Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 질문에 직접 답한 후에 이유를 논리적으로 간결하게 제시하세요. 문법(중복, 동사 형태)과 어휘 선택을 고쳐 자연스럽게 말하면 점수가 올라갑니다. 예를 들어 ‘prefer to call’ 대신 ‘prefer calling’ 또는 ‘prefer to call them’처럼 표현하고, 'it is very tired and complicated'는 'it is tiring and complicated'로 수정하세요. 또한 불필요한 단어나 잘못된 명사를 제거하세요.

例: I don't really like chatting with friends; I prefer calling them because chatting can be tiring and confusing. A phone call feels more convenient and clearer for me.

提案: 질문에 대한 직접적인 토픽 문장 후 구체적인 세부사항(주제, 예시)을 논리적으로 연결하세요. 문법(동사 시제·주어-동사 일치)과 표현을 정리해 의미를 분명히 하세요. 예를 들어 ‘we say usually take care and our information’는 무슨 정보를 주고받는지 구체적으로 설명하세요.

例: We usually talk about everyday things, like how we're doing and any news about work or family. For example, I often share updates about my job and ask how they're managing their schedules.

提案: 선호를 명확히 말한 후 이유를 한두 문장으로 간결하게 제시하세요. 복수형과 관사 사용(‘one friend’ not ‘one friends’), 비교 표현을 정확히 쓰세요. 'give and take the information into many people'는 'exchange information'처럼 자연스러운 표현으로 바꾸세요.

例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because it's easier to exchange information and have a focused conversation. In groups, it's often noisy and harder to follow.

提案: 명확한 주제 문장 후 이유를 두세 개의 구체적이고 연결된 이유로 설명하세요. 어색한 구문('it. Sense of feeling...')을 고치고, 감정 전달이나 비언어적 단서 같은 구체적 이유를 제시하세요.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's easier to concentrate on the conversation and read facial expressions. Non-verbal cues help me understand emotions more clearly than messages do.

提案: 간단하고 직접적으로 답한 뒤에 구체적인 이유나 예를 덧붙이세요. 현재·과거 표현을 정확히 사용하고, 불필요한 표현('I need to last time arguing so')을 제거하세요. 친구들과 의견 차이를 잘 해결한다는 의미라면 그 방법을 하나 예로 드세요.

例: No, I don't usually argue with my friends. We prefer talking about daily life or reminiscing about past memories, and if we disagree we calmly explain our points and try to understand each other.

× I don't like chatting with my friends because I prefer to call rather than chatting because it it is very tired and complicated.

✓ I don't like chatting with my friends because I prefer to call rather than chat since chatting is very tiring and complicated.

The parallel structure after 'prefer' should use the base verb or 'to' infinitive consistently ('prefer to call rather than chat' or 'prefer calling to chatting'). 'Chatting' used twice created awkward repetition. Also 'tired' is an adjective for people; 'tiring' describes something that causes tiredness. Suggestion: Use parallel forms (prefer to call rather than chat) and use 'tiring' for things that cause fatigue.

× Job Core is the more convenient and simple.

✓ Job Core is more convenient and simple.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before comparative 'more' when making a general comparison. Also 'simple' is fine but consider 'simpler' for parallel comparative structure with 'more convenient'. Suggestion: Remove 'the' and use parallel comparatives: 'more convenient and simpler.'

× I usually chat with my friends like something we say usually take care and our information because they knows other.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about things like saying 'take care' and sharing information because they know other people.

Use 'about' to indicate topic. The phrase 'like something we say usually take care' is ungrammatical; restructure to 'about things like saying "take care"'. 'Information' needs 'sharing information'. 'They knows' has subject-verb agreement error corrected to 'they know'. 'Other' unclear—likely 'other people'. Suggestion: Use 'chat about' and tidy phrases: 'chat about things like saying "take care" and sharing information.'

× I prefer to chat with only one friends because it is more easy to give and take the information into many people.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because it is easier to give and receive information than with many people.

Use singular 'friend' after 'one'. 'More easy' is incorrect; use comparative 'easier'. The phrase 'give and take the information into many people' is awkward; use 'give and receive information' and compare with 'many people'. Suggestion: Use correct singular/plural and standard collocations: 'give and receive information.'

× It is uh too.

✓ It is easier for me.

'It is uh too.' is incomplete and unclear. Provide a complete comparative phrase based on context; here the student likely means 'It is easier for me.' Suggestion: Avoid fillers like 'uh' and finish the thought clearly.

× I prefer to communicate face to face.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable. No change needed. Suggestion: None.

× It is easy to focus with our conversation and it.

✓ It is easy to focus on our conversation when we meet in person.

Use 'focus on' not 'focus with'. The phrase 'and it' is incomplete; clarify 'when we meet in person'. Suggestion: Use 'focus on the conversation' and specify context.

× Sense of feeling is more easily and we take the.

✓ It is easier to sense feelings and we understand each other better.

'Sense of feeling' is unnatural; 'sense feelings' or 'perceive emotions' is better. 'More easily' should be 'easier' in this context. 'We take the.' is incomplete; clarify as 'we understand each other better.' Suggestion: Use natural collocations: 'easier to sense feelings' and complete the idea.

× No I don't argue with my friend.

✓ No, I don't argue with my friends.

Context earlier refers to 'friends' plural; keeping 'friends' is more natural. The original grammar 'I don't argue with my friend' is correct in form but inconsistent with rest of answers. Suggestion: Maintain consistency: 'I don't argue with my friends.'

× I like to spend time with my friends but we talk the daily life or we take the past memories because I need to last time arguing so.

✓ I like to spend time with my friends; we talk about daily life or reminisce about past memories because I don't like arguing anymore.

Use 'talk about' for topics. 'Talk the daily life' should be 'talk about daily life'. 'Take the past memories' is incorrect; 'reminisce about past memories' or 'talk about past memories' is better. 'I need to last time arguing so' is ungrammatical and unclear; likely intended meaning is 'I don't want to argue anymore' or 'I don't like arguing anymore', so corrected to 'I don't like arguing anymore.' Suggestion: Use clear present-tense phrases: 'talk about daily life' and 'don't like arguing anymore.'