Hobby— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然、句子更流畅，并尽量避免语法错误与重复。建议用一到两句主题句说明主要爱好，再用一两句具体补充最近的习惯或频率，使用连接词如“and”或“recently”。例：先说“I enjoy several sports”然后补充“I've been practicing figure skating every day recently”并注意时态与动词形式。

例: I enjoy several sports, such as tennis and figure skating. Recently I've been practicing figure skating every day to improve my technique.

提案: 句子结构混乱，语法和时态错误较多。建议先用一句话直接回答（过去时），然后用一两句具体说明原因或细节，使用连接词如“because”或“so”。注意使用过去式，例如“I had”而不是“I have”。

例: When I was a child, I had a hobby of dancing because my mother enrolled me in dance classes. I practiced regularly and enjoyed performing at school events.

提案: 内容含混且词汇错误严重，回答不直接。建议首先明确回答（Yes or No），然后说明哪项爱好并给出具体细节（频率、持续时间、将来打算）。避免填充词（uh, mm）和错误词（rain? ring? happened up）。

例: Yes, I have been ice skating since I was a child. I go skating twice a week and I plan to continue doing it in the future.

提案: 回答要更简洁自然，避免重复和口语填充词。先直接回答，然后用一两句对比并解释感受，使用连接词如“but”或“however”。保持句子不超过五句。

例: No, my hobbies are different from my family's. I prefer doing sports and practicing regularly, while my family likes watching TV, but we still enjoy spending time together.

× Yes I have. I have a range of hobbies like tennis, like figure skating, but recently I I've going to do figure skating every single day.

✓ Yes, I do. I have a range of hobbies like tennis and figure skating, but recently I've been doing figure skating every single day.

问题类型：现在时态和动词形式错误。解释：原句中混用了“have”与简陋的回答“Yes I have”不符合一般疑问句“Do you have...?”的自然回答，应使用“Yes, I do.”；此外“I I've going to do figure skating”包含错误的助动词和动词形式，应使用现在完成进行时“I've been doing”表示最近一直在做某事。建议：用“Yes, I do.”作为对“Do you have...”的肯定回答；描述最近持续的动作用现在完成进行时（have/has + been + V-ing）。

× In my child I have hobby is dancing because I practice my dance because my mom get classes for my dance so I think it is my hobbies.

✓ When I was a child, my hobby was dancing because I practised dance; my mom got classes for me, so I think it was one of my hobbies.

问题类型：过去时态及句子结构错误。解释：谈论童年时需使用过去时，如“was”、“practised”、“got”；原句中时态混乱且主语结构不清。“In my child”应为“When I was a child”。此外“my mom get classes for my dance”需要改为过去时并用宾格“for me”。建议：谈论过去的习惯或状态使用过去时，注意主谓一致与代词形式，句子可拆分为更清晰的从句。

× Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood? MMM, I don't know, maybe is rain, uh, for example, I'm going to the ring, uh, twice a week. Yeah, I just keep happened up and in the future I will keep this happened up.

✓ Maybe I'm not sure. For example, I go skating twice a week. I have kept this habit and I will continue it in the future.

问题类型：存在句及句子结构错误（There be/句子主语缺失）与时态问题。解释：原句“maybe is rain”没有主语和明晰含义；“I'm going to the ring”疑为“rink（溜冰场）”拼写错误；“I just keep happened up”语法混乱，应表达“我一直保持这个习惯”。建议：说明长期持续的活动用现在时或现在完成时（have/has + past participle）表达持续状态，使用正确名词“rink”，并用“habit”或“practice”替换模糊词。

× Actually it's no, uh, my hobbies is like a sports practice practice, but my family's hobby is watching TV. Yeah, it's very different, but uh, it's nothing. We are family.

✓ Actually, no. My hobbies are sports practice, but my family's hobby is watching TV. Yes, they're very different, but it's okay—we are family.

问题类型：代词与主谓一致错误及数的一致性问题。解释：原句中“it's no”用法不自然，应直接说“No”或“No, not really.”；“my hobbies is”主谓不一致，hobbies为复数需用are；“it's very different”应指代复数主体用“they're”或重构句子以明确指代。建议：注意代词和be动词与主语数的一致；复数名词用复数动词，代词指代要清晰。