Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: ปรับให้ประโยคเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น แก้ไวยากรณ์และรูปวลี เช่น tense และคำที่ไม่เหมาะสม ให้สั้นกระชับไม่เกิน 3–4 ประโยค ใช้ประโยคเรื่องหลักแล้วตามด้วยรายละเอียดสั้น ๆ และหลีกเลี่ยงสำนวนที่เกินจริง เช่น “since I was born”.

例: Yes, I enjoy reading. My parents encouraged me from a young age, so I grew up loving books and became a bit of a bookworm.

提案: แก้ไวยากรณ์ของเหตุผลและความต่อเนื่อง ใช้ linking words ให้ถูกต้อง ปรับให้คำกริยาตรงกับประธาน และลดความซ้ำ เช่น 'it gave me a headache' → 'it gives me headaches'.

例: I prefer reading on paper because it is easier on my eyes. When I read from screens for a long time, I often get headaches, so I usually avoid them.

提案: ปรับโครงสร้างประโยคให้ชัดเจน แก้คำผิดและการใช้ article/tense และเติมรายละเอียดที่สอดคล้อง ใช้ linking words เช่น 'because' และ 'however' ให้เหมาะสม ตัดส่วนที่ไม่สมบูรณ์ออกและทำให้ความหมายสมบูรณ์

例: I read carefully when I take exams because long questions can be tricky and missing a detail may lead to mistakes. However, I skim novels for pleasure when I just want to enjoy the story and not analyse every detail.

提案: แก้ไวยากรณ์ของ tense และการใช้พหูพจน์ รวมถึงความอ้อมค้อมที่เกินไป ให้กระชับและเป็นธรรมชาติ ใช้คำที่เหมาะสมเช่น 'their work' และ 'every word' แทนคำซ้ำหรือไม่ถูกต้อง

例: I prefer detailed reading because I appreciate the writer's effort and want to understand their ideas fully, so I usually pay attention to every word.

× Yes, I like reading. I've been in love with it since I was born because my parents always encourage me to read and as a result, I grow up as a bookworm.

✓ Yes, I like reading. I have loved it since I was born because my parents always encouraged me to read, and as a result, I grew up to be a bookworm.

Errors: mixed tense and subject-verb agreement. 'I've been in love with it since I was born' is acceptable but 'have loved' is clearer. 'my parents always encourage me' should be 'encouraged me' because the encouragement happened in the past and explains why you grew up that way. 'I grow up as a bookworm' has wrong tense and phrasing; use 'I grew up to be a bookworm'. Suggestion: keep past background events in past tense and use consistent perfect/simple forms for ongoing states; use 'grow up to be' for result of upbringing.

× I prefer to read on paper because it is better for my eyesight. Moreover, whenever I read on screen, it gave me a headache so I am not enjoy it.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because it is better for my eyesight. Moreover, whenever I read on a screen, it gives me a headache, so I do not enjoy it.

Errors: incorrect article before 'screen' and inconsistent tense/verb forms. Use 'on a screen' (or 'on-screen' depending), present simple 'gives' for habitual actions, not past 'gave'. 'I am not enjoy it' is ungrammatical; use 'I do not enjoy it'. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual facts and correct auxiliary 'do' for negatives.

× I often read carefully when I am doing an exams because sometimes a long question can trick me if I don't read it carefully and sometimes on.

✓ I often read carefully when I am doing an exam because sometimes a long question can trick me if I don't read it carefully.

Errors: 'an exams' mixes singular/plural and article. Use 'an exam' for singular. The trailing 'and sometimes on.' is incomplete and should be removed. Suggestion: choose correct article form for singular countable nouns and avoid unfinished clauses.

× On the other hand, I don't read carefully when I read some fictions which I don't need to understand or.

✓ On the other hand, I don't read carefully when I read some fiction that I do not need to understand.

Errors: 'some fictions' is unnatural — 'fiction' as an uncountable noun or 'some fiction' works. The relative clause 'which I don't need to understand or.' is incomplete and the word 'or' is extraneous. Replace 'which' with 'that' for defining clause. Suggestion: use 'fiction' without pluralization in this context and complete relative clauses.

× I prefer detailed reading because I understand that the writer had put their hard work on writing their books, so I need to carefully read every single words that they written on it.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I understand that the writers have put a lot of hard work into writing their books, so I need to carefully read every single word they have written.

Errors: 'the writer had put' mixes past perfect incorrectly; use present perfect 'have put' to indicate completed actions relevant now. 'their hard work on writing their books' should be 'a lot of hard work into writing their books'. Subject-verb agreement 'words' vs 'word' with 'every single' requires singular 'word'. 'they written on it' is missing auxiliary and has extraneous 'on it' — use 'they have written'. Suggestion: use correct verb forms (present perfect) for past actions with present relevance, ensure noun number after determiners, and remove unnecessary prepositions.