Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve clarity, grammar and fluency: give a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and articles, limit to 2–3 sentences, and add one specific example with a linking phrase. Focus on natural phrasing (e.g., “I enjoy reading because…”).

例: I enjoy reading because it helps me learn about many subjects. For example, a couple of weeks ago I read an article about the history of my region, which gave me new insights into local traditions.

提案: Work on natural sentence order, article usage and conciseness: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one linked reason and a brief example. Use correct collocations like “read on paper” and “comfortable for my eyes.”

例: I prefer reading on paper because it is more comfortable for my eyes. Also, I enjoy the feeling of holding a book, and I find it easier to concentrate on printed pages than on digital screens.

提案: Correct repetition and grammar, clarify contrasts and provide specific examples. Use linking words (“when,” “while,” “on the other hand”) properly and avoid repeating words. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

例: I need to read carefully when I study for competitive exams or when I prepare important documents because accuracy is essential. On the other hand, I usually skim simple instructions or short messages if they look straightforward.

提案: Improve grammar and coherence: state your preference clearly, give 1–2 linked reasons using correct forms (e.g., “scanning saves time”), and avoid unclear claims (scanning doesn’t usually improve long-term memory). Be concise and natural.

例: I prefer scanning because it saves time when I just need the main points. However, for complex topics I do detailed reading to understand and remember the information thoroughly.

× Of course, yes, being a bookworm I like to read a different kind of things which because it enhance my knowledge about the various aspects.

✓ Of course. Being a bookworm, I like to read different kinds of things because they enhance my knowledge about various aspects.

Errors: 'a different kind of things' mixes singular and plural and should be 'different kinds of things' or 'different kinds of books'; 'which because' is incorrect connector; 'it enhance' has subject-verb disagreement and wrong pronoun. Correction: remove redundant 'yes', add commas for clarity, use plural 'different kinds of things', replace 'which because' with 'because', use plural subject 'they' with verb 'enhance'. Suggestion: simplify sentences, ensure noun and verb forms agree and connectors are used properly.

× For example, couple of week ago I read about a one article which provide me knowledge about my historical period.

✓ For example, a couple of weeks ago I read an article that provided me with knowledge about my historical period.

Errors: missing article 'a' before 'couple', 'week' should be plural 'weeks', 'about a one article' is wrong — use 'an article', 'which provide' wrong verb form and relative clause should be 'that provided me with'. Correction: add 'a', pluralize 'weeks', use 'an article', change verb to past 'provided' and include 'with'. Suggestion: check articles and pluralization, match tense consistency for past events.

× To be honest, I like to paper reading because it is a comfortable for my eyes.

✓ To be honest, I prefer reading on paper because it is more comfortable for my eyes.

Errors: 'like to paper reading' has incorrect word order and preposition; 'a comfortable' wrong article and adjective use. Correction: use 'prefer reading on paper' and 'more comfortable' without 'a'. Suggestion: learn common verb patterns (prefer + -ing) and prepositions for media (read on paper, read on a screen).

× Apart from this, I like to the sensation of holding any kind of book and magazine in my hand and I easily consulted on my content without any distraction which usually come in the digital.

✓ Apart from that, I like the sensation of holding books and magazines in my hands, and I can easily consult my content without the distractions that usually come with digital formats.

Errors: 'like to the sensation' incorrect verb form; 'any kind of book and magazine' inconsistent number—use plural; 'in my hand' should be 'in my hands'; 'consulted on my content' wrong verb form and preposition; 'which usually come in the digital' incorrect relative clause and missing noun. Correction: use 'like the sensation', pluralize nouns, 'consult my content', and 'distractions that usually come with digital formats'. Suggestion: ensure verb forms match and prepositions collocate correctly (come with, consult something).

× To be honest, I pay a much attention on reading when I prepare any competing competing exam as well as set my document because when it leads to a success.

✓ To be honest, I pay a lot of attention to reading when I prepare for competitive exams or when I am preparing documents because it helps me succeed.

Errors: 'pay a much attention' wrong quantifier and noun form—use 'pay a lot of attention' or 'pay much attention'; 'on reading' should be 'to reading'; 'competing competing exam' repetition and wrong adjective—use 'competitive exams'; 'set my document' unclear—interpreted as 'prepare documents'; 'when it leads to a success' unnatural and tense/phrasing incorrect. Correction: use 'prepare for competitive exams', 'prepare documents', and 'it helps me succeed'. Suggestion: use standard collocations (pay attention to, prepare for), avoid repetition, and keep tense consistent.

× On the other hand, I do not pay pay much attention or reading while reading any kind of instructions.

✓ On the other hand, I do not pay much attention when reading instructions.

Errors: duplicated word 'pay pay'; 'pay much attention or reading' incorrect coordination—should be 'pay much attention when reading'; 'any kind of instructions' odd quantifier—use 'reading instructions' or 'any instructions'. Correction: simplify to 'do not pay much attention when reading instructions'. Suggestion: avoid repetition, use correct conjunctions ('when') and prepositions.

× Well, I prefer to scanning reading because it might save time, so that's why I do not like to detail reading because scanning reading or not only say my time but also help for me to remember a thing long time.

✓ Well, I prefer scanning because it saves time, so I do not like detailed reading; scanning not only saves my time but also helps me remember things for a long time.

Errors: 'prefer to scanning reading' wrong infinitive/gerund choice and redundant 'reading'; 'it might save time' modal uncertainty—use simple present 'saves' for a general habit; 'detail reading' should be 'detailed reading'; 'scanning reading or not only say my time' multiple errors: 'or' wrong, 'say my time' incorrect verb, missing plural 'things' and 'for a long time'; verb agreement 'help for me' should be 'helps me'. Correction: use 'prefer scanning', 'saves', 'detailed reading', 'scanning not only saves my time but also helps me remember things for a long time'. Suggestion: use correct verb forms (prefer + -ing), maintain subject-verb agreement, and choose correct idiomatic expressions.