spend one hour a day reading to enhance my knowledge.

Use the standard present participle 'reading' is fine but 'wanna' is informal; replace with 'want to'. Remove redundant 'more' after 'enhance my knowledge'. Add comma before coordinating conjunction 'so'.

× I mainly read nonfiction to uh, about self development.

✓ I mainly read nonfiction about self-development.

Remove the unnecessary preposition 'to' before 'about'. Use a hyphen in 'self-development' for clarity. Eliminate filler 'uh'.

× Well I prefer reading on paper because it reduce eye strain and has me on concentrate better.

✓ Well I prefer reading on paper because it reduces eye strain and helps me concentrate better.

Verb must agree with singular subject 'it' so 'reduce' -> 'reduces'. 'Has me on concentrate' is ungrammatical; use 'helps me concentrate'.

× I'm so pre appreciate the others uh sensation and smell of a physical book and I find it easier to add, annotate and remember what I read.

✓ I really appreciate the texture and smell of a physical book, and I find it easier to annotate and remember what I read.

Fix phrase 'I'm so pre appreciate' to 'I really appreciate'. Replace vague 'others uh sensation' with specific 'texture'. Remove 'add' if redundant before 'annotate'. Use natural conjunctions and remove fillers.

× Uh, definitely. I believe that when people need to, uh, need to have a deep understand thing or preparing for our research, for example, reading an academic paper or taking detailed notes, they need to read carefully.

✓ I believe that when people need a deep understanding or are preparing for research, for example reading an academic paper or taking detailed notes, they need to read carefully.

Use noun 'understanding' not 'understand'. Use correct structure 'are preparing' rather than 'preparing' alone to match subject. Remove redundant 'need to, uh, need to' and fillers.

× Umm, by contrast, if you only need the main idea, such as when reading. Summary Our news briefed or it could be enough for them to skim or scam.

✓ By contrast, if you only need the main idea, such as when reading a summary or a news brief, it may be enough to skim.

Fix fragmented sentence and wrong nouns: 'Summary Our news briefed' -> 'a summary or a news brief'. 'Scam' is wrong word; use 'skim'. Use modal 'may be' for possibility and remove fillers.

× While it depends, I prefer it detailed reading when I need to understand a textorally or find specific information for my work.

✓ It depends, but I prefer detailed reading when I need to understand a text thoroughly or find specific information for my work.

Remove awkward 'it detailed reading' -> 'detailed reading'. 'Textorally' is incorrect; use 'text thoroughly'. Reorder clause for natural flow.

× By contrast, I use scanning to get the gifts of uh reports or news because it has me save time.

✓ By contrast, I use scanning to get the gist of reports or news because it helps me save time.

Replace 'gifts' with 'gist'. Remove filler 'uh'. Use 'helps me save time' instead of ungrammatical 'has me save time'.