Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct, coherent response with clearer grammar and concise supporting details. Start with a topic sentence stating whether you like reading, then add one or two specific reasons (e.g., for knowledge, vocabulary, relaxation), using linking words like "because" or "and". Keep it to 2–3 sentences and avoid unclear phrases (e.g., "grab me knowledge", "live in the evening").

例: Yes, I enjoy reading. I read mainly to gain knowledge and improve my English because reading helps me learn new words and grammar, and I usually do it in the evening when I feel relaxed and focused.

提案: Answer directly and use clear, relevant reasons. State your preference in one sentence and give one concise specific reason in a second sentence. Avoid unclear vocabulary and irrelevant words (e.g., "food", "suckered"). Use linking words like "because" or "so".

例: I prefer to read on paper because I find it easier to concentrate and flip back to check meanings. If I don't understand a word, I usually note it down and look it up on my phone later.

提案: Structure the answer with a clear topic sentence and two contrasting examples. Use correct grammar for conditional and general statements, and linking words such as "when", "because" and "but". Be specific about contexts that require careful reading and why.

例: It depends on the material. For example, I need to read carefully when studying for exams or when reading technical texts because missing details can cause mistakes, but I don't need to be so careful when reading comics or light fiction because I can re-read them and they are mainly for enjoyment.

提案: Give a clear choice and support it with concise reasons and an example. Use correct collocations (e.g., "detailed reading" not "take reading") and linking words like "because" and "so". Keep to 2–3 sentences and correct grammar in conditional clauses.

例: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand ideas more deeply and improve my language skills. For instance, when I study a topic I read it slowly and look up any unfamiliar words so I don't miss important points.

× Of course I love reading 'cause it helps to grab me knowledge under help to improve my English skills, which is very low.

✓ Of course I love reading because it helps me gain knowledge and improve my English skills, which are very poor.

Original used informal 'cause and awkward phrases 'grab me knowledge' and 'under help to improve'. Also 'skills' is plural so the verb and pronoun must agree. Use 'because' for formal clarity, 'helps me gain knowledge' is natural, and 'which are very poor' correctly refers to 'skills' (plural). Use 'poor' rather than 'low'. Grammar problem type ID:16

× I always prefer to live in the evening because that time I am a refresh.

✓ I always prefer to read in the evening because at that time I feel refreshed.

The verb 'live' is incorrect in context; 'read' fits the question. 'That time I am a refresh' is ungrammatical: use 'at that time' and 'feel refreshed' (adjective) to describe state. This fixes verb choice and adjective/adverb usage. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I prefer to read on paper because it's easy way because if I get any doubt in any food I suckered them and they take a meaning from Google of that word which is easy for me.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because it's an easy way; if I have a doubt about a word I look it up on Google, which is easy for me.

Missing article before 'easy way' (use 'an easy way'). 'Any food' is wrong; context requires 'word'. 'I suckered them' is incorrect; use 'I look it up' or 'I search for it'. 'They take a meaning from Google of that word' is ungrammatical and unclear; 'I look it up on Google' is concise and correct. This addresses article use and incorrect word choices. Grammar problem type ID:17

× Well, it's depend on the situation.

✓ Well, it depends on the situation.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it' (singular) requires the third-person singular verb 'depends'. 'It's depend' is incorrect. This is a subject-verb agreement/tense error. Grammar problem type ID:27

× If we are in a school, we have to really carefully because if any topic we miss, we does not remember but we have to do next.

✓ If we are at school, we have to read really carefully because if we miss any topic, we will not remember it and we have to study it later.

Preposition: use 'at school' not 'in a school' for general attendance. 'Have to really carefully' misorders adverb; place adverb before verb or after auxiliary: 'read really carefully'. Subject-verb agreement: 'we does' should be 'we do not' or better 'we will not'. Also add 'it' after 'remember' and clarify 'do next' to 'study it later'. This fixes preposition, adverb placement, agreement, and sentence structure. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Uh, if we do read some comics, then we do not have to stay focused due to the we read it again and understand the topic.

✓ If we read comics, we do not have to stay very focused because we can read them again and still understand the story.

Remove filler 'do' for simple present: 'If we read'. 'Due to the we read it again' is incorrect; use 'because we can read them again'. 'Stay focused' needs qualifier 'very' or 'strictly'; 'topic' is better as 'story' for comics. This addresses conjunction use, tense, and clarity. Grammar problem type ID:16

× I prefer to take reading because it's the help to understand me better and improve my skills in learning.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand better and improve my learning skills.

'Take reading' is incorrect; 'prefer detailed reading' or 'prefer close reading' fits question. 'It's the help to understand me better' is ungrammatical: use 'it helps me understand better'. 'Improve my skills in learning' is awkward; 'improve my learning skills' is clearer. Fixes article use and word choice. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I always read some topics in the detail.

✓ I always read some topics in detail.

Use the phrase 'in detail' without 'the'. 'In the detail' is incorrect article use. Keep present simple 'read' for habitual action. Grammar problem type ID:22

× If I do not get any meaning of the word then I just search on that.

✓ If I do not understand a word, I just search for it.

'Get any meaning of the word' is awkward; use 'understand a word'. 'Search on that' should be 'search for it' or 'look it up'. Use simple present for habitual action. This fixes verb choice and preposition/pronoun usage. Grammar problem type ID:12