Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more specific and add a brief reason or example. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two supporting details using a linking word. Keep it natural and concise.

例: Yes, I enjoy reading. I usually read when I have free time, especially in the evenings after work, because it helps me relax and learn new things.

提案: Correct grammar and use clearer linking words. Give a concise comparison with reasons and avoid redundancy. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., "depends", "short articles").

例: It depends. For novels I prefer paper because it's easier on my eyes and I can make notes, but for short articles or news I read on a screen since it's faster and more convenient.

提案: Use correct tense and smoother linking phrases. Give a clearer contrast (e.g., "when" vs "when not") and a specific example of careful reading strategies.

例: I need to read carefully when I must remember details, for example when studying for an exam, so I underline key points. However, I don't read carefully when I'm reading for pleasure, such as a novel or a comic, because I just enjoy the story.

提案: Fix pronunciation-based spelling errors and grammar, and use linking words to explain trade-offs. Be specific about preferences and current constraints; avoid unclear phrases like "scoring it".

例: I prefer detailed reading because I like understanding things fully, but these days I often skim when I'm short of time, especially for emails or news articles.

× It's depend.

✓ It depends.

Subject 'it' is third person singular, so the verb requires the -s ending in present simple. Use 'depends' not 'depend'. Suggestion: memorize conjugation for he/she/it in present simple and practice sentences like 'It depends on...'.

× I prefer to read on a paper,

✓ I prefer to read on paper,

When referring to the medium in general, English omits the indefinite article before uncountable nouns like 'paper'. 'On paper' is the correct idiomatic expression. Suggestion: learn common prepositional phrases such as 'on paper', 'on screen' without articles.

× but if I just read something short or the topic,

✓ but if I just read something short or a short article on a topic,

The phrase 'the topic' is unclear and uses the definite article incorrectly. Also 'something short' and 'topic' are not parallel. Replacing with 'a short article on a topic' makes the meaning clear and uses proper articles and prepositions. Suggestion: make parallel structure and use 'a' for singular countable nouns when speaking generally.

× When I have to remember the details, I have to read carefully, especially reading for exam.

✓ When I have to remember the details, I have to read carefully, especially when reading for an exam.

Missing article 'an' before 'exam' (countable singular). Also add 'when' to make the clause grammatical. Suggestion: remember that 'exam' is countable and requires an article in this context: 'an exam'.

× But if I just read for fun, for example reading a cartoon book or a novel.

✓ But if I just read for fun, for example when reading a cartoon book or a novel, I do not read carefully.

This fragment lacks a main clause and is incomplete. It needs a main verb to finish the thought. I added a clause to contrast careful reading with reading for fun. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments by ensuring each sentence has a subject and verb.

× Actually I prefer to detail reading than skinning,

✓ Actually I prefer detailed reading to skimming,

Use the adjective 'detailed' to modify 'reading' and the comparative construction 'prefer X to Y'. Also 'skinning' is a misspelling; correct verb/noun is 'skimming'. Suggestion: use 'prefer A to B' and check common collocations ('detailed reading', 'skimming').

× but these day I don't have much time to detail everything I need so sometime I just score ring it or scanning.

✓ but these days I don't have much time to read everything I need, so sometimes I just skim or scan it.

Multiple problems corrected: 'these day' should be plural 'these days'; 'detail everything I need' is unnatural—use 'read everything I need'; 'sometime' should be plural 'sometimes'; 'score ring' seems to be a typo—intended 'skimming' or 'skim'; parallel verbs 'skim or scan' used; added object 'it' for clarity. Suggestion: watch for plural forms of time expressions, use 'sometimes', and choose correct verbs 'skim'/'scan' for quick reading.