Hobby— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap daha doğal ve dilbilgisel olarak doğru olmalı. Konu cümlesi açık olmalı ve destekleyici bir neden veya kısa açıklama eklenmeli. Örneğin: "One of my hobbies is horseback riding because I love animals, especially horses." Ayrıca fiil ve isim uyumuna (ride → riding, horse → horses) dikkat edin ve cümleleri 2–3 kısa cümleyle sınırlayın.

例: One of my hobbies is horseback riding because I love animals, especially horses. I enjoy spending time at the stables and learning how to control the horse, which I find calming and rewarding.

提案: Cevap daha düzenli ve anlaşılır olmalı; zaman ifadeleri doğru kullanılmalı (when I was a child). Kısa, doğrudan bir konu cümlesi kurup neden veya detay verin. Tekrarlardan kaçının ve tekil/çoğul, fiil çekimi hatalarını düzeltin.

例: Yes, when I was a child I used to play football a lot because my idol was Cristiano Ronaldo. Playing football was tough because we did intensive physical training several times a week.

提案: Cümleleri daha doğal hale getirin: "I've been learning languages since I was a child." Nedenini açık ve spesifik şekilde verin (örn. kültürü anlamak). Tekrarlardan kaçının ve 'language' yerine çoğul kullanın.

例: Yes, I've been learning languages since I was a child because I enjoy understanding different cultures. Learning a language helps me communicate with people and learn about their traditions and daily life.

提案: Cümleyi daha doğal yapın: "My mother enjoys cooking, and I like baking." 'Relaxable' yerine 'relaxing' kullanın. Ayrıca kısa açıklama ekleyin neden hoşlandığınızı ve nasıl paylaştığınızı belirtin.

例: Yes, my mother enjoys cooking and I like baking. Baking is relaxing for me because I find the precise measurements and the process calming, and sometimes we cook together on weekends.

× Yes, I have a lot of hobbies and one of them ride horse because I love animals especially horse.

✓ Yes, I have a lot of hobbies and one of them is riding horses because I love animals, especially horses.

The sentence has pluralization and verb form errors. 'One of them' requires a verb form 'is' plus a gerund: 'is riding'. 'Horse' should be plural as 'horses' when speaking generally. Improve by using 'one of them is' + gerund and plural nouns for general statements.

× Yes, when I chance I always play football because my idol is Ronaldo and his soccer player.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I always played football because my idol is Ronaldo and he is a soccer player.

The original mixes tenses and has incorrect word choice. 'When I chance' is incorrect; use 'when I was a child' to set past context. After that, use past tense 'played' for habitual past actions. 'His soccer player' is incorrect possessive; use 'he is a soccer player.' Improve by using correct time phrase and consistent past tense, and correct pronoun use.

× I think soccer is very hard sports because we train train in this sports physical training sport.

✓ I think soccer is a very demanding sport because we do a lot of physical training in this sport.

There are several word choice and noun number errors. Use 'a very demanding sport' (singular) rather than 'hard sports.' Avoid repeating words like 'train train.' Use 'do a lot of physical training' for clarity. Ensure singular 'sport' when speaking about the activity in general.

× Yes actually it's learning language because I love learning a lot of different language because when I learn language I know one country cultural because language learn about country.

✓ Yes, actually it's learning languages because I love learning many different languages; when I learn a language I learn about a country's culture.

Tense and number errors: use plural 'languages' for general interest and 'many' instead of 'a lot of' before plural noun. Use present simple 'I learn' for general truths. Also correct word order and collocations: 'learn about a country's culture.' Break into clearer clauses.

× Yes, my mum loves cooking and I love cooking bakery.

✓ Yes, my mum loves cooking and I love baking.

Use correct verb 'baking' rather than noun phrase 'cooking bakery.' 'Baking' is the gerund/verb form that matches 'love.' This corrects the pronoun/word form misuse.

× I think cooking dishes very relaxable

✓ I think cooking dishes is very relaxing.

'Relaxable' is not a natural adjective; use 'relaxing' to describe an activity. Also include the verb 'is' for a complete clause: 'is very relaxing.' This corrects adjective choice and sentence structure.