Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Jawabanmu singkat dan kurang spesifik. Sebaiknya mulai dengan kalimat topik yang jelas, lalu berikan detail mengapa kamu suka membaca dan kapan kamu merasa terlalu lelah. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk keterpaduan dan batasi jawaban maksimal 3–4 kalimat.

例: Yes, I enjoy reading because it helps me relax and learn new things. However, I often feel too tired to read in the evenings after a long day of work, so I usually read on weekends or during my commute. By choosing short articles or audiobooks, I can still enjoy reading without feeling exhausted.

提案: Jawaban tidak pasti dan tata bahasa kurang tepat. Jelaskan preferensimu dengan alasan spesifik dan gunakan kata penghubung seperti 'because' atau 'so' untuk memperkuat argumen. Hindari kata-kata ragu seperti 'maybe'.

例: I prefer reading on a screen because it is more convenient and I can adjust the brightness and font size. For example, I often read news and e-books on my tablet, which makes it easier to carry many titles at once.

提案: Jawaban tidak jelas dan tidak langsung menjawab pertanyaan. Berikan kalimat topik yang menjawab kedua bagian pertanyaan, lalu jelaskan situasi spesifik kapan perlu membaca teliti dan kapan membaca cepat. Gunakan contoh konkret.

例: I need to read carefully when studying for exams or when signing important documents because details matter. On the other hand, I don't read carefully when skimming social media or headlines, since I only want the general idea.

提案: Jawaban tidak relevan terhadap pertanyaan. Tetaplah fokus pada pilihan antara scanning dan detailed reading, jawab langsung lalu beri alasan spesifik dan contoh kapan kamu menggunakan masing-masing teknik. Batasi 2–3 kalimat.

例: I prefer scanning when I am looking for specific information, such as names or dates, because it saves time. But I choose detailed reading for academic articles or novels so I can understand ideas and nuances.

× I like reading in screen maybe.

✓ I like reading on a screen, maybe.

The correct preposition for devices or surfaces is on, not in. Also add a comma before 'maybe' to reflect natural speech pause. Suggestion: use 'on a screen' or 'on screens'.

× Maybe when quit, but I don't know.

✓ Maybe when I'm quiet, but I don't know.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb and uses 'quit' incorrectly. Likely intent is 'when I'm quiet' meaning when the student is not speaking or relaxed. Use subject + verb (I am) and the adjective quiet. Suggestion: use 'when I'm quiet' or 'when I'm relaxed'.

× Actually, I like watch a movie.

✓ Actually, I like to watch a movie.

After 'like' either the gerund (watching) or the infinitive (to watch) is required. The base form 'watch' without to is incorrect here. Use 'I like to watch' or 'I like watching'. Also 'a movie' fits singular preference. Suggestion: 'I like watching movies.' or 'I like to watch a movie.'