Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答需要更自然、语法更准确并且更直接。注意主谓一致、代词和动词形式（例如“I’m not the kind of person who likes to read”）。最好用一到两句直接回答问题，然后用一到两句具体说明原因或替代习惯，保持总句数不超过五句。

例: Not really. I'm not the kind of person who enjoys reading much; in my daily life I prefer watching videos on YouTube or other platforms because they are more convenient and visually engaging.

提案: 答案表达了个人偏好并给出原因，但句子结构和用词需要更准确、简洁。注意时态和单复数（例如“reading on paper makes me feel”），避免冗长重复。可以用连接词（because, and, also）组织两到三句回答。

例: I prefer reading on paper because the smell and feel of a new book make me feel comfortable. Also, reading a physical book creates a cozy atmosphere that helps me concentrate better.

提案: 回答不够连贯且语法错误较多，表达也不完整（句子未完）。需要先给出直接回答，然后用清晰的对比说明两种情况，并使用连接词（for example, however）。提供具体情境和原因，避免含糊不清。

例: I need to read carefully when I study textbooks or do tests because I must understand details and avoid mistakes. However, when I read fiction or sci‑fi for fun, I usually read quickly to follow the plot and finish the story faster.

提案: 回答太简短且没有具体内容。应给出明确立场并解释在何种情境下选择不同方式，使用连词和具体例子。保持一到三句，内容要具体。

例: It depends. For finding specific information, I prefer scanning because it's faster; but when I need to understand an article or learn something new, I choose detailed reading to grasp the meaning and nuances.

× Actually I'm not such type of person who likes you read very much.

✓ Actually I'm not the kind of person who likes to read very much.

错误类型：代词/短语使用不当。解析：原句中“such type of person”搭配不自然，应为“the kind of person”；“who likes you read”语法错误，应该用不定式“to read”或从句“who likes reading”。建议：使用固定搭配“the kind of person who...”并用“不定式”或动名词构成动词短语。

× In my daily life I prefer watch videos on YouTube or other stations.

✓ In my daily life I prefer to watch videos on YouTube or on other platforms.

错误类型：动词结构/时态问题。解析：动词“prefer”后通常接不定式“to watch”或动名词“watching”；原句缺少介词“to”。另外“stations”用词不当，指网站或平台用“platforms”。建议：使用“prefer to do sth.”或“prefer doing sth.”并使用更合适的名词。

× I prefer to read on paper because you know the smell of new books and the touch of the paper that really makes me feel comfortable and also reading in paper make me feel a warm and good scenery.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because the smell of new books and the touch of the paper really make me feel comfortable; reading on paper also makes me feel warm and gives me pleasant impressions.

错误类型：介词使用不当和主谓一致。解析：应使用介词短语“reading on paper”而不是“in paper”；“the smell... and the touch...”是复数主语，谓语应为“make”而非“makes”；“reading... make me feel a warm and good scenery”表达混乱，使用不当的名词“scenery”。建议：将句子拆成短句，确保介词正确，并使主谓一致，改用“gives me pleasant impressions”更自然。

× Well, I am doing a reading text I need to read really carefully.

✓ Well, when I am doing a reading test, I need to read really carefully.

错误类型：句子结构错误。解析：原句缺少连词或从属结构，且“reading text”应为“reading test”。建议：使用时间状语从句“when I am doing...”来连接两部分，并纠正单词拼写。

× However, in the other hand when I was reading a science fiction or other stories, I prefer to read really fast because I want to know the whole story and whole plot of it and also sometimes when I feel the sentence is really.

✓ However, on the other hand, when I read science fiction or other stories, I prefer to read quickly because I want to know the whole story and plot; sometimes I skim when a sentence seems unimportant.

错误类型：连词/短语使用不当和句子不完整。解析：固定短语应为“on the other hand”，不是“in the other hand”；时态不一致，口语中常用一般现在时描述习惯性动作，故用“when I read”；“read really fast”用“read quickly”更正式；句尾“不完整（when I feel the sentence is really.）”需补全意图，改为“skim when a sentence seems unimportant”。建议：使用正确短语“on the other hand”，保持时态一致，补全不完整的从句。

× Well, that depends, Uh.

✓ Well, that depends.

错误类型：动词+ -ing 形式/句子冗余。解析：原句“Uh”为口语填充词，可删除以使回答更简洁；“that depends”本身完整且时态合适。建议：在正式回答中避免冗余填充词，保持简洁明了。