Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 문법과 표현의 정확성이 필요합니다. 답변은 직접적이고 명확한 주제 문장으로 시작했으나, 문장 일부(예: "leading Korean literatures")가 부자연스럽고 의미 전달이 불명확합니다. 불필요한 반복을 줄이고 간결하게 이유를 제시하세요. 또한 3~4개의 짧은 문장으로 구성하고 동사의 시제와 관사 사용을 확인하세요.

例: Yes, I enjoy reading books. I study Korean literature at university, so I read a lot of novels and poetry. Because of my major, I spend time analyzing literary techniques and themes. Reading helps me understand language and culture better.

提案: 의미 전달이 거의 되지 않아 문장을 재구성해야 합니다. 우선 질문에 직접 대답(종이/화면 중 선택)을 분명히 하고, 그 이유를 구체적이고 논리적으로 설명하세요. 연결어(to explain, because, however)를 사용해 문장을 매끄럽게 만드세요.

例: I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen. Paper books feel more comfortable for long reading sessions and are easier on my eyes. Also, I like the tactile feeling of pages and I can carry a paperback when I go out.

提案: 문장이 혼란스럽고 의미가 불명확합니다. 질문에 두 부분(언제 집중해야 하는지, 언제 가볍게 읽는지)에 답하세요. 구체적인 상황과 이유를 제시하고, 논리적 연결어(when, but, because)를 사용해 답변을 정리하세요.

例: I need to read carefully when I study for exams or write assignments because I must understand details and arguments. However, when I read for pleasure before bed, I read more casually and focus on enjoying the story rather than every detail.

提案: 문장이 거의 이해되지 않습니다. 먼저 선호하는 방식을 명확히 표현하세요(scanning 또는 detailed reading). 그 이유와 예시(예: 시험 준비, 취미 독서)를 간단히 덧붙이세요. 불필요한 단어를 제거하고 간결하게 말하세요.

例: I prefer scanning when I need to find specific information quickly, for example when researching for an essay. But for literature classes, I use detailed reading to analyze language and themes carefully.

× I entered that major because I really like leading Korean literatures and novels.

✓ I entered that major because I really like reading Korean literature and novels.

'leading' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is 'reading.' Use the verb 'read' in gerund form 'reading' as a noun. Also 'literatures' should be singular 'literature' when referring to the subject area. Suggestion: replace 'leading' with 'reading' and use 'literature' (uncountable) rather than 'literatures'.

× Wanted to leave the screen.

✓ I prefer paper because I want to avoid screens.

Sentence lacks a subject and is fragmentary. Use a full clause with subject 'I' and verb 'want' to express preference. Also 'leave the screen' is unnatural; use 'avoid screens' or 'not use screens'.

× I prefer it because it is portable, usually the books outside, but I don't want to bring my happy things.

✓ I prefer it because paper books are portable and convenient to take outside, but I don't like carrying many personal items.

Original has incorrect and awkward adjective/adverb usage ('usually the books outside', 'happy things'). Rephrase to use clear adjectives and nouns: 'paper books are portable' and 'personal items' instead of 'happy things'. Ensure logical connection between clauses.

× Health leave for studying, if I need to sleep or just my hobby.

✓ I read for health, for studying, when I need to relax, or just as a hobby.

Original is fragmentary and unclear. Provide parallel list with correct prepositions and nouns: 'for health', 'for studying', 'when I need to relax', 'as a hobby'. This corrects sentence fragments and clarifies meaning.

× I just enjoy the books but if I need to complete my accommodation I should focus on it.

✓ I just enjoy books, but if I need to finish my coursework or assignments I should focus on them.

'complete my accommodation' is incorrect collocation; likely intended 'complete my assignments' or 'coursework'. Use plural 'books' without 'the' when speaking generally. Also 'it' should match plural 'them' for 'assignments'.

× I think I prefer scanning lady.

✓ I think I prefer scanning.

'lady' is an irrelevant word here. Remove it to make the sentence grammatically correct: 'I prefer scanning' means skimming text for information.

× Initially, when I sneered to beside the task of university, stood linked above and killed.

✓ Initially, when I face university tasks, I skim texts first and then read details if needed.

Original sentence is unintelligible with incorrect verbs and structure ('sneered to beside','stood linked above and killed'). Replace with a clear, logical sequence: 'skim texts first and then read details' to express scanning vs detailed reading. Use appropriate verbs and conjunctions.