Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan kejelasan ide. Jawaban saat ini agak berbelit dan ada banyak kesalahan kosakata (mis. "explain my knowledge", "learn news idea"). Gunakan satu topik utama per kalimat, sertakan alasan spesifik dan contoh, serta batasi jawaban hingga maksimal 3–4 kalimat. Latih juga penggunaan kata kerja yang tepat (enjoy reading, expand my knowledge, learn new ideas).

例: Yes, I enjoy reading because it helps me relax and expand my knowledge. For example, before exams I read contemporary novels to unwind and non-fiction history books to learn new ideas and background information.

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa (keformalan dan bentuk kata kerja) dan keterpaduan ide. Frasa seperti "Starting from physical tips" dan "take notice and flip figures" tidak jelas. Jelaskan keuntungan membaca di kertas dengan contoh konkret (mis. menandai, membuat catatan di margin) dan gunakan bentuk kata kerja yang benar (I prefer, books help me).

例: I prefer reading on paper because I find it easier to concentrate and remember information. For instance, I can underline important points and write notes in the margins, and it’s quicker to flip back to previous pages.

提案: Buat struktur yang jelas: jawab langsung, beri dua atau tiga contoh spesifik, gunakan konektor logis. Jawaban mengandung banyak kesalahan tata bahasa dan kosakata yang tidak tepat (mis. "The channel or call have seriously consequences"). Gunakan frasa yang umum dan jelas seperti "important documents" atau "medical instructions", dan jelaskan mengapa perlu membaca dengan teliti.

例: I need to read carefully when I deal with important documents, such as legal papers, medical instructions, or exam questions, because mistakes can have serious consequences. For routine emails or simple messages I don’t read as carefully.

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa (tense, bentuk kata, preposisi) dan penggunaan kosakata (scanning vs. detailed reading). Jelaskan kondisi untuk masing-masing strategi dengan contoh konkret dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk koherensi. Hindari frasa tidak jelas seperti "case point" dan "academic articulates".

例: I usually scan documents when I need to find specific information quickly, such as dates or numbers, because it saves time. However, for complex or academic texts I prefer detailed reading to fully understand the arguments and evidence.

× Yes, of course, I enjoy reading a lot because it helps me relax and explain my knowledge.

✓ Yes, of course, I enjoy reading a lot because it helps me relax and expand my knowledge.

Student used 'explain my knowledge' which is incorrect in context. The intended meaning is to increase or broaden knowledge. Use 'expand my knowledge' or 'improve my knowledge'. Suggestion: replace incorrect verb phrase with 'expand' or 'broaden'. (Grammar problem type ID: 26)

× For exam, I often recommend contemporary novels and non-fiction history books to learn news idea.

✓ For exams, I often recommend contemporary novels and non-fiction history books to learn new ideas.

Errors: missing plural 'exams' and wrong word 'news' instead of 'new'. Also word order and collocation: 'non-fiction history books' is awkward; consider 'non-fiction history books' is acceptable but better 'history non-fiction books' or 'non-fiction books on history'. Suggestion: pluralize 'exam' to 'exams' and use 'new ideas'. (Grammar problem type ID:22)

× I preferring reading on paper because I find it easier to concentrate and remember information for exams.

✓ I prefer reading on paper because I find it easier to concentrate and remember information for exams.

Incorrect verb form 'preferring' used instead of simple present 'prefer'. Use base verb with third-person? Here subject 'I' + simple present 'prefer'. Suggestion: use 'prefer' for habitual preference. (Grammar problem type ID:6)

× Starting from physical tips.

✓ I prefer physical books for tactile reasons.

Fragment 'Starting from physical tips' is incomplete and unclear. Recast as a full sentence expressing reason: 'I prefer physical books for tactile reasons' or 'Physical books feel more tangible.' Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments; include subject and verb. (Grammar problem type ID:26)

× Book helps me take notice and flip figures quickly.

✓ Books help me mark important points and flip pages quickly.

Problems: singular 'Book' should be plural 'Books' and phrase 'take notice' is unnatural; 'mark important points' or 'take notes' is better. 'Flip figures' incorrect — likely 'flip pages'. Suggestion: use plural and collocations 'take notes' or 'mark important points' and 'flip pages'. (Grammar problem type ID:1)

× I need to read carefully when the information is important.

✓ I need to read carefully when the information is important.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. Keep as is. (Grammar problem type ID:27)

× The channel or call have seriously consequences for exam, legal documents, academic papers, interaction for medication or contracts is such security and usually slow, don't take notice and read.

✓ Things like messages or calls can have serious consequences for exams, legal documents, academic papers, medication instructions, or contracts, so you should be careful and read them slowly.

Original has multiple issues: subject-verb agreement ('have' vs 'can have'), wrong nouns ('channel' unclear), word order and punctuation, and fragments. Rewritten to clarify meaning: use plural 'messages or calls', modal 'can have', correct nouns 'medication instructions', and add advice. Suggestion: break into clear clauses, use correct verbs and parallel structures. (Grammar problem type ID:27)

× I preparing scanning when I need to find specially information quickly such as data or numbers because it saves time and helps me look at case point efficiently.

✓ I prepare to skim when I need to find specific information quickly, such as data or numbers, because it saves time and helps me locate key points efficiently.

Errors: wrong verb form 'preparing scanning' should be 'prepare to skim' or 'prepare for scanning'; 'specially' should be 'specific' and 'look at case point' unclear — use 'locate key points'. Suggestion: use infinitive 'prepare to' + verb base, choose correct adjectives ('specific'), and appropriate collocations ('locate key points'). (Grammar problem type ID:8)

× However, for complex text or academic articulates, I choose details reading to fully understand arguments and when.

✓ However, for complex texts or academic articles, I choose detailed reading to fully understand the arguments.

Multiple errors: 'text' should be plural 'texts' or 'a complex text'; 'articulates' is incorrect — use 'articles'; 'details reading' should be 'detailed reading'; trailing 'and when' is unfinished. Suggestion: use correct nouns and adjectives and complete the sentence with the intended meaning. (Grammar problem type ID:26)