Hobby— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınıza doğrudan “Yes, I do” ile başlayın ve yalnızca bir veya iki hobi belirtin. “From my perspective”, “to the best of my knowledge” ve “I strongly believe” gibi bu bağlamda gereksiz ifadeleri kullanmayın. Hobilerinizi doğru ve doğal fiillerle ifade edin; örneğin “I enjoy driving and singing” deyin. Cevabı bir neden veya kısa bir ayrıntıyla destekleyin ve tekrarları azaltın.

例: Yes, I do. I enjoy driving and singing in my free time. Driving helps me relax, while singing is a fun way to improve my mood.

提案: Geçmiş zamandan bahsettiğiniz için “I had” ve “I used to” yapılarını kullanın. “Once in a blue moon” ifadesi burada uygun değil; bu ifade “çok nadiren” anlamına gelir. Bir veya iki çocukluk hobisi seçin ve bunları ne sıklıkta yaptığınızı ya da neden sevdiğinizi açıklayın. Cümlenizi kısa, net ve tamamlanmış hâlde kurun.

例: Yes, I had a few hobbies when I was a child. I used to draw pictures and play football with my friends after school. I especially enjoyed drawing because it allowed me to be creative.

提案: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlamak için “Yes, I have” veya “No, I don’t” ile başlayın. “I drawing” yerine devam eden bir alışkanlık için “I have been drawing since childhood” ya da “I have enjoyed drawing since I was a child” kullanın. Yalnızca bir hobi seçin ve geçmişten günümüze nasıl devam ettiğini açıklayın. Gereksiz dolgu ifadelerini ve tekrarları kaldırarak en fazla üç cümle kullanın.

例: Yes, I have. I have enjoyed drawing since I was a child, and I still do it in my free time. It is a relaxing hobby that lets me express my creativity.

提案: Cevabınızı “No, I don’t” ile net biçimde başlatın ve ailenizin hobilerini doğru bir yapıyla açıklayın. “My family doesn’t hobby” doğru değildir; bunun yerine “My family members have different hobbies” veya “My mother enjoys cooking” deyin. Kendi hobinizle bir aile üyesinin hobisini karşılaştırın ve aradaki farkı belirginleştirin. Anlamı belirsiz ifadelerden, “you comprehend” gibi konuşma dışı cümlelerden ve gereksiz dolgu kelimelerinden kaçının.

例: No, we don’t have the same hobbies. I enjoy driving and singing, whereas my mother prefers cooking and watching television. However, we sometimes listen to music together.

× I have so many to be.

✓ I have many hobbies.

The noun hobby must be plural because many refers to more than one hobby. The phrase so many to be is not grammatically complete.

× I am strong strongly in slight to believe that I really love driving.

✓ I strongly believe that I really love driving.

Strong is an adjective, but strongly is the adverb needed to modify the verb believe. The expressions strong strongly and in slight are not grammatically correct in this context.

× I really love driving and to to the to be to the be best of my knowledge.

✓ I really love driving and singing.

After love, parallel gerund forms can be used: driving and singing. The second activity should have the same -ing form as driving.

× I can drive, I can sing a song.

✓ I can drive and sing songs.

When speaking about singing as a general hobby, the plural noun songs is more appropriate. The two activities can also be joined with and to form a smoother sentence.

× Yes, so many I have hobby.

✓ Yes, I had many hobbies.

The question asks about childhood, so the past-tense form had is required instead of have. Hobbies must be plural because the speaker had more than one hobby.

× Yes, so many I have hobby.

✓ Yes, I had many hobbies.

The sentence uses an incorrect word order. A basic English sentence should follow the subject-verb-object pattern: I had many hobbies.

× Once you have blue moon I drawing.

✓ Once in a blue moon, I drew.

The fixed expression is once in a blue moon, so the preposition in is required. The phrase also needs the article a before blue moon.

× Once you have blue moon I drawing.

✓ Once in a blue moon, I drew.

The answer refers to a childhood habit, so the past-tense verb drew is needed. The present form have and the incomplete form drawing are incorrect here.

× From my perspective, still I drawing.

✓ From my perspective, I still draw.

The verb draw is used in the simple present to describe a continuing hobby. Drawing cannot be used alone after the subject without an auxiliary verb such as am.

× I drawing sing a song.

✓ I draw and sing songs.

The speaker is describing current hobbies, so the simple present forms draw and sing are appropriate. The verbs must also be connected with and.

× I drawing sing a song.

✓ I draw and sing songs.

Two coordinated verbs need a conjunction. The conjunction and correctly joins draw and sing.

× I drawing just my best hobbies.

✓ Drawing and singing are my favorite hobbies.

The sentence refers to two hobbies, so hobby must be plural. Favorite hobbies is the natural expression when describing preferred activities.

× I drawing just my best hobbies.

✓ Drawing and singing are my favorite hobbies.

The original sentence does not have a complete and logical structure. The corrected version has a clear subject, the linking verb are, and a subject complement.

× I don't have so one see a blue moon 'cause I will argue that my family doesn't hobby my mom maybe.

✓ No, I do not have the same hobbies as my family members. My mother, for example, enjoys cooking.

The original answer contains incomplete and incorrectly combined clauses. Each idea should be expressed in a complete sentence with a clear subject and verb.

× My family doesn't hobby my mom maybe.

✓ My mother enjoys cooking.

The verb enjoy needs the third-person singular ending -s because the subject is my mother. Hobby cannot be used as a verb in this sentence to express an activity.