Reading— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like reading?
受験者
I am not concerned myself as a bookworm but mostly I when I have like the freezer I will reading a books that mostly contain like not much contents in that. So it's not it's me.
試験官
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
受験者
I prefer paper mode screen because uh, most of the time when weekdays I use my eyes on screen most of the time because I'm working like an architect. So when I want to relax I would like to read on paper to like relax my eye.
試験官
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
受験者
I will read carefully in detail in my working time with the, umm, the important papers, but I will not read it carefully with my, uh, novel in my relaxing.
試験官
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
受験者
I prefer more on scanning because I am not a good person so I'm not interested in like reading every detail in the books but I love how to like scanning them and see what the result of the thing in that.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like reading?
スコア: 42.0提案: ปรับเรื่องความชัดเจนของประโยคและแกรมมาร์ ใช้ประโยคเริ่มต้นตอบตรงคำถาม แล้วอธิบายสั้นๆ โดยไม่ซ้ำคำ เช่น ระบุความถี่และชนิดหนังสือที่อ่าน และหลีกเลี่ยงคำฟิลเลอร์ (เช่น like, umm) ที่ทำให้ฟังยาก
例: I wouldn't call myself a bookworm. I usually only read when I have free time, and I prefer short, light books rather than long novels.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
スコア: 68.0提案: ปรับให้กระชับและลำดับเหตุผลด้วย linking words ระบุสาเหตุอย่างชัดเจน และลดการใช้คำซ้ำ เช่น 'most of the time' และคำเติมเสียง (uh, like)
例: I prefer reading on paper because I spend most weekdays looking at screens for work as an architect. Therefore, paper books help me relax my eyes and feel less tired.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
スコア: 60.0提案: ตอบโดยแยกสถานการณ์ให้ชัด ใช้ linking words เช่น 'when' และ 'but' อย่างมีระบบ อธิบายเหตุผลสั้นๆ ว่าทำไมต้องอ่านละเอียดหรือไม่ เช่น ผลงานสำคัญต้องแม่นยำ ส่วนอ่านเพื่อความบันเทิงไม่จำเป็นต้องละเอียด
例: I read carefully when I'm dealing with important work documents because accuracy is essential. However, when I'm reading novels for pleasure I don't focus on every detail and just enjoy the story.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
スコア: 50.0提案: ต้องตอบตรงคำถามและให้เหตุผลชัดเจน หลีกเลี่ยงประโยคที่ดูติเตียนตัวเอง ('I am not a good person') และใช้คำว่า 'skimming' หรือ 'scanning' ถูกต้อง พร้อมยกตัวอย่างเหตุผลหรือสถานการณ์
例: I prefer scanning texts because I usually want to get the main ideas quickly. For example, when researching for a project I skim chapters to find relevant information rather than reading every sentence.
文法
× I am not concerned myself as a bookworm but mostly I when I have like the freezer I will reading a books that mostly contain like not much contents in that. So it's not it's me.
✓ I don't consider myself a bookworm, but usually when I have free time I read books that don't have much content. So that's not really me.
Use 'consider myself' instead of 'concerned myself'. Reflexive pronoun 'myself' is correct only with 'consider'. Use negative auxiliary 'don't' for present habit. 'Freezer' is incorrect; use 'free time'. Use base verb 'read' after 'will' or simply use present tense 'I read' for habitual action. Use plural 'books' without article and 'much content' (uncountable) not 'contents'. Use 'that's not really me' for clarity.
× I prefer paper mode screen because uh, most of the time when weekdays I use my eyes on screen most of the time because I'm working like an architect. So when I want to relax I would like to read on paper to like relax my eye.
✓ I prefer paper to screens because on weekdays I use my eyes on a screen most of the time since I work as an architect. So when I want to relax I like to read on paper to rest my eyes.
Use 'prefer A to B' construction. Use plural 'screens'. 'When weekdays' is incorrect; use 'on weekdays'. Use 'use my eyes on a screen' -> better 'use my eyes on a screen' or simply 'look at screens'. Use 'since I work as an architect' instead of 'because I'm working like an architect'. 'Relax my eye' should be plural 'rest my eyes'.
× I will read carefully in detail in my working time with the, umm, the important papers, but I will not read it carefully with my, uh, novel in my relaxing.
✓ I read important papers carefully at work, but I don't read novels carefully when I'm relaxing.
Use simple present for habitual actions: 'I read' rather than 'I will read'. 'In my working time' is awkward; use 'at work'. Use 'important papers' (plural) and do not use 'read it' when referring to 'novels' (plural). Use 'when I'm relaxing' for time clause. Avoid unnecessary 'in detail' redundancy; 'carefully' suffices.
× I prefer more on scanning because I am not a good person so I'm not interested in like reading every detail in the books but I love how to like scanning them and see what the result of the thing in that.
✓ I prefer scanning because I'm not the type of person who likes to read every detail in books; I enjoy scanning them to get the main idea.
'Prefer more on scanning' is ungrammatical; use 'prefer scanning'. 'I am not a good person' is vague and inappropriate; use 'not the type of person who likes...'. Remove filler words 'like' and 'how to'. Use 'books' without article and 'the main idea' instead of 'the result of the thing' for clarity.
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