Reading— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like reading?
受験者
Uh, usually books on my way to the office because I want to gain new knowledge and learn about different topics. For example, I often read non-fiction article or business books to influence my skills.
試験官
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
受験者
I prefer to lead on the paper because I usually, uh, leading, uh, paper book and uh, we can lead and uh, writing something. I think so I like paper book.
試験官
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
受験者
Yes, I do. Uh. Especially, uh, before examination test, so I can carefully, uh, leading our content because it is important for me.
試験官
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
受験者
It depends on my purpose. If I'm waiting for pleasure, I usually scan quickly for interesting parts. But if I need to learn something for work or study, I read carefully because I want to understand the details and gain useful skills.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like reading?
スコア: 62.0提案: 回答は主旨が伝わりますが、文法ミス、語彙選択の誤り、繰り返しや口癖（uh）が目立ちます。また、構造が曖昧で一文が長くなりすぎています。改善点：1) まずは簡潔なトピック文を述べる（I enjoy reading.など）。2) supporting detailsを2文以内にまとめ、具体例で裏付ける。3) 再構成で正しい語彙（articles → articles, influence → improve）と文法（I read → I usually read）を使う。4) フィラー（uh）は減らす。
例: I enjoy reading, especially on my commute to the office. I usually read non-fiction articles and business books because they help me improve my professional skills and learn about different topics.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
スコア: 48.0提案: 意味は伝わるものの、動詞の誤用（lead→read）、語順や冠詞の誤り、過剰なフィラーが多く、話の流れが乱れています。改善点：1) トピック文を明確にする（I prefer reading on paper.）。2) 理由を2つほど簡潔に述べる（e.g. easier to concentrate; can make notes）。3) 単語選びに注意し、冠詞や複数形を正しく使う（a paper book → paper books / a paper book）。
例: I prefer reading on paper because I find it easier to concentrate and I can underline or write notes in the margins. For me, physical books feel more comfortable than reading on a screen.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
スコア: 40.0提案: 回答が短く断片的で、質問に直接的に答えていません。冗長なフィラーや不適切な語（leading→read）が多く、具体例や対比が欠けています。改善点：1) まず質問に直接答える（I need to read carefully before exams.）。2) 読む必要がない時の対比も示す（e.g. for pleasure I skim）。3) 理由を明確にし、具体的な状況（e.g. preparing for tests or presentations）を挙げる。
例: I need to read carefully before examinations or when preparing for an important presentation because I must understand every detail. For casual reading, like magazines or news for pleasure, I usually skim.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
スコア: 78.0提案: この回答は構成が良く目的に応じた対比もあり、語彙も適切です。ただし表現をより自然で簡潔にするとさらに良くなります。改善点：1) 不要な語を減らし文を短くする。2) 例を具体的にすると説得力が増す（どんな仕事・勉強か）。3) つなぎ語を使い流れを滑らかにする（However, when...）。
例: It depends on my purpose. For leisure reading I usually scan for interesting parts, but when I'm studying or preparing for work I read in detail to fully understand the material and learn useful skills.
文法
× Uh, usually books on my way to the office because I want to gain new knowledge and learn about different topics.
✓ I usually read books on my way to the office because I want to gain new knowledge and learn about different topics.
The original sentence is missing the main verb 'read,' causing a sentence structure error. Add 'I usually read' to form a complete sentence. Also move 'usually' before the verb for natural word order. Ensure subject + verb + object order.
× For example, I often read non-fiction article or business books to influence my skills.
✓ For example, I often read non-fiction articles or business books to improve my skills.
'Article' should be plural 'articles' to agree with 'often read' which implies multiple items. 'Influence my skills' is incorrect collocation; use 'improve my skills.' The verb 'improve' correctly expresses enhancement.
× I prefer to lead on the paper because I usually, uh, leading, uh, paper book and uh, we can lead and uh, writing something.
✓ I prefer to read on paper because I usually read physical books and I can write notes in them.
Multiple issues: 'lead' is wrong verb form; correct verb is 'read.' Use base form after 'prefer to' (prefer to read). 'Leading' is incorrect participle. 'Paper book' should be 'physical books' or 'paper books.' 'We can lead and writing something' is ungrammatical; replace with 'I can write notes in them.' Fix subject-verb structure and verb forms.
× I think so I like paper book.
✓ I think so; I like paper books.
'Paper book' should be plural 'paper books' to match general preference. Also combine clauses properly: 'I think so; I like paper books.' 'I think so' is vague—better to say 'I think so' followed by semicolon or 'because' when giving reason.
× Yes, I do. Uh. Especially, uh, before examination test, so I can carefully, uh, leading our content because it is important for me.
✓ Yes, I do. Especially before an exam, I read carefully so I can learn the content because it is important to me.
'Examination test' is redundant; use 'an exam.' 'Carefully' modifies how you read, so place it with 'read carefully.' 'Leading our content' is incorrect; use 'learn the content' or 'go over the content.' 'Important for me' should be 'important to me.' Rearrange to subject-verb-object order.
× If I'm waiting for pleasure, I usually scan quickly for interesting parts.
✓ If I'm reading for pleasure, I usually scan quickly for interesting parts.
'Waiting for pleasure' is incorrect collocation; correct phrase is 'reading for pleasure.' Keep present continuous 'I'm reading' for current activity. The rest of the sentence is fine.
× But if I need to learn something for work or study, I read carefully because I want to understand the details and gain useful skills.
✓ But if I need to learn something for work or study, I read carefully because I want to understand the details and gain useful skills.
This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed; it uses proper condition structure and present tense to describe habitual behavior.
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