Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayın; “Okay” gibi gereksiz bir başlangıç yapmayın. “Enjoy” fiilinden sonra “chatting” kullanılır, “enjoying with chatting” denmez. “A lot of topics” yerine birkaç konu örneği vererek cevabınızı daha doğal ve belirgin hâle getirin.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. We talk about school, our hobbies, and what we plan to do at the weekend.

提案: “Talk about my friends about” ifadesi dilbilgisi açısından hatalı; “talk with my friends about” kullanın. “It’s helped us to enjoy our time” yerine daha doğal bir neden belirtin. Örnek verirken “what’s going on in class” ifadesini kullanın ve cümleleri “For example” ile bağlayın.

例: I usually chat with my friends about our free-time activities and school. For example, we talk about upcoming exams or what’s going on in class. It’s a nice way to relax and catch up with each other.

提案: Tercihinizi ilk cümlede açıkça belirtin ve “just” ile “only” sözcüklerini birlikte kullanarak tekrara düşmeyin. Grup sohbetinin neden size gürültülü geldiğini kısa ve net biçimde açıklayın. “One friends chat” yerine “a one-to-one conversation” veya “chatting with one friend” deyin.

例: I prefer chatting with one friend at a time because the conversation feels more private. In a group, people can talk over one another, which can be distracting. I find one-to-one conversations more comfortable and relaxed.

提案: “Face-to-face” ifadesini sıfat veya zarf olarak tireyle kullanın. “It’s helped me” yerine genel tercihinizi anlatırken “It helps me” deyin. “I’m not really keen on” yapısını kullanın ve “it’s more way” gibi anlaşılmayan kısmı, yüz yüze iletişimin neden daha iyi olduğunu açıklayan net bir ifadeyle değiştirin.

例: I prefer communicating face-to-face because I can see people’s expressions and understand how they feel. It also feels more personal than messaging on social media. I’m not particularly keen on chatting online.

提案: Cevabınız doğrudan ve anlaşılır; ancak “always” sözcüğünü tekrarlamayın. “We are always solved” dilbilgisi açısından yanlış; “we usually solve our problems by talking” şeklinde kullanın. Anlaşmazlıkları nasıl çözdüğünüzü tek, net bir cümleyle açıklayın.

例: I sometimes disagree with my friends, but we rarely have serious arguments. We try to understand each other’s feelings and talk about the problem calmly. Usually, we can work things out that way.

× Okay yes I'm really enjoying with chatting with my friends.

✓ Okay, yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends.

Enjoy is followed directly by a gerund, without with. Since the question asks about a general preference, use the present simple: I enjoy.

× I usually talk about my friends about our free time activities or school because it's helped us to enjoy our time.

✓ I usually talk with my friends about our free-time activities or school because it helps us enjoy our time.

Use talk with someone to identify the person you are speaking to, and talk about something to identify the topic. The original uses about for both relationships.

× I usually talk about my friends about our free time activities or school because it's helped us to enjoy our time.

✓ I usually talk with my friends about our free-time activities or school because it helps us enjoy our time.

The sentence describes a general result, so use the present simple helps rather than the present perfect has helped. The contraction it's means it is or it has, but neither fits the intended general statement here.

× And for example, we often talk about what the class is going on.

✓ For example, we often talk about what is going on in class.

The original clause has an incorrect structure: what the class is going on does not form the intended question clause. Use what is going on, followed by in class to indicate where it is happening.

× So I prefer just talking with only one friend because it feels more private and in a group chat I think it's so noisy but in only private one friends chat, it's more comfortable and relaxed.

✓ I prefer talking to just one friend because it feels more private. I think group chats are too noisy, but chatting privately with one friend is more comfortable and relaxing.

The phrase in only private one friends chat has an incorrect word order and does not form a clear noun phrase. Reorganize it as chatting privately with one friend. Splitting the long sentence also makes the contrast easier to follow.

× So I prefer just talking with only one friend because it feels more private and in a group chat I think it's so noisy but in only private one friends chat, it's more comfortable and relaxed.

✓ I prefer talking to just one friend because it feels more private. I think group chats are too noisy, but chatting privately with one friend is more comfortable and relaxing.

One must be followed by a singular countable noun, so friends cannot be used after one. Use one friend.

× I prefer face to face because it's helped me to see people's expressions and I think it's more way and I don't really keen on with chatting online.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps me see people's expressions. I think it's a better way to communicate, and I'm not really keen on chatting online.

The sentence describes a general reason for the speaker's preference, so use the present simple helps rather than has helped. The present simple is appropriate for general facts and habits.

× I prefer face to face because it's helped me to see people's expressions and I think it's more way and I don't really keen on with chatting online.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps me see people's expressions. I think it's a better way to communicate, and I'm not really keen on chatting online.

More cannot directly modify the noun way in this expression. Use the comparative adjective better, and include a before the singular countable noun phrase: a better way.

× I prefer face to face because it's helped me to see people's expressions and I think it's more way and I don't really keen on with chatting online.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps me see people's expressions. I think it's a better way to communicate, and I'm not really keen on chatting online.

Keen is an adjective, so it needs the verb be. Use I'm not keen, not I don't keen. Also, keen on is followed directly by a noun or gerund, so remove with before chatting.

× So we are always solved our problem with talking.

✓ So we always solve our problems by talking.

The original combines are with the past participle solved, creating an incorrect passive construction. The subject we performs the action, so use the active present simple solve. By talking expresses the method.

× So we are always solved our problem with talking.

✓ So we always solve our problems by talking.

The sentence refers to problems that the friends resolve, so the plural form problems is appropriate. Use problems rather than problem.