Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然、语法更准确，并用一到两句具体细节支持观点。避免重复词（例如“concentrate, concentration”），并把复数和单数一致（people → person）。可以在话题句后用连接词展开原因或举例。

例: I don't enjoy reading very much because it requires a lot of concentration. For example, when I try to read a novel I often get distracted by my phone, so I rarely finish long books.

提案: 回答需要更清晰的表达和更准确的词汇（例如 'strain my eyes' 而不是 'found screens in my eyes'；'harder to concentrate' 而不是 'harder to comment it'）。用一两句具体原因或例子支持观点，并使用连接词提高连贯性。

例: I prefer reading on paper because screens tend to strain my eyes and make it harder to concentrate. For instance, when I read articles on my phone I often blink a lot and stop after a few minutes, but I can read a printed book for longer.

提案: 结构清晰但可更自然，避免语法错误（例如 'less careful' → 'less carefully'）。用连接词（such as, whereas）并加具体例子说明何时需要细读与泛读。

例: You need to read carefully during exams to avoid missing key details, for example when answering comprehension questions. Whereas in your free time you can read more casually for enjoyment, like browsing magazines or light fiction.

提案: 回答需更准确并用恰当词汇（例如 'scan' 而非 'screen'，'very carefully' 而非 'very careful'）。避免口语化模糊表达（如 'I can just roll'），改用具体短语说明情况，并使用连接词解释对比。

例: It depends on the purpose: if I have to complete exercises afterwards I usually read in detail and focus on specifics. However, if I'm reading for fun I tend to scan quickly to get the general idea.

× I don't think I am a very focused people, so I'm not good at reading.

✓ I don't think I am a very focused person, so I'm not good at reading.

原句使用了複數名詞 people 來指代單一個體，與主語 I 不一致。應該用單數名詞 person 表示“（一個）人”。建議記住 people 用於復數，person 用於單數。

× I think reading needs a lot of energy and concentration, concentrate, concentration.

✓ I think reading needs a lot of energy and concentration.

句中重複使用單詞 concentrate, concentration 顯得冗餘且結構混亂。應保持名詞形式 concentration 表達“專注”，去掉多餘詞語以簡潔表達。

× I prefer reading on paper, I found screens in my eyes and make it harder to comment it, while paper feels more comfortable and hardly focus on the text.

✓ I prefer reading on paper. I find screens hurt my eyes and make it harder to concentrate, while paper feels more comfortable and helps me focus on the text.

原句存在多處問題：1) 時態和主語一致性錯誤（found 應為現在時 find，因為在表達習慣）；2) 短語 screens in my eyes 用法不當，應說 hurt my eyes 或 strain my eyes；3) make it harder to comment it 用法錯誤，comment 用錯動詞且多餘的代詞 it 不必要；4) hardly focus 用法錯誤，hardly 意味著“幾乎不”，與語境不符，應為 help/lets me focus 或 enable me to focus。以上改正使用現在時和恰當的動詞短語。

× If it is in the exam, I think we need to read really carefully in order not to miss any important point, but if in the spare time we can read less careful and just have fun.

✓ If it is in the exam, I think we need to read really carefully in order not to miss any important points, but in our spare time we can read less carefully and just have fun.

原句錯誤包括：1) important point 應為複數 important points（多處要點）；屬於單複數問題；2) less careful 中形容詞用法錯誤，應使用副詞 less carefully 修飾動詞 read；3) 結構上 in the spare time 更自然為 in our spare time。已將動詞時態保持為一般現在以表習慣。

× It depends on different situations if you need to finish a lot of practice after reading. I need to screen very careful and focus on the details.

✓ It depends on the situation. If you need to finish a lot of practice after reading, I need to skim very carefully and focus on the details.

原句問題：1) depends on different situations 表達冗長且搭配不當，通常用 depends on the situation 或 depends on the circumstances；2) screen 用法錯誤，應為 skim（略讀）或 scan（快速瀏覽），screen 通常指篩選或顯示器；3) very careful 為形容詞短語，應用副詞 very carefully 修飾動詞；4) 調整句子順序使條件句更清晰。以上均改為合適動詞形式和副詞。

× But it is just for fun, I can just roll.

✓ But if it's just for fun, I can just relax.

原句結構和詞彙用法不當：1) it is just for fun 前面加 if 更符合上下文條件句；2) I can just roll 用法口語且意義不明，roll 在此處不合適，應用 relax（放鬆）或 take it easy（隨便看看）更清楚；3) 維持時態和語境一致。