Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Сократите паузы и заполнители (например, "uh"), используйте правильную грамматику (например, "to chat", "we can't meet"), и стройте ответ с четким топиком и одной-двумя поддерживающими деталями. Также избегайте лишних слов и повторов.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends. I often talk with my foreign friends online because we live in different countries, and these conversations help me learn about their cultures. However, we rarely meet in person due to distance.

提案: Уберите междометия и используйте связки (for example, such as, because) для логичности. Дайте более конкретные примеры и одно предложение с описанием, почему вы это обсуждаете.

例: We usually chat about schoolwork, current news, and personal experiences. For example, we discuss homework deadlines and share interesting news stories, which keeps our conversations both informative and entertaining.

提案: Используйте корректную структуру: говорите прямо "I prefer" + причина с логичными связками (because, so). Укажите конкретные преимущества общения один на один и приведите короткий пример.

例: I prefer talking one-on-one with a friend because it allows deeper conversation and fewer interruptions. For instance, when I discuss a problem with one person, we can focus on solutions rather than hearing many different opinions.

提案: Уберите повторения и заполнители, используйте точные фразы для объяснения преимуществ встреч лично (body language, tone). Добавьте краткое сравнение с социальными сетями.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it conveys emotions and body language more clearly. Unlike social media, in-person conversations help me understand tone and facial expressions, which makes interactions more memorable.

提案: Постройте полное предложение: скажите, что спорите иногда/часто и объясните причину и пример. Избегайте тавтологии ("argue arguments").

例: Yes, we sometimes argue because we have different opinions. For example, we once disagreed about which study method is better, but after the discussion we understood each other better and found a compromise.

× I have a lot of foreign friends and uh, I need, uh, to chatting with them and I like it.

✓ I have a lot of foreign friends and I need to chat with them and I like it.

The error is using 'to chatting' where the correct structure after 'need' is either 'need to' + base verb or 'need' + gerund in different contexts. Here 'need to chat' (infinitive) is required. Use 'to' + base verb for intention/necessity. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× They uh, so good friends, but uh, uh, unfortunately we can, uh, meeting, uh, in uh, days.

✓ They are such good friends, but unfortunately we cannot meet in those days.

Missing verb 'are' for description and incorrect use of 'so' (should be 'such' before noun). 'Can meeting' is incorrect; after modal 'can' use base verb 'meet'. 'in uh, days' unclear; 'in those days' fits context. Subject-verb agreement and modal+verb form errors. Grammar problem type ID: 27

× We can talk about, uh, other topics, uh, for example about, uh, school homework or, uh, news, uh, what happened with us.

✓ We talk about other topics, for example school homework, news, and what happened to us.

Using 'can' is not necessary; present simple 'we talk' fits habitual action. Also 'what happened with us' is unnatural; use 'what happened to us'. This addresses modal overuse and preposition choice. Grammar problem type ID: 4

× It's, uh, I like, uh, to chatting about that and that can be inform, informatical and funny.

✓ I like to chat about that, and it can be informative and funny.

Again 'to chatting' is incorrect; use 'to' + base verb 'chat' or gerund without 'to'. 'Inform' and 'informatical' are wrong forms; use adjective 'informative'. Also use 'it' as subject. Gerund/infinitive and adjective form errors. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× I prefer to talking only with my friend, uh, for example, with a lot of people, you can't understand all opinions about, uh, some topics, but uh, this one brand, you can just ask him and, uh, give him a question.

✓ I prefer to talk only with my friend. For example, with a lot of people you can't understand all opinions about some topics, but with one person you can just ask him a question.

Use 'prefer to' + base verb 'talk' not 'to talking'. 'This one brand' is wrong; likely 'one person'. 'Give him a question' should be 'ask him a question'. Corrects infinitive vs gerund and word choice. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× I like to communicate face to face. It's, uh, give me more emotions and uh, you can uh, understand your friend, uh, correctly.

✓ I like to communicate face to face. It gives me more emotion and you can understand your friend more accurately.

'It's give me' should be 'It gives me' (subject-verb). 'More emotions' -> 'more emotion' or 'stronger emotions'; changed to singular for natural phrasing. 'Understand your friend correctly' -> 'more accurately'. Fixed verb form and preposition/adverb choice. Grammar problem type ID: 11},{