Hobby— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer grammatical, concise, and add one specific detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a reason and an example using a linking word (e.g., "because" or "so"). Avoid unnecessary words and keep it under five sentences.

例: Yes — I play the guitar in my free time because it helps me relax and take a break from social media. For example, I often practice for 30 minutes after dinner to unwind and improve a song I’m learning.

提案: Answer directly and correct tense and word order. Use a linking word to compare past and present, and give a brief supporting detail about how you practised as a child.

例: Yes, I did. I played the guitar as a child too, and I used to practise every weekend with my uncle, so I developed basic skills early on.

提案: Fix grammar and complete the sentence. State the hobby clearly, then add a specific detail about who you played with or how often you played. Use one linking word if you expand the idea.

例: Yes — I’ve played basketball since I was a child. I used to play with my neighbourhood friends every Saturday, which helped me stay active and learn teamwork.

提案: Give a fuller answer: say whether you share hobbies and provide a short reason or example. Use one supporting detail to make the response informative and natural.

例: Yes, to some extent. For instance, my brother and I both enjoy playing guitar, so we often learn songs together on weekends.

× Yes I do, I usually play in guitar cause it's helped me to relax and stay away from social media.

✓ Yes, I do. I usually play the guitar because it helps me to relax and keep away from social media.

Errors: 'play in guitar' is incorrect preposition use; correct is 'play the guitar' (instrument uses article 'the'). 'cause' is informal and should be 'because'. 'it's helped' mixes present perfect with intended habitual meaning; use simple present 'it helps'. 'stay away from' is acceptable but 'keep away from' or 'stay off' fits better. Suggestion: use 'play the guitar' and simple present for habitual actions.

× Yes, I have actually the same with the with now it is playing guitar.

✓ Yes, I actually have the same hobby now; it is playing the guitar.

Errors: word order and article use. 'I have actually the same with the with now' is ungrammatical. Use 'I actually have the same hobby now'. 'playing guitar' should be 'playing the guitar' for the instrument. Suggestion: keep clear subject-verb-object order and include 'the' before instruments.

× Yes, I have is the playing basketball with my.

✓ Yes, I have. I used to play basketball when I was a child.

Errors: the sentence is fragmented and contains extra verbs ('have is the playing') and an incomplete phrase 'with my.' The question asked about a hobby since childhood; a clear reply is 'I used to play basketball when I was a child' or 'Yes, I have; I played basketball as a child.' Suggestion: choose a coherent tense (past for childhood) and complete object phrases.

× Yes.

✓ Yes, I do.

Error: one-word reply 'Yes.' is short but not incorrect; however to answer 'Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?' a full response 'Yes, I do.' is preferred to show possession. Suggestion: use 'Yes, I do' or 'No, I don't' to respond to yes/no questions clearly.