Hobby— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cần nói câu trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng cấu trúc ngữ pháp đúng (ví dụ: 'I enjoy playing sports and video games') và tránh lặp từ. Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể về loại môn thể thao hoặc trò chơi để câu trả lời tự nhiên và phong phú hơn. Giữ độ dài tối đa 4-5 câu.

例: Yes, I do. I enjoy playing sports, especially football and badminton, and I also like playing video games in my free time. For example, I usually play football with friends twice a week and sometimes play strategy games online to relax.

提案: Cần nói rõ thì quá khứ và dùng câu ngắn gọn, ít tiếng thừa (uh, umm). Trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề (I did) và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: which sports, how often). Hạn chế sử dụng những từ đệm và sửa ngữ pháp 'I had' thay vì 'I have'.

例: Yes, I did. When I was a child I often played football and video games. I used to play football every weekend with my friends and sometimes spent weekday evenings playing simple computer games.

提案: Trả lời cần chính xác về thì hoàn thành kéo dài (have had) và tránh lỗi danh từ số nhiều không đúng ('footballs'→'football'). Nên nói rõ khoảng thời gian và tần suất, và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Sửa câu 'I play the best when I was a kid to nowadays' thành câu rõ ràng hơn.

例: Yes, I have. I've played football since I was a child and I still play it now. I started when I was seven and I usually train twice a week, which helped me improve a lot over the years.

提案: Cần trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc, tránh âm ừ và từ thừa. Giải thích ngắn gọn lý do khác biệt và đưa ví dụ cụ thể về thành viên gia đình và sở thích của họ. Dùng từ vựng chính xác thay vì từ sai (ví dụ 'other people' hoặc 'my family' thay vì 'autumn').

例: No, I don't. I prefer playing video games, while my family members usually enjoy outdoor sports like jogging or football. For example, my father often goes jogging in the morning and my brother plays football with friends on weekends.

× I have a lot of hobbies like play sport and play games.

✓ I have a lot of hobbies like playing sports and playing games.

The student used base verbs 'play' after 'like' and singular 'sport'. After 'like' when listing activities, use gerunds (verb+ing). Also 'sports' is usually plural when referring to sporting activities. Suggestion: use 'playing' + plural 'sports'.

× I uh, have a lot of hobby, umm uh, playing sport and uh, playing uh game beside I often MMM. OK.

✓ I had a lot of hobbies, playing sports and playing games besides I often...

The student used singular 'hobby' but means multiple activities, so use plural 'hobbies'. 'Sport' should be 'sports' and 'game' should be 'games'. Use gerunds 'playing' for activities. Also 'beside' should be 'besides' (preposition) but that is outside this type; focus on plural forms.

× Uh, yes I did when I was a kid. I uh, have a lot of hobby, umm uh, playing sport and uh, playing uh game beside I often MMM. OK.

✓ Uh, yes I did when I was a kid. I had a lot of hobbies, playing sports and playing games; besides, I often...

The student used 'beside' incorrectly; the correct adverb is 'besides' to mean 'in addition'. Also the tense in the first clause 'I uh, have' should be 'I had' to match past timeframe, but that is a tense issue (separate). Suggestion: use 'besides' and match tense to past when talking about childhood.

× Yes I do, uh, my hobby is uh, playing footballs, uh, because it is sport.

✓ Yes I do. My hobby is playing football, because it is a sport.

'Footballs' is incorrect when referring to the sport; use 'football' (the sport) or 'playing football' as a singular uncountable activity. Also 'sport' as a noun here needs an article 'a sport'. Suggestion: use 'playing football' and 'a sport'.

× I play the best when I was a kid to nowadays.

✓ I played best when I was a kid compared to now.

The student mixed present 'play' with past 'when I was a kid' and incorrect timeframe 'to nowadays'. Use past tense 'played' to match 'when I was a kid' and rephrase 'compared to now' or 'than I do now'. Suggestion: maintain consistent past tense for childhood activities.

× No, I don't uh, because I uh, prefer playing games, but uh, autumn, uh, people uh, like, uh, play sport. MMM.

✓ No, I don't, because I prefer playing games, but other people like to play sports.

The student used 'autumn' mistakenly instead of 'other' and used 'people like play sport' which is ungrammatical. Use 'other people' and the infinitive 'to play' or gerund 'playing' and plural 'sports'. Also fix pronoun/reference 'I don't' is fine; main issue is word choice and verb form. Suggestion: use 'other people' and 'play sports'.