Hobby— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更直接并注意句子结构与连贯性。建议用一到两句概括主要爱好，随后用连接词补充细节，避免冗余和语法错误。例如把三项运动按优先顺序说明并使用正确时态和表达（e.g. “I enjoy skating, playing badminton with friends, and especially volleyball.”）。

例: I enjoy several sports: skating and playing badminton with my friends, but my favorite is volleyball because it’s a great team sport and keeps me fit.

提案: 回答应更自然并注意动词搭配和时态。可先用主题句回答“是的”，然后补充具体细节并使用合适的动词短语（例如“ride road bikes”或“go cycling”），并加上时间或地点细节使内容更具体。

例: Yes, I did. When I was a child I often rode road bikes with my friends in the park after school, which we enjoyed because it felt adventurous.

提案: 注意语法时态和表达自然性。用正确的完成时或现在完成进行表述（例如“I've enjoyed listening to music since childhood”），并将细节合并成不超过五句的连贯回答，使用连接词说明频率和场景。

例: Yes. I've enjoyed listening to music since childhood and still do. I often listen to music at night to relax, and when I was younger I used to listen every day and sometimes sing along.

提案: 回答需更简洁并用连接词说明共同点和个人做法。先直接回答“是”，然后说明共同爱好并举一两个具体例子（如一起旅行的频率或学习烹饪的方式），注意语法和词序（例如“plan to travel during the summer holidays”）。

例: Yes, we share hobbies. My family enjoys traveling and cooking, so I often learn recipes online and we usually plan a family trip during the summer holidays.

× About playing volleyball is my favorite sport.

✓ Playing volleyball is my favorite sport.

原句中以介词短语“About playing volleyball”开头，造成句子结构不完整（句子缺主语或主语位置不正确）。正确表达应直接以动名词短语作主语或省略多余介词。建议把句子改为“Playing volleyball is my favorite sport.” 或更口语化的“I like playing volleyball the most.” 用法更自然。

× Yes, when I was a child I liked road bike with my friends in the park.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I liked riding road bikes with my friends in the park.

原句中“road bike”与动词搭配不当并且单复数不一致。动词“like”后应使用动名词“riding”来表示喜欢做某事，且复数“road bikes”或使用不可数概念“riding a road bike”。建议使用“riding road bikes”或“riding a road bike”。

× Yes, I like to listen to music since childhood.

✓ Yes, I have liked listening to music since childhood.

原句使用一般现在时“like”与表示从过去持续到现在的“since childhood”时间状语不匹配。应使用现在完成时“have liked”来表示从过去一直持续到现在，并且“listen”改为动名词“listening”更自然。建议使用现在完成时加动名词结构。

× Now I often listen to music at night.

✓ Now I often listen to music at night.

该句语法正确，时态与时间副词“now”和“often”一致，无需修改。保留原句。

× In the childhood I everyday listen to the music and sometimes singing.

✓ In my childhood I listened to music every day and sometimes sang.

原句存在多处错误：1) 冠词和名词搭配错误，应为“in my childhood”；2) 副词位置错误，“every day”应放在动词附近并为两个词；3) 时态不一致，既然指过去应使用过去时“listened”与“sang”；4) “singing”在此应用过去式动词“sang”。建议把句子改为“In my childhood I listened to music every day and sometimes sang.”

× Yes, my family members like traveling and cooking.

✓ Yes, my family members like traveling and cooking.

该句语法正确，用一般现在时表达习惯性爱好是恰当的，无需修改。

× I often learn how to cook online and make a plan to go travel in the summer holiday.

✓ I often learn how to cook online and make a plan to travel in the summer holiday.

原句中“go travel”是不自然的搭配，动词短语应为“travel”或“go on a trip”。另外“learn how to cook”用现在时表达经常性行为是可以的。建议删去“go”或改为“go on a trip”。