Hobby— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然并直接，用一句主题句表明爱好，然后补充具体细节（例如你画什么、什么时候画、用什么材料或画画的频率）。避免小错误（如复数形式）并保持一句话不要太长。

例: Yes, I enjoy drawing with colored pencils. I usually sketch portraits and landscapes on weekends, using high-quality wax-based pencils, and I practise for about two hours each time.

提案: 回答时应使用过去时描述童年爱好，并给出具体活动或原因。避免不连贯或含糊的内容（例如“吃太多”显得不恰当），并使用连词让句子更连贯。

例: Yes, when I was a child I loved reading storybooks. I used to read every night before bed for about an hour because I enjoyed imagining different worlds and characters.

提案: 要用清晰的句子说明从小坚持的爱好，使用正确的时态和用词（例如‘I've been’），并提供具体例子或细节来支持（如具体活动、频率或影响）。避免含糊或不自然的表达。

例: Yes, I've been interested in cooking since I was a child. My parents taught me simple recipes, so I often help prepare family meals and try new dishes at least once a week.

提案: 回答应直接说明是否与家人爱好相同，并给出具体比较和说明（比如共同参与的活动或不同之处）。不要使用模糊或不恰当的词语，确保句子完整且有支持细节。

例: Yes, to some extent. My family and I all enjoy hiking, so we go on a day hike together every month, but I also like painting while my sister prefers photography.

× Yes, of course, my hobby is painting with my color pencil.

✓ Yes, of course. My hobby is painting with my colored pencils.

句子中有几处问题：1) “my color pencil” 用法不自然，應使用複數或形容詞形式。應改為 “colored pencils” 或 “a colored pencil”，因為通常畫畫會用多支彩色鉛筆。2) 句子分成兩個獨立短句更符合書寫慣例（用句號分開）。建議改為 “My hobby is painting with my colored pencils.” 或 “My hobby is painting with a colored pencil.” 根據所指的一支或多支選擇單複數。

× Yes, my hobby is eating too much everyday and sleep early and wake up later.

✓ Yes. As a child I used to eat too much every day, sleep early and wake up late.

原句時態和動詞形式不一致：1) 問題是在問“當你是孩子時有沒有興趣”，所以應使用過去時（used to / past tense）。2) “everyday” 應為副詞短語 “every day”。3) 動詞並列時需保持時態一致，原句 “eat ... and sleep ... and wake up” 應統一為過去式或用 “used to” 加原形。4) “wake up later” 意義不明，應為 “wake up late”（晚起）。建議使用 “As a child I used to ...” 或直接改為過去時態。

× Yes, that's be and that is probably being as a foodie and sleeper.

✓ Yes, that's true — I have probably always been a foodie and a late sleeper.

問題包括：1) “that's be” 是不正確的動詞形式，應為 “that's true” 或 “that is” 加形容詞/名詞。2) “that is probably being as a foodie and sleeper” 中 “being as” 用法錯誤，應用 “have been” 或 “always been” 表示從小到現在的狀態。3) “sleeper” 用法在此不自然，應改為 “a late sleeper” 表示習慣性晚睡。建議使用現在完成或現在完成進行（have been）來表達從童年延續到現在的習慣。

× Yes, I like to **** others.

✓ Yes, I like to tease others. (If the intended verb is different, replace **** with the correct verb: e.g., “help others”, “teach others”.)

原句中 “****” 代表未填動詞，導致句子不完整。需要填入一個適當的動詞以完成句子。根據問題 “Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?” 回答應該明確表達是否有相同的愛好，例如 “Yes, I like to do the same things as my family” 或具體動詞如 “tease others / help others / teach others”。此外，保持動詞不定式結構 “like to + 動詞”。請根據實際意思填入合適動詞。