Hobby— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Постарайтесь отвечать ясно и естественно; начните с простой тематической фразы, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных деталей. Избегайте грамматических ошибок (например, «I enjoy reading books»), ненужных слов (например, «your») и неясных выражений («enjoy my idea»). Используйте связки для плавности: «because», «for example», «usually».

例: I enjoy reading books because they help me relax. For example, I usually read novels about ordinary people rather than fairy-tale princesses. I often read in the evening for about an hour because it helps me unwind.

提案: Сделайте ответ грамматически корректным и кратким: используйте прошедшее время для детства, избегайте пауз и звуков «uh». Дайте одну конкретную деталь (что именно вы делали с куклами).

例: Yes, I did. When I was a child I used to play with dolls and pretend they were a family. I would make clothes for them and create little stories, which kept me entertained for hours.

提案: Дайте более развернутый и связный ответ: если нет, скажите, почему и добавьте контраст с прошлым или настоящее предпочтение. Используйте полное предложение и свяжите мысли: «Although/However» или «I used to… but now…».

例: No, I don't have any hobby that I've kept since childhood. I used to play with dolls when I was little, but my interests changed and now I prefer reading and walking instead.

提案: Не просите экзаменатора повторить вопрос без объяснения; лучше перефразируйте вопрос и ответьте прямо. Если вы не поняли, вежливо попросите уточнение: «Could you repeat that, please?». Затем ответьте: сравните свои интересы с членами семьи и приведите пример.

例: I'm sorry, could you repeat the question please? If you mean whether my hobbies are the same as my family's, not really. For example, my mother enjoys gardening while I prefer reading, and my younger brother likes playing football.

× Yes, I have a hobby. I enjoy your reading books and because they help me relax and enjoy my idea.

✓ Yes, I have a hobby. I enjoy reading books because they help me relax and give me ideas.

The sentence uses wrong pronoun 'your' and awkward phrase 'enjoy my idea'. Replace 'your' with no pronoun: 'enjoy reading books'. 'Because' should connect clauses without extra 'and'. 'Enjoy my idea' is unclear; 'give me ideas' or 'inspire me' is more natural. In Russian: 'В предложении неверно использовано притяжательное местоимение "your"; правильно: просто "enjoy reading books". Словосочетание "enjoy my idea" некорректно, лучше "give me ideas" или "inspire me".'

× For example I usually read a book about non princesses.

✓ For example, I usually read books about non-princesses.

'A book' with 'usually' is odd; use plural 'books' for habitual actions. Also add comma after 'For example' and hyphenate 'non-princesses' or rephrase as 'women who are not princesses'. In Russian: 'Слово "usually" указывает на привычку, поэтому логичнее использовать множественное число "books". Также требуется запятая после "For example".'

× Yes, I have uh, when I am child's hobby and play uh a maid dolls.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a child my hobby was playing with maid dolls.

The original mixes present and past incorrectly. Use past tense 'did' and 'was' for childhood. 'When I am child's' is ungrammatical; correct: 'When I was a child'. 'Play ... dolls' should be 'playing with ... dolls'. In Russian: 'В описании детских привычек нужно использовать прошедшее время: "When I was a child" и форма герундия "playing with dolls".'

× Well, I don't have a hobby, sorry.

✓ Well, I don't have a hobby now, sorry.

Sentence is mostly correct; add 'now' to clarify current lack of hobby if needed. Alternatively 'I don't have any hobbies at the moment, sorry.' In Russian: 'Предложение в целом корректно; можно добавить "now" или сказать "I don't have any hobbies at the moment" для ясности.'

× Do you know my opinion? I don't understand your question. Do you understand me?

✓ I'm not sure I understand your question. Could you please explain what you mean?

The student's reply is disjointed and not a direct answer. Use a polite request for clarification: 'I'm not sure I understand your question. Could you please explain what you mean?' This is more natural and grammatical. In Russian: 'Исходная фраза не связна и не отвечает на вопрос. Более вежливо и грамотно: "I'm not sure I understand your question. Could you please explain what you mean?".'