Hobby— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答基本切题，但有明显的语法和搭配错误：应说“My hobby is...”，并列动词要保持一致，使用“listening to music”。建议先直接说明爱好，再补充喜欢它们的原因或具体内容，使答案更完整、自然。

例: Yes, I have two main hobbies: reading and listening to music. I especially enjoy reading mystery novels because they help me relax. I also listen to music when I have some free time, especially on my way to school.

提案: 回答提到了童年爱好，但“When I tried”表达错误，应改为“When I was a child”。时态应使用过去时“liked”，而“football and basketball”是复数，后面应使用“they”；“they're so tired”不自然，因为运动不会感到疲惫，应该说“they were tiring”或“they made me tired”。建议用“过去爱好+现在变化+原因”的结构回答。

例: When I was a child, I enjoyed playing football and basketball. I often played them with my classmates after school. However, I don’t do them very often now because I find them quite tiring and I prefer quieter activities.

提案: 回答直接，但“No, I don't have”缺少宾语，表达不完整。应说“No, I don’t”或“No, I don’t have any hobbies that I’ve kept since childhood”。为了让答案更自然并展示内容，可以补充说明童年爱好已经改变，以及现在喜欢什么。

例: No, I don’t have any hobbies that I’ve kept since childhood. I used to play sports when I was young, but my interests have changed over time. These days, I prefer reading and listening to music.

提案: 回答切题，但需要改进冠词、复数和时态：应说“reading books”，而不是“reading book”。“always like”不如“both enjoy”自然。建议先明确回答“是”，再补充你们喜欢阅读的类型或一起阅读的情况，以增加具体性。

例: Yes, my mother and I have a similar hobby because we both enjoy reading books. She usually reads novels, while I prefer science-fiction books. We sometimes recommend interesting books to each other.

× Yeah, I hobby is reading and listen music.

✓ Yeah, my hobby is reading and listen music.

“I”是主格代词，不能直接放在名词“hobby”前面表示所属关系。这里应使用形容词性物主代词“my”，表示“我的爱好”。

× Yeah, I hobby is reading and listen music.

✓ Yeah, my hobby is reading and listening music.

“reading”和“listening”由“and”连接，形式应保持平行，都使用动名词形式。“listen”应改为“listening”。

× Yeah, I hobby is reading and listen music.

✓ Yeah, my hobby is reading and listening to music.

动词“listen”后面通常接介词“to”，所以应说“listen to music”，不能直接说“listen music”。

× When I tried, I like playing football and basketball, but now I don't like it 'cause they're so tired.

✓ When I was a child, I liked playing football and basketball, but now I don't like them because they are so tiring.

问题询问过去的爱好，所以描述小时候的情况时应使用一般过去时。“like”应改为“liked”。另外，“When I tried”不能表达“当我还是个孩子时”，应改为“When I was a child”。

× When I tried, I like playing football and basketball, but now I don't like it 'cause they're so tired.

✓ When I was a child, I liked playing football and basketball, but now I don't like them because they are so tiring.

“football and basketball”指两个运动，是复数概念，所以不能用单数代词“it”，应使用复数宾格代词“them”。

× When I tried, I like playing football and basketball, but now I don't like it 'cause they're so tired.

✓ When I was a child, I liked playing football and basketball, but now I don't like them because they are so tiring.

“tired”通常描述人的感受，表示“感到累的”；运动本身应使用“tiring”，表示“令人疲倦的”。因此这里应说“they are so tiring”。

× No, I don't have.

✓ No, I don't have one.

动词“have”在这里需要一个宾语。“one”代替前面提到的“a hobby”，使句子结构完整。也可以说“No, I don't have a hobby.”

× My mom and I always like reading book.

✓ My mom and I always like reading books.

“book”是可数名词单数，不能在这里单独使用。因为这里是泛指阅读这类书籍，应使用复数形式“books”。