Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more grammatical, concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and articles, and limit to 2–4 sentences. Add one specific detail about what you read and how often to enrich the answer. Use linking words like “but” appropriately.

例: Yes, I enjoy reading. I usually read short stories and novels once or twice a week, but I spend most of my free time doing arts and crafts, which I find more relaxing.

提案: Make the answer grammatically correct and concise. Use a clear reason and one supporting detail. Replace phrases like “according to me” with “in my opinion” and correct verb forms (e.g., “prevents”).

例: I prefer to read on paper in my opinion because it is better for my eyes and helps prevent strain; I also find paper more comfortable and familiar for long reading sessions.

提案: Organize into a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details with better grammar. Use linking words like “when” and “while” and provide a concrete example of a situation requiring careful reading.

例: I need to read carefully when the information affects my qualifications or benefits, such as application forms or job descriptions, because small details matter; for everyday news or casual posts I usually skim.

提案: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and a specific example. Use linking words like “because” and correct phrasing (e.g., “related to my interests or career”). Keep it concise and natural-sounding.

例: I usually prefer scanning because much information is not relevant to my interests or career; however, I read in detail when the material is important, such as research for a project or official documents.

× Sometime I read this story, book or novel, but I spend my most of the time with my hobbies.

✓ Sometimes I read stories, books, or novels, but I spend most of my time on my hobbies.

The sentence has pluralization and article errors. 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' (frequency adverb). 'this story, book or novel' is inconsistent; use plural forms 'stories, books, or novels' for general reference. 'my most of the time' is incorrect word order; correct is 'most of my time'. Also use 'on my hobbies' to show engagement in activities.

× It is art and craft activity.

✓ They are art and craft activities.

The original uses a singular 'It' with a plural concept and misses articles. 'Art and craft' refers to activities (plural), so use 'They are art and craft activities' or 'It is an art and craft activity' if referring to a single activity. Use plural to match context.

× I prefer reading on a paper because it is good for my vision and it is prevent eye strain and it is more usual and comfortable method according to me.

✓ I prefer reading on paper because it is better for my vision, it helps prevent eye strain, and it is a more common and comfortable method, in my opinion.

Multiple article and verb form errors: 'on a paper' should be 'on paper' (no article). 'it is prevent eye strain' needs 'helps prevent' or 'prevents' (verb form). 'more usual and comfortable method' requires an article 'a' before 'more' and 'usual' is better as 'common'. 'according to me' is unnatural; use 'in my opinion'.

× I read carefully whenever information is regarding my qualification, either information regarding my benefits.

✓ I read carefully whenever information is about my qualifications or about my benefits.

Tense is present but phrasing and prepositions are incorrect. Use 'is about' rather than 'is regarding'; pluralize 'qualifications' and 'benefits' for generality. Replace 'either' with 'or' for choice.

× So that time I read carefully it rather than I scanning and skimming.

✓ At those times I read carefully rather than scan or skim.

Original has incorrect word order and verb forms. Use 'At those times' for time phrase. 'rather than I scanning and skimming' should be 'rather than scan or skim' (base verb forms after 'rather than').

× Most of the time I prefer scanning because not every information is related to our benefit or related to our career.

✓ Most of the time I prefer scanning because not every piece of information is related to my benefit or to my career.

'Information' is uncountable; use 'every piece of information' or 'all information'. 'our benefit' and 'our career' should match speaker perspective; use 'my benefit' and 'my career' for a single student. Maintain present tense consistency.

× So I am reading in detail only when information is helpful for me.

✓ So I read in detail only when the information is helpful to me.

Present continuous 'am reading' is less appropriate for habitual action; use simple present 'read'. Add definite article 'the information' and use 'helpful to me' for natural phrasing.