Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Begin with a concise topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give two specific supporting points with brief explanations. Avoid repetition (e.g., "feel more comfortable" and "make me relax" are similar). Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, "because" and "and").

例: Yes, I enjoy reading because it helps me relax and expand my knowledge. For example, reading fiction helps me unwind after a long day, while non-fiction teaches me new facts and perspectives.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence and use correct grammar for preferences ("I prefer reading on a screen"). Give one or two specific reasons with brief examples, and use linking words like "because" and "so". Improve sentence structure and verb forms.

例: I prefer reading on a screen because it is more convenient and portable. For instance, I can read articles on my phone during my commute, so I don’t need to carry physical books.

提案: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence covering both parts (when careful and when not). Correct grammar and finish incomplete thoughts. Provide specific examples and reasons, using linking words such as "because" and "whereas" to contrast situations.

例: You need to read carefully when signing legal documents or contracts because small clauses can have important consequences. Whereas when reading light fiction for pleasure, you can skim sections or skip passages that aren’t interesting.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence using correct phrasing ("I prefer detailed reading"). Explain why with specific reasons and an example, and use linking words like "because" and "for example". Avoid awkward phrasing such as "let us know what is talking about."

例: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand complex ideas and notice important facts. For example, when studying for exams I read textbooks slowly and take notes to remember key points.

× Yes, because reading can let me feel more comfortable and make me relax, and it can improve my knowledge.

✓ Yes, because reading makes me feel more comfortable and helps me relax, and it can improve my knowledge.

The original uses 'can let me feel' and 'make me relax', which are unnatural verb constructions. Replace 'can let me feel' with the simple present 'makes me feel' (present tense habit) and 'make me relax' with 'helps me relax' for correct collocation. This keeps the sentence in the present simple to describe a habitual preference. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I more prefer read on a screen because I can read it everywhere and it is more convenient than the paper.

✓ I prefer to read on a screen because I can read anywhere and it is more convenient than paper.

'More prefer' is incorrect; 'prefer' already expresses comparison so do not add 'more'. Use the infinitive 'prefer to read' or 'prefer reading'. Also 'read it everywhere' should be 'read anywhere' (no object needed), and 'the paper' should be 'paper' (generic). Corrects word order and article usage. Grammar problem type ID:1

× When you are signing some contract, you need to read carefully to all those terms and when you are reading the. Reference book you can't just read.

✓ When you sign a contract, you need to read all the terms carefully, and when you read a reference book you can't just skim it.

Use simple present 'sign' for general advice rather than progressive 'are signing'. 'Some contract' should be 'a contract' (article error). 'Read carefully to all those terms' is wrong preposition and word order — use 'read all the terms carefully'. The sentence 'when you are reading the. Reference book you can't just read.' has punctuation and fragment errors; combine into 'when you read a reference book you can't just skim it' to convey intended meaning and correct verb choice ('skim' fits context). Grammar problem type ID:22

× I more prefer detailed reading because detail reading can let us know what is talking about and let us understand the details in reading.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because detailed reading helps us understand what the text is about and lets us grasp the details.

Again 'more prefer' is incorrect; use 'prefer'. 'Detail reading' should be 'detailed reading'. 'Can let us know what is talking about' is ungrammatical — use 'helps us understand what the text is about'. Use 'lets us grasp the details' instead of 'let us understand the details in reading'. Maintain present simple for habitual preference and correct noun/verb collocations. Grammar problem type ID:1