Hobby— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Name your hobby clearly and use the correct verb form: say “My hobby is doing…” or “I enjoy…”. Explain one specific benefit in a complete sentence, and avoid repeating words or leaving the final thought unfinished. Keep the answer focused and use a linking word such as “because.”

例: I enjoy doing calisthenics because it keeps me fit and helps me feel more confident. I also like that I can exercise outdoors without needing much equipment.

提案: Use the past tense to describe a childhood hobby, such as “My hobby was drawing.” State what you liked to draw and explain how it made you feel. Check verb forms—for example, “it helped me”—and use a clear word such as “stress” if that is what you mean.

例: Yes, I loved drawing when I was a child. I often drew cartoon characters because it helped me relax and forget about schoolwork. I found it both fun and calming.

提案: Give a direct answer and add a brief explanation or example. If you are unsure, explain that your interests have changed rather than stopping after “I have no idea.”

例: I don’t think I have one hobby that I’ve kept since childhood. I used to enjoy drawing, but these days I prefer exercising because it helps me stay fit.

提案: Use the natural phrase “the same hobbies as” and explain the difference with a specific example. Replace “quality difference” with a clear expression such as “different interests,” and finish your sentence instead of trailing off.

例: No, I have different interests from my family members. I enjoy exercising outdoors, while they prefer quieter activities, such as reading or watching films. We still enjoy spending time together.

× My hobby is do a calista or do a scene because it help me have a a body suitable for working outdoor and. It will give me some, uh, it give me more confidence when I, when, uh.

✓ My hobby is doing a calista or doing a scene because it helps me maintain a body suitable for working outdoors. It gives me more confidence.

After the linking verb is, use the -ing form to describe an activity: doing, not do. Use is doing for an ongoing hobby. The words calista and scene are unclear in the transcript, so they have been left unchanged.

× My hobby is do a calista or do a scene because it help me have a a body suitable for working outdoor and. It will give me some, uh, it give me more confidence when I, when, uh.

✓ My hobby is doing a calista or doing a scene because it helps me maintain a body suitable for working outdoors. It gives me more confidence.

The subject it is third-person singular, so the present-tense verbs need an -s: helps and gives. Check that the verb agrees with its subject, even when the subject is not a person.

× My hobby is do a calista or do a scene because it help me have a a body suitable for working outdoor and. It will give me some, uh, it give me more confidence when I, when, uh.

✓ My hobby is doing a calista or doing a scene because it helps me maintain a body suitable for working outdoors. It gives me more confidence.

The article a is repeated before body. Use only one article before a singular countable noun: a body.

× My hobby is do a calista or do a scene because it help me have a a body suitable for working outdoor and. It will give me some, uh, it give me more confidence when I, when, uh.

✓ My hobby is doing a calista or doing a scene because it helps me maintain a body suitable for working outdoors. It gives me more confidence.

Outdoors is the adverb used to describe where someone works. Outdoor is generally an adjective, as in outdoor work. Use outdoors after the verb working.

× When I go chime my hobby is drawing be I often draw in character cartoon anymore because it help me reduce chat. It was fun and relaxing.

✓ When I was a child, my hobby was drawing. I often drew cartoon characters because it helped me reduce stress. It was fun and relaxing.

The answer refers to childhood, so use the past tense consistently: was, drew, and helped. The transcript appears to contain unclear or misheard words; this correction uses the likely intended meaning. Use the past tense when describing a finished period in your life.

× I don't have the same hobby with my family member because uh, I have a quality difference with my family member and.

✓ I don't have the same hobbies as my family members because our interests are different.

The standard expression is the same as, not the same with. Use as when comparing whether two people share a hobby.

× I don't have the same hobby with my family member because uh, I have a quality difference with my family member and.

✓ I don't have the same hobbies as my family members because our interests are different.

When speaking generally about hobbies and family members, the plural forms hobbies and family members are more appropriate. Use plural nouns when referring to multiple activities or people.

× I don't have the same hobby with my family member because uh, I have a quality difference with my family member and.

✓ I don't have the same hobbies as my family members because our interests are different.

The original sentence ends with and, which leaves the thought unfinished because and should connect additional information. End the sentence after the complete idea, or add another clause after and.