Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 答题要更加简洁并使用自然表达，避免重复和语法错误。开门见山给出主题句，然后用1-2个具体原因或例子支撑。注意词汇搭配（promote relationships → strengthen relationships；facilitate our to understand → help us understand）。句子不要超过5句。

例: Yes, I do. I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps strengthen our relationships and lets us understand each other better. For example, by talking regularly we can share problems and offer support, which brings us closer.

提案: 回答要更有条理并使用恰当时态和单复数形式。给出主题句后补充1-2个具体细节或例子，如喜欢讨论的比赛、球员或比赛结果。避免重复短语和语音犹豫。

例: We usually talk about football and basketball, especially basketball games like the NBA and CBA. For example, we discuss recent matches and famous players such as Stephen Curry and LeBron James, and analyse key plays.

提案: 表达需更清晰，使用比较结构（prefer A to B）并给出具体原因。避免重复和语法错误，控制在3-4句内，使用连接词如 'because'、'so'。

例: I prefer chatting with a group of people to talking to just one friend because a group lets us share different ideas and learn new perspectives. For instance, during group discussions we often come up with creative solutions that we wouldn’t consider alone.

提案: 要注意词汇准确和拼写（feel → feels；queues → cues；facial expressions；body language；topic/business/partner）。论证要简洁并提供具体例子。避免冗长或不相关的词汇。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more genuine and lets me pick up non-verbal cues like facial expressions and tone. For example, when discussing work issues in person we can respond immediately and clarify misunderstandings on the spot.

提案: 回答要更自然并注意语法（we are talked with each other → we talk to each other；understand deeper → understand each other better）。可给出一两个简短例子说明争执如何解决问题。

例: Yes, I do occasionally argue with my friends when we have different opinions. For example, we might disagree about plans, but after talking it through we usually understand each other better and resolve the issue.

× I enjoy chatting with friends because it can promote our relationships friendly and at the same time it can let me think it can facilitate our to understand each other.

✓ I enjoy chatting with friends because it can make our relationships friendlier, and at the same time it can help us understand each other.

句中使用了形容词、副词和词序不当。“relationships friendly”应改为比较级形容词“friendlier”来修饰复数名词relationships；“let me think it can facilitate our to understand each other”结构混乱且冗余，意思是“帮助我们互相理解”，应改为“help us understand each other”。建议把句子拆成两部分，避免重复表达。

× Actually football and basketball because most of my friends likes watching basketball games such as NBA, CBA and so on.

✓ Actually, football and basketball, because most of my friends like watching basketball games such as the NBA and the CBA.

主语是复数“most of my friends”，动词应为复数形式“like”而不是“likes”。另外在提及联赛名称前加定冠词“the”更符合习惯用法；句首应加逗号使结构更清晰。

× I for example, I talk with my friend, my friends talks, uh, basketball stars such as Stephen Curry, Kobe and so on.

✓ For example, I talk with my friends about basketball stars such as Stephen Curry and Kobe.

原句结构重复且冗长（“I for example, I”），并且“my friends talks”主谓不一致。应简化为“For example, I talk with my friends about...”来表达“例如我和朋友谈论篮球明星”。去掉语气词“uh”和多余的逗号。

× I prefer to chat with a group of people to only one friend because we can share our ideas and opinions and we can promote, understand and let let me think and we understand at the same time.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people rather than with only one friend because we can share our ideas and opinions and understand each other at the same time.

介词搭配错误，“prefer ... to ...”可用但更自然的表达是“prefer A rather than B”或“prefer A to B”。原句还包含冗余和重复（“let let me think and we understand”），应精简为“understand each other”。保持并列部分一致性。

× We can talk with each other and play with it.

✓ We can talk with each other and play together.

“play with it”中的代词“it”指代不明且不合适；如果想表达“在一起玩”，应使用副词“together”。建议使用明确的代词或副词来表意。

× I prefer face to face communication because it feel more genuine and allow me to pick up non verbal queues such as final expressions, body languages and tone of voice.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more genuine and allows me to pick up non-verbal cues such as facial expressions, body language, and tone of voice.

“face to face”应连字符为“face-to-face”作形容词；动词与主语不一致，“it feel”应为“it feels”，“allow”应为“allows”。“non verbal queues”拼写和用词错误，应为“non-verbal cues”。“final expressions”应为“facial expressions”；“body languages”不可数名词应为“body language”。同时在并列名词间加逗号以提高可读性。

× For example, when I discuss pancreatic topics with brand in person, we can respond immediately and clarify points on the spot which helps avoid misunderstandings that often occurs.

✓ For example, when I discuss personal topics with friends in person, we can respond immediately and clarify points on the spot, which helps avoid misunderstandings that often occur.

原句“pancreatic topics with brand”显然是拼写/用词错误，应为“personal topics with friends”。“which helps avoid misunderstandings that often occurs”中“occurs”与复数名词“misunderstandings”不一致，应为“occur”。另外在“on the spot”之后用逗号引出非限制性定语从句更好。

× Sometimes we have some different opinions and we are talked with each other, but after the argument we can understand deeper.

✓ Sometimes we have different opinions and talk with each other, but after the argument we can understand each other better.

“we are talked with each other”被动语态不恰当，且语义应为主动“talk with each other”。“understand deeper”搭配不自然，应使用副词“better”。保持时态为一般现在时以配合对习惯的描述。